With This Taveez (4) ch 29, p 134

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INDEX


prologue thread 1 pg 1..




Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3




Chapter 4 and others - on blog
To read: please leave comments per chapter on the thread and then send me a pm.


thread 3


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4842841/with-this-taveez-3-mg-new-ch-21-pg-138-new-thd-link-pg-1
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TEASER


"Aisse kaisse mujhe waha chod ke chale gaye tum", the warrior princess roared at him.

"Kya?" he asked in a daze, water pouring still from his wet hair.

Why was SHE accusing him?

Maine kaha tha hotel jaane ke liye, kissi stranger se proposal paane ke liye?





"Jab jaane ko kaha chale nahi gaye aur jab kuch bolna tha tab chupp reh gaye?" Geet accused while marching around him, " .. and for heavens sake put on a shirt".

He grabbed her shoulders and held her in place before him, "Kyu? Mere room mein aa ke mujh pe chilla rahi ho? Kyu? Mere kamre mein main jaisse chahe ghoomu"

"Mera sab kaam bigaad diya tumne Maan. I was there for a purpose", she said looking at him evenly in the eyes.

Uff! Kitna ziddi hai!! Ek toh sab bigaad diya upar se he is looking at me as if it was my fault?

"Ho gaya na purpose? Kaha se mila yeh specimen Geet? Merishaadi.com ya dulhabiktahai.com pe?", he asked angrily.

"Specimen? Well I guess, specimen ki tarah dekhe toh bhi he is a good catch. Doctor hai, handsome hai, kitni pyari baatein karta hai. And what a proposal!!! Any girl would die of happiness", she wondered, going off in her la la land ignoring the increasing pressure of his hands on her.

"Geet!!!!!"


A/N: Ladai jaari hai.

Ikraar baaki hai.

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hello congrats on the new thread! will be waiting 😊
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Congratulations Avi ⭐️ for the new thread 🤗



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Teaser updated 😃

sorry for the delay.

Enjoying the holiday with family
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Amazing teaser
Sher aur sherni apne asli avatar me agaye and i am loving it 😊
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Jaldi se update karo avi
Eagerly waiting
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Awesome Teaser
Geet is also falling for him
Maan is not accepting
Hilo pata hai vo kuch bolta nahi aur dusre Ko Abhi realise nahi
Let see what happen next
Update soon Avi

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