Doctrine of Lapse - shot 9/6 - Page 4

Originally posted by: .rumki.

loved it

continue

Originally posted by: nsharif2017

Please continue!! Love it wish it would come true but we all know CVs don't care about story they only want TRP.

Originally posted by: smileyallora

Thank u sooo much aparna😊😊 haha trust me i had 3 different tracks for same starting and ending yaar and am sure there are much more talented writers in this fandom who might have many more tracks for this sequence. But it still pains that cvs have resorted to this path . Chodo. Its still to be executed, lets hope that it might be good and gets trps😭 desperately trying to be positive😭

Ps. Am still not over how those 2 pinky os flash back 😆

Originally posted by: malose

I loved it
Great job
I really wish that they would have shown this in the show and not a leap and new leads for shivay and annika

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Dont get so much attached to a fictional show...its wat i learnt from ishqbaaz...you know wat...I was a die hard ipk fan and I was so addicted to it and i was too sad when it ended and my IF account is also a result of it...after a certain of time I was too angry and want to get that out of my system and I even deactivated my IF account at 2013

but still I loved that show...again after years i created another account when ipk jashan time...but i was not so active and from 2012 I had never watched another show continously...I also sweared that I don't watch a gul show again but I again fell into the trap yar...I really don't know that it was a gul show...the reason is we all know guls formula...angry antihero with a dark past...and a overtraditional heroine...but here its a angry hero but a normal family guy...heroine was Mordern...No attraction at first sight...no duppatta falling...no fainting of heroine..no dhak dhak...so i don't thought it would be a gul show ...but when it aired..I saw the first episode...Ya i kind of liked it...but i didnt like neither Nakul or Surbhi because I never had seen their previous shows..but i skipped some episodes..but wat i liked it was the show initially was a stress reliever...but when the first pool scene came i got a doubt...i was praying that plz God dnt let my doubts be true...but it was again...from that time I knows it's fate...but still I hoped for the best...I really wanted to quit but I can't...I too depressed with the leap thing...but i really don't want to go to my old state when ipk ended...so now I am beeing positive that...this will be for good...

Originally posted by: ...Nihara...

Excellent👏,pls replace harneet & you write the story for IB,it will give trp if they show like this,if they want to drag the show there are 10,000 ways to gain Trp yaar,but they always come up with worst ideas😭.pls do write more like this,all your writings I have read so far are so creative & interesting in all the generas like romance,emotion,comedy👏you can try writing for the shows if u try & reach them & get offer.If they are smart atleast they should show this after 3 months that Shivay is investigating all this while,so many proofs are there,nayantara,cctv camera,Tia & atleast one of them should reveal the truth soon,but I can't tolerate if he really believes what she told today,😭how can he be so dumb😡she is clearly giving hints like video making in the kitchen for Shivay memories and all🥱.(sorry for ranting about the show on your post)