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Posted: 8 years ago
With Ranveer gone, Priyanka collapsed on the ground and broke into tears, the anguish of grief finally overtaking her. She cried for the pain she had caused her brother due to her immaturity. She cried for the pain she was causing Ranveer and her self. She cried for the hope of love that was not brutally crushed. She cried at the unfairness of it all. She sat there, sobs racking her body till she was drained and no longer had the energy to cry.

As she sat there, drained and almost lifeless, she opened the crumpled note that she had been holding in her palm all along. The note that she had discovered in her purse only after reaching home.

Oberoi baby, on her high horse,
When the scandal blows, her secrets will drop,
When the video leaks, her pride will crawl,
And down will come baby, family and all.

-X


Oh how she had wanted to tell Ranveer about this note and more. About Svetlana's connection to Ippy, about her presence in that party two years ago and what had exactly happened on that fateful night. But she couldn't. Not without comprising O bhaiyya's life, because she knew that Svetlana would stay true to her promise. Just as she had warned Priyanka in that phone call earlier...

Priyanka heaved a sigh of relief after speaking to Ranveer. He would be here soon sang then she would tell him everything that she could now recall about the night of the accident. It wouldn't be difficult for Ranveer to get a hold of Svetlana once he was aware of the whole story. Hopefully, once she was arrested, they're would be some peace in the life of Ranveer and Priyanka as they wouldn't finally be able to put their pasts behind them and think about their future together. She smiled as she fingered the delicate filigreed brooch that Ranveer had gifted her. The man knew how to woo a lady.

Her phone buzzed and, in her excitement, she answered it without checking the caller ID.

"Hello, baby doll!"

Priyanka felt a chill race down her spine as she recognised Svetlana's voice.

"S-ss-Svetlana?"

"I'm glad you remember this old friend," she trilled. "Been getting my messages, I hope?"

"Wh-why are you d-doing this?" Priyanka managed to reply.

"Oh, chicken! If only we could get the answers to all our questions in life. But is life that fair?"

"Why aa-are you ca-calling?"

"You love your brother, don't you? We all do. So here's a deal. Your loverboy has taken Dev in custody. Ask him to let Dev go without pressing charges. In return, I let you and your O bhaiyya live in peace. If not, that grand exhibition that Omkara is planning next month, imagine what will happen if word gets around that he was involved in a hit-and-run? Oh, the drama!"

"Bu-but I can't do ay-anything for him."

"Oh, but I can do so much for O! Watch out for the headlines tomorrow, baby doll!"

"Wait!"

"I knew you were smart."


Within a matter of minutes, her world had once again turned upside down. Now, Ranveer thought everything about her was a lie. Her words, her story, her actions and probably, even her feelings. If only he knew...


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Posted: 8 years ago
These were AMAZING Sarce!!!! :')
I LOVED each and every single one of the updates!!! ❤️
I love how the tension built up between PriVeer, almost like a dormant volcano.
I am so excited to see what you and the rest of the gang have planned!
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi everyone.
I am a huge fan of priveer. You guys are doing a terrific job here. I just loved this story circle. Both the seasons. I started reading this before my class and it was so hard for me to wait for those 3 hrs. Those were the longest 3 hrs of my life. It is expectionally good. Gul should hire you guys as the writers.

Whenever I read an update I just can't wait for the next. I can't express how good it is. I don't have enough words. The loverboy 's rhyme was just epic. I seriously loved it so much.

I don't know why but I just fell in love with this pair at the first sight. Ranveer entry was fantastic. Confidence radiated from his mere presence. He shaked the very foundations of the OM and outwitted the great SSO. He appeared as a villain but won my heart like a hero. Priveer 's first meet was just awesome. I so loved the backstory. It was so unique and innovative. I was dieing to see their story and how would ranveer fell in love with the girl who was responsible for his sister 's accident. The cvs had such a gud plot and actors but they wasted it. At first I used watched ib for shivika but with ranveer 's first look I started watching ib for him and then priveer. I hated it so much when gul completely ignored them for months. I hated their marriage track even more. Cvs completely spoiled ranveer 's character.

However the ongoing track is much better. The scene was so good when ranveer handed over his salary to Priyanka. Still I am not sure how much screen space would give to these two

Never mind. Till there are so many good writers and stories here, I don't need to worry.

I am eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh Sarce, Sarce, Sarce. Come here you 🤗

Do you know how much I absolutely love your multiple posts? It's like one long, long Sunday morning present.

Coming to the update, it was FANTASTIC. Honestly. I loved how Ranveer kept his calm throughout the interrogation and the revelation of Ippy accident through the video footage. I really, really loved it. The cool, calm, yet angst-ridden ACP. ❤️

And another poem! Eeps! Keep 'em coming! I mean, it's sad Prinku keeps getting such threats, but I really want to read more of your short notes 😆😆😆

And the angst! Oh. I really liked Shinde's short POV on Ranveer and Prinku, how the former was just beginning to get something good in his life. only for it to end up this way. And Prinku's breakdown and Svet's threat was so well-written! Poor girl, she is definitely trapped for now. I know we have long planning sessions and whatnot, but in spite of that, I am actually looking forward to how the next writer's going to push this plot forth. This update's totally got me at the edge of my seat.
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Posted: 8 years ago
@AshlynRose
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you like the story so far. We are all trying to forget what the CVs have done to ACP. Hence the effort to keep him as true to his initial appearance/characterization shown on the show as possible. 😊 Join us in writing if you want to! The more the merrier! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hola Sarcy Darcy,
My my... What a brilliant piece(s) you have written for us.
The built up, more dots being connected, the pain and anguish PriVeer is going through. I could feel it too. Love the threat poems!

It was worth the wait, for sure!

Rishu

🤗 👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yayyy! Updates! I stay away for a day and am rewarded like this! Can't wait to read what you've written Sarce!
Will do so right after dinner!

Sooo excited!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sarce, what do you say when you are beyond happy,and floating in a pool of satiated bliss and thirst for intrigue and satisfied curiosity and eager questions and anguish at unrequited passions and frustrated at hopeless misunderstandings and frozen in a catatonic state at the sheer sexiness and mind-at-work nature of our MAN and melting at the same??
How do I compress all that into a word or a sentence?

Well, thanks to you, I now find myself in such a situation and I can only send lots and lots and LOTS of love to you for being such a marvellous writer and for setting in motion a crucial turn to the investigation as well as the relationship developing between these two star-crossed lovers!

Girl, I have been travelling non-stop for the past 20 hours or so and on reaching home found this series of updates from you and this has added a whole new texture to my homecoming. 🤗

This was absolutely fabulous! Am heart broken at the impossibly difficult situation Priyanka finds herself at present and can only hope that Ranveer will soon sort out the whole mess.

Rishu!!! Updating? Can't wait to know what happens next!!!!!



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1

These were AMAZING Sarce!!!! :')
I LOVED each and every single one of the updates!!! ❤️
I love how the tension built up between PriVeer, almost like a dormant volcano.
I am so excited to see what you and the rest of the gang have planned!
🤗



Thank you, Tahiti! 🤗

Glad to hear that. And plus, PriVeer were going too steady, too sweet for a while now so it was time for a bit of angsty separation. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AshlynRose

Hi everyone.

I am a huge fan of priveer. You guys are doing a terrific job here. I just loved this story circle. Both the seasons. I started reading this before my class and it was so hard for me to wait for those 3 hrs. Those were the longest 3 hrs of my life. It is expectionally good. Gul should hire you guys as the writers.

Whenever I read an update I just can't wait for the next. I can't express how good it is. I don't have enough words. The loverboy 's rhyme was just epic. I seriously loved it so much.

I don't know why but I just fell in love with this pair at the first sight. Ranveer entry was fantastic. Confidence radiated from his mere presence. He shaked the very foundations of the OM and outwitted the great SSO. He appeared as a villain but won my heart like a hero. Priveer 's first meet was just awesome. I so loved the backstory. It was so unique and innovative. I was dieing to see their story and how would ranveer fell in love with the girl who was responsible for his sister 's accident. The cvs had such a gud plot and actors but they wasted it. At first I used watched ib for shivika but with ranveer 's first look I started watching ib for him and then priveer. I hated it so much when gul completely ignored them for months. I hated their marriage track even more. Cvs completely spoiled ranveer 's character.

However the ongoing track is much better. The scene was so good when ranveer handed over his salary to Priyanka. Still I am not sure how much screen space would give to these two

Never mind. Till there are so many good writers and stories here, I don't need to worry.

I am eagerly waiting for the next update.



Hello, Ashlyn! Welcome to the story circle. 😳

Thank you for your beautiful words. Ranveer has carved a special place in all of our hearts here and we also had a lot of hope with regards to his character in the show. But since all of that came to naught, we stopped watching the show and continue to build this PriVeer world the way we see Ranveer and Priyanka.

Hope you enjoy the future updates too. Do keep dropping by more often. :)

P.S - The lover boy rhyme seems to have become everyone's favourite. Thank you. 😳

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