~~Vivaan and Riha's little world~~SPIN OFF continued/Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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RiVaan's


I seriously had no idea I would make this thread. Maybe I didn't even expect that Vivaan and Riha would be loved by you, so much . I held no assumption even that I would myself miss digging into their lives ever after. So, hence, therefore this thread comes into existence. I don't know how many of you will even decide to peep in because many are extremely disgusted with me right now which at one point is a good thing. I got to know your love for the characters which never even played before your eyes. Visual effect really has an impact I believed but... I didn't really believe mere stories by an amateur writer like me would touch you to any extent even.


But since I got a few comments and pms that touched my heart, I decide to write a couple of one shots on Vivaan and Riha digging into the times I deliberately deleted from my story. I don't know how many, maybe whenever I myself miss them, I'll come up with one. Until the next with PraNushka. I will write because that little while of scribbling helps me fight with my life that's already so hazardous.

Thank you.

I won't PM anyone because I believe many are still angry with me. If you feel like, you will peep in yourself and like. And if you like this post, I'll PM you.

My first OS below.

To those who don't get what it's about,
Peep in here...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Agar tum saath ho!


" What are you doing here? " , Vivaan's jaws literally dropped as he saw Riha push the door of his cabin and get in. Riha said nothing, just grinned, almost jumped onto the revolving chair before his desk and twirled around once.

" I was getting bored at the wards. Just escaped for a while. " , Riha made a puppy face, rested her head on her hands placed on the desk and blinked her eyes three times at a go.

Vivaan stared at her with a frown. And then pretending to be very busy, concentrated on his laptop. " I'm working. "

Riha immediately sprang up from the chair and ran to the immense windows that showed the sea. " Wooowww Vivaan ! You are sooo lucky to sit in this cabin 24*7!!!! " Her face glowed like a kid as she completely ignored Vivaan's showy busyness.

Vivaan frowned more. He shut his laptop with a thud. " Riha ... I have a meeting. "

Riha slowly walked across the window that covered the whole of the west wall of Vivaan's cabin. " I sooo want to have a chamber like this. The sea beside me... clouds above, and green below! You know Vivaan, I ... I want to technically decorate my chamber this way! I don't even know how, but maybe some interior decorator would definitely help. "

Vivaan very briskly pushed back the chair and walked up straight to her. She kept smiling but his brows almost merged into each other.
" Riha.. I ...have... a ...meeting. We can do this talking someplace else sometime else. " Vivaan uttered with a stony voice discreetly.
Riha's face didn't even lose a little of its smile.

" Vivaan, I know you work a lot. And a little while with a stranger would surely help. " Riha was extremely happy giving back his words to him at an appropriate time.

Vivaan took a deep breath closing his eyes as if trying to control his anger.

" Riha! You are definitely not a kid. You should understand that..."

" ...that when someone is telling a lie to avoid you, you should leave them alone. Right?
Riha Menon doesn't follow these basic social rules you see! She's very shameless. "
Riha grinned.

" Lie? You mean I'm l..l..lying? " , Vivaan stammered a bit. Also...his immense anger disappeared for a while being replaced by something else.

" Why? Don't you know that you are lying? " Riha laughed.

Vivaan immediately turned back and went to his seat. Riha stood and watched him with a smirk as he sat and stared back at her with a serious expression.

" Before I came in, I have asked your PA sitting outside Mr! I ain't an idiot. " Riha danced her brow.

" Huh." , Vivaan made a sarcastic sound and stared at the ceiling.

" Come on Vivaan! I believe I'm beautiful enough to not deserve that frown on your face. "
Riha jumped back to the chair and twirled again, twice this time.

Vivaan deliberately looked somewhere else and Riha couldn't help giggling within. Such a kid.

" Okay tell me who's your favourite heroine. "

" I don't talk bullshit."

" hawww! They work their lives out just to make you happy , and you call them that? "

" Riha, I have work. You might be free, I'm not. " Vivaan tried to be very stern.

" Hahahahaha! However you try you cannot shoo me away for nothing. You are no PM of the country. "

" but if I'm not interested to talk to you now, why should I? "

" because you should understand that it's not your wish that will work always if Riha Menon is your friend, ...err...'known stranger' I mean. "

Riha got up straight and went and stood right before Vivaan's chair, who had swayed the chair to a side. He immediately twirled it to the opposite side.

" ohh come on Vivaan!"

As Riha walked to opposite side, Vivaan twirled back to the other side.
" Vivaan! !!!!! "

Vivaan's face now caught a streak of smile as he and Riha repeated this process quite a number of times at the end of which, both of them couldn't help but show their teeth.
Vivaan grinned while Riha giggled, then laughed out loud.

Then Vivaan acted stern again.
" Riha! I'm seriously angry. " he tried to make a serious face.

" Me too." Riha stood in an attention position controlling her laughter.

Vivaan got up from his chair, came in front and stood supporting his back on the bid of his desk before Riha.

" You are hopeless. ", he nodded his head.

" Shut up. " , Riha frowned.

" Why did you drop into my life? " Vivaan raised his brows with a very easy going expression on face.

" Excuse me! I dropped into your life? I ? Seriously? "

Vivaan coughed a bit and then said. " Why did you drop into my office? "

Riha made faces. " because I'm cultivating you. "

" Whattt??? "

" What!!! "

" Riha!"

" Vivaan! "

" Riha!"

" Shut up!!! "

" What the..."

Riha grinned. " Ice cream? "

" What always? Ice cream cake cold drinks this that!! Do you always eat? "

Riha immediately hit his head.

" Ouuchh. "

" You are a bore. "

" So are you leaving? " , Vivaan said smiling ear to ear.

" in your dreams. "

Riha walked on to sit on a couch in the cabin and took up a magazine.

Vivaan's jaws dropped. " Are you seriously going to sit here? "

" Of course. "

" till when? "

" till we walk home together. "

" Rihaaa...you are hopeless!! "

" Thank you. " , Riha giggled.

And Vivaan though pretended to be extremely angry, giggled within.

Kids disturb a lot. And yet look cute. Don't they?
Edited by Penfolk - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I miss them...

😭 😭 😭

Never ever thought vivaan' life was cursed... I really thought rihaa will break it by being together with him and both leading a happy life...

I love your OS... keep writing dear... 😊 😊 😊...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was sooo cute !!! Thank you Kaushi ji !! This Vivaan surely needs a 'Vennela' errr 'Riha ' smack ! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks for update
really miss them .
imaginary ending :1.how unromantic vivaan proposed dreamyyy girl Riha"MAI AAYA HU TUMHE LENE,ZAMANEY KO CHODKAR
AAO SAATH MERE BASAYE IN SITARO ME GHAR,
HAQIQAT AUR SAPNO ME KUCH TO FARK HOTA H ,YE MERA SAPNA HAI SACH KAISEY HO SAKTA HAI "
& then Tadddaaa 😳
2.jerk-rukku & vivaan bonding .
3. ofcourse their dream wedding.
last but not the least u r very good writer ,as u regularly update the story .it seems like watching any series but first time i came to.know ff mein bhi tragedy ho sakti h


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonalisharma1

thanks for update

really miss them .
imaginary ending :1.how unromantic vivaan proposed dreamyyy girl Riha"MAI AAYA HU TUMHE LENE,ZAMANEY KO CHODKAR
AAO SAATH MERE BASAYE IN SITARO ME GHAR,
HAQIQAT AUR SAPNO ME KUCH TO FARK HOTA H ,YE MERA SAPNA HAI SACH KAISEY HO SAKTA HAI "
& then Tadddaaa 😳
2.jerk-rukku & vivaan bonding .
3. ofcourse their dream wedding.
last but not the least u r very good writer ,as u regularly update the story .it seems like watching any series but first time i came to.know ff mein bhi tragedy ho sakti h


awww sonali those lines!!!! Sooo beautiful!
Anyways if at all I ever feel like, I will write such scenes just as an alternative . On demand. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Happy to see you this Story.😊
It was Amazing Start.😊
Riha was so Cute.😳
Vivaan Character was so Interesting.😊
The way Riha tried Vivaan to cheer Up him ,it was so Cute.😊
Riha Conversation with Vivaan was so Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊

PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kaushi, that was such a cute "extra scene" you have written! I looove it when these two squabble. Especially the part where Riha was trying to catch his face and he was just swiveling away from her in his chair, hahahaha, I was giggling. Adorable, I tell ya! Thank you for writing this! So heart-warming ❤️
Edited by emerald39 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OH MY!! 😲 😭 I am late as I was a little held up today!

I would just like to believe that I'm, at least to a tiny extent a reason for this thread! Hehe!

Now you know why I insisted that YOU yourself should write, right? Readers anyway would imagine a lot of scenes. That's for sure. But those imaginations are more colourful and real when the creator herself creates the setting!!

Please keep this going. Keep making our lives better with these.

Death is inevitable, atleast Vivaan and Riha are one blessed couple whom even death chose to embrace together.

This sneak peak series comprising the colourful moments of their life shall mend all the hearts broken in the conclusion! It has now become more like a flashback story!

Waiting for more! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awe thankyou so much for that
Loved it

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