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Vst.. viswaas standard time
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jaldi update karo na Karthi.
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Yayini, 😊
Prologue is interesting. 😊
Ch-1:-
Finally Fakelana is out of their life, n Om is really happy that Tej is feeling guilty due to his deeds, though is not talking about his reconciliation with Jhanvi. And he wants to thank Gauri for helping him. And he got lil drunk n swayed in his emotion n started to get intimate with Gauri, but Gauri knew the result, so she backed off from being intimate, knowing very well that their is a contract marriage wich is going to end soon. And bas Om got angry n sara raita phaila diya!
Ch-2:-
And bas sach mein raita phaila diya Om ne my saying all those biased words against Gauri's character which he prejudiced due to his MU regarding her! 😭 And Gauri left him for good, (yes he raised questions on her character n blamed her for horrible deeds!) And finally he started to feel guilty of his behavior. I'm just thinking that what will Om do when he'll get to know about Gauri's innocence?! No Gauri shouldn't forgive him so easily (but should forgive him later coz galti ho ya gunah, sab toh insaan se hi hota hai.)
Ch-3:-
Finally Om ko sach pata chal gaya about Gauri and he's really regretting it. Shivay was sure that Om was wrong in judging Gauri. After all who can understand that feeling Om is going through except SSO, who also did gadhapan during that Daksh days. So Shivay went on to become the sahara of his Om, who's now literary broken due to the realization that what he had done! And finally Om revealed everything to Shivay n Shivay got his answer from Om that Om do have feelings for Gauri.
Ch-4:-
Om is trying not to take ShivRu's help this time n trying to show that he's strong, but he's broken from inside, all thanks to he himself! But it would have been better if he shared his feelings with ShivRu coz dard baatne se kam hota hai, it makes u strong. I wonder where is my Gauri?? Om is missing Gauri so much! But he deserves it after what he has done! But he's really repenting his deeds. So feeling bad for him too.
Will read from ch-5 afterwards. Hope u wont mind. 😳
With love,
Aheli.


Hi Yayini, 😊
I'm back. Will start reading from ch-5 now. Lets see how many chapters I can cover today. 😳
Ch-5:-
Awww!!! Om is missing Gauri so much!! Felt so bad for him. 😔 Finally he realized that how much important Gauri is for him. 😊 Awwwee! Shivika to have a baby. 😃 Kanji aakhon wala baby! 😉 Omkie to become chachu. 😃 And Om was thinking about him having a baby with Gauri. 😳 But where is my Gauri?? 😭
Ch-6:-
8 months without Gauri??!! 😲 Poor Om. 😔 And finally the most awaited part is here! Om meets Gauri in Shimla. 😃 But Gauri calling him sir as if she don't know him at all!! Gauri was totally emotionless in front of him, but Om was beyond happy to see her. 😃 Her indifference towards him n her calling herself as "Miss Gauri" was totally killing Om from inside! 😔 And finally Om reached her quarter to meet n to apologize to her. 😊
Ch-7:-
Loved this chapter so much. In one hand I was feeling very bad for Om, but on the other hand I was feeling that what Gauri was doing now was right. Yes maybe she forgave Om, but her wounds r very fresh still now, so returning back of in his life was not possible for her, at least not now. I really don't want Gauri to return back to his life so easily! Om need to manaofaying her. 😉
Ch-8:-
I was feeling sad as well as happy while reading the chapter. Oho! Om possessive for his Gauri. 😉 Haahaa! Shivay n his chopper. 😆 Glucose biscuit chai part was so cute. 😳 Waiting for their next meeting. 😳
Ch-9:-
Wow! the next morning ShivRu too came with Om for talking with Gauri. 😃 I really loved Shivay's protective bade bhaiya wale behavior towards Gauri. Gauri was so happy to know that Shivika is going to have a baby. 😊 And Rudy being her cool n cute devar, started manaofying his Bhabhi. 😉 Gauri was in fix coz she knew that this time the O-bros have come together to take her back with them n will not leave from here without taking her back with them. 😳 Finally she agreed to go back to Oberoi mansion. But she's having some conditions too. Although I felt bad for Om after hearing her conditions towards their relationship, but I support Gauri coz this time she's again risking herself with her izzat n self respect so condition toh banta hai.
Ch-10:-
Finally Gauri is back in OM. 😃 AniRi bonded well n Gauri congratulated her. 😃 And that part was so emotional when Om tied the mangalsutra around her neck n filled her maang with sindoor, again. 😳 Bua maa explaining to Gauri was very nice. 😃 And that part where Rikara r in emotional turmoil is very well explained by u. 👏 Omkie shomkie u need to work hard for manaofying ur wife. 😉
Ch-11:-
JealousKara! 😉 😆 Gauri justifying her work place n her boss, but here Om is becoming sarela coz Gauri was praising everyone specially Rishav but was indifferent towards him. And finally Om couldn't take it any longer n pleaded her for 5 mins everyday in which he will spend time with her. 😳
Bechara is too desperate! 😆 Give her some time Omkie coz she's still afraid that u will break her already broken heart again!
Ch-12:-
Awesome chapter. 👏 Again Om is jealous of Rishav! And now both Rikara r hell confused that what to do now!! Gauri is right, when she wanted him, he turned his back n now when she has turned her back, he wants her!! So much confusion btw them!! And now Om is planning for a 2 day vacation for both of them to take a break from their monotonous life! Bechari Gauri she is in a fix! Neither she can refuse nor she can accept it! Sach mein Om ka nafrat n pyaar dono hi extreme level ki hai, jo bechari Gauri se handle nahi ho rahi hai!!
Ch-13:-
I'm loving this Gauri so much. Neither she denied to come with him to the resort, nor she pushed away Om when he was cuddling her from her back. But her one reality based word gave Om 440 volt ka jhatka! 😔 But what she said was true indeed. Itni jaldbaazi thik nahi hai Om. If u really want that purani wali Gauri and want her as ur wife in all the senses, u need to give her some time so that she becomes her usual happy self in her own n not by ur force, n then only u can get back as ur wife in full sense. But loved that part where Gauri was consoling a heavily guilty Om. 😳
Ch-14:-
Haye mai marjawa!! Didn't expect this scene after the bhari bharkam emotional scene in the previous chapter!! ☺️
Ch-15:-
It started in a good note. Rikara were having so much fun n were genuinely smiling after so many days. And Om proposing her about her studying further was amazing. 😃 Mallika part was also nice. But poor Mallika didn't knew that her saying Gauri about Riddhima would upset Gauri so much coz she thought that Gauri knows about her, so it was unintentional from her side. And Om was surprised that family members didn't tell Gauri about his relationship with Riddhima when they told her so many things about him...I can understand Gauri's inhibition about Om's relation with Riddhima.
Ch-16:-
I can understand Gauri baby ki how u r feeling thinking about Om's relation with Ridh, that them doing everything what a couple does, before marriage. But oh god! Kya surprise diya tumne Yaini!! Yeh hotel walon ne kya kamaal kiya! Ufff! I'm imagining Rikara in their massage cloths! ☺️ And Om saying "abhi bhi 1 ghanta bacha hai humare pass!!" OMG!! Kya irada hai Omkie ka?! 😉 And Gauri is like "Huh!!??!!" 😆
Ch-17:-
Ohhh emmm geee!! Kitna passionate kiss tha btw Rikara!! ☺️ ☺️ But phir se phaila diya na raita dono ne! *face palm* 😔
Yippiee! Finally I completed reading all the parts. 😃
Update soon n thanks for the pms. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
But today akso yiu will get chappals, eggs, tomatoes...yaar what are you doing??? Stopping at such points... Readers pe rehaam kar meri maaa
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Both gauris know how to open their mouth at the wrong time and say something more wrong to anger on..
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Chapter 18

Omkaara was disappointed and hurt. She thinks it was a mistake that she committed impulsively in the moment. He was nothing more than physically enticing? There was no love?

He held her arms. "Meri paas hona tumhari liye Galti ki barabar hai? His eyes displayed immense hurt, pain, anger, frustration all at the same time. He released his hands off her. He got reminded of the previous time he committed the same mistake which has resulted in this situation. No, he can't afford to lose her this time. It's ok if she doesn't want to fall in love with him, having her by his side is enough for him for this life. He wants nothing else. He turned in immense hurt.

"Hum bas 1 ghante mein nikal rahe.. Pack karo.. He didn't want to face her and went out.

Gauri felt the pain of his immense hurt piercing her heart. He started with immense anger as if he were to explode on her but withdrew back at the same speed without telling anything. Gauri realized the magnitude of the words that she had told him without realizing the gravity of the situation.

Gauri was packing all the dresses and was ready. He returned and found even his stuff had been packed. He didn't care even if it wasn't packed. He took the bags and opened the door for her, walked quietly to the car.. Throughout the 2 and half hour journey, he spoke less than 3 sentences only to ask her if she required something.

Gauri tried to speak to him, but he wasn't responding any thing. His silence continued even after reaching the home and the next day. She tried to speak with him after returning from work. He spoke formally and went off outside. He was hardly in the room. After dinner when they returned to the room, Gauri tried to stop him

"aap naaraz hai mujhse?

"Nahi.. Main kyun naaraz hoonga..

"Naaraz hi to ho.. Mujhe saaf saaf dikh raha hai

He knew where this was going. He can't affort another one.

"Wo mujhe Shivaay aur Rudra se milna hai.. Aane mer der hoga.. tum so jao. Good night

He went off to meet Shivaay in his room. Anika was sleeping and Shivaay was just done with some meeting conference. He greeted him and both moved to pool. Rudra walked in by pool, he too joined the conversation.

"Bhaiyya, O, Ruko main drinks laata hoon hum teenon ke liye

He went on to get a drink. "To bolo Om, tu aur Gauri resort gaye the naa.. how was the stay..? Lagta hai tum dono ki beech mein sab sort out hua hai.. Am very happy.. Shivaay was sounding pleased.

Omkaara's face withered down more. Shivaay didn't notice this since rudra just entered with the drinks..

They all were having their drink. Rudra started off as usual.

"To O batao.. 2 din bhabi ke saath resort main wo sab aa aahannn..

"Shut up Rudra

"Phir se.. Yeh Shut up shut kya kar rahe ho.. Dekho Shivaay bhaiyya ko.. usko number ab waiting list mein pade hai.. kitne sad hai bechaara.

"Haan aur 4-5 mahine hai.. mere number lagne mein

Rudra broke out in laughter.. "aap ki overtime romance ki nateeja hai yeh jo aap undergo kar rahe ho.. Rudra was pulling Shivaay's legs.

Om wasn't interested in this conversation. He was immersed in his own thoughts.

Rudra interrupted his thoughts "O, kya soch rahe ho.. aap Shivaay bhaiyya se lessons le rahe ho? Main bhi keh raha hoon.. itna jalbaazi mat karo.. Rudra was adding salt to his already burning wound without knowing.

"Shut up rudra Omkaara yelled.

Shivaay and Rudra gave a surprised expression

S: Om, kya hua. Pareshaan ho kya?

O: Nahi Shivaay aise koi baat nahi

S: Oh comeon Om, Kal raat hi aaye the.. sab kuch teek hain na aap logon ki beech?

Omkaara was in a gloomy mood and was not knowing how much he wanted to share regarding this.

R: "O, bolo kya hua.. Aap aur Bhabhi ke beech ki relationship teek hua ki nahi.. ya phir abhi bhi wahi pe atke hue hai?

Omkaara's frustration came out in his drunken state.

"Main kya boloon.. I know ki maine usse bahut buri tharah se treat kiya pehle aur uski dil ko bahut tez pahunchaya.. Jab se Gauri yahan aayi hai, main apni tharaf se poori koshish kar raha hoon, usko meri pyaar ki ehsaas karwaane ki.. Par she is not letting me in. I promised her that I will not go against her wishes when she came here. Par I lose control sometimes and end up getting hurt more by her indifference. Samajh nahi aaraha kya karoon

Shivaay and Rudra looked at one another. If they didn't understand, no one else will. They knew the exact situations both are going through. While Shivaay was feeling bad that still Om hasn't found his happiness, Rudra thought Gauri still had feelings for him. He has witnessed her looking at Om with longing eyes. Those eyes were speaking volumes of love. Even though there is a misunderstanding temporarily, love can't be erased and it will resurface at any point. He made up a plan to work it out.

"O, mere paas ek brilliant idea hai. Jisse sunne ke baad aap mujhe kiss doge.. "

"Kya hai tumhaari kidikitod idea? Shivaay chuckled

"Hmm.. ok ok.. Main naa apni friend ko yahan pe bulata hoon. Bhabhi ke saamne naatak karenge.. She will act infront of bhabhi ki uski art mein interest hain aur aapki help lena chahthi hai.. Toda sa O se flirt karne ki naatak bhi karenge.. aap dekho Bhabhi kaise possessiveness se jalti hai.. Tab pata chalega Bhabhi loves you

Shivaay and Om gave a mockery expression.

S: Kya yeh hai tumhaara kidikitod idea. Aise daily soap wala ideas sirf tumhaara dimaag mein aa sakthe hain.

R: Bhaiyaa.. maana hai idea toda purani hai.. par pata hai.. fool proof hai.. tried and tested hai.. Ladkiyan tab jalti hai jab uski mann mein pyaar chipa hota hai.. pata hai.. sumo kitni baar romi se jalti thi.. Main usko mazzak khoob udaya kartha tha.. O aap kya keh rahe ho?

O: Mujhe bhi nahi lagta yeh idea sahi hai.. Ridhima ki baat pe uski reaction teek nahi tha.. Agar aise hua, to bag pack kar wapas Shimla jayegi..

R: Matlab mera shaq sahi tha.. Bhabhi ki andar hi andar Ridhima se jalan hai.. ki wo aapki ex hai.. To O, yeh plan zaroor work karega.. kya kehte ho?

S: Om, Rudra ki idea is little childish par ty kar sakthe hain na.. tumhe koi eitraaz hai?

O: Mujhe naa sahi feeling nahi aarahi.. agar reaction ulta hogaya to? Aur waise bhi mere Gauri ki alava, main kisi aur ladki ki saat flirt nahi karnewaala..

R: Itna pyaar karte ho aap Bhabhi se? Rudra was surprised.

O: Haan Rudra, Mujhe uski alava kuch nahi chahiye iss duniya mein..

Shivaay and Rudra was moved the depth of love he had for her. They have to do something to bring them together. They believed that Gauri also loved him but there was some problem in getting both to the same page, somewhere.

R: teek hai O. aap bas wallpaper ki tharah kade rehna.. Jo bhi hai, meri friend dekh legi.. Aap harishchandra banke phirse plan mein paani mat daalna..? teek hai?

O: Agar kuch gadbad hui, tumhe Gauri se sab kuch kehna hai.. ok?

"Haan teek hai .. To Rudy's plan starts Three of them gave a high five..

Next evening ..

There was a small get to gether in the house. Tej has organized someof his business friends for dinner on account of a successful deal closure. Entire family was present and so were three brothers. Gauri was roaming aimlessly in the party. Anika didn't take part since she was having shortness of breath in the last trimester. So she wanted to rest. Saumya was away for friends' sangeet function. Omkaara still maintained silence with her so she didn't want to mingle with anyone. She was sitting in a corner from which she saw the backprofile of her jatadhaari. He is standing beside a pillar. She was wondering what was he doing near the pillar and thought of talking with him to sort out his anger. When she went near the pillar, she heard a voice.. A voice of girl who was laughing for every word that he said.

"Ye kisse baat kar rahe hain Omkaara ji She was wondering

She moved slightly towards the other side where she could get a full view. A girl so stylish and tall was standing near Omkaara and talking to him. What was striking to Gauri is that the girl was touching his arms, his hands at whatever possible chance she gets in pretext of a funny conversation. And why the hell is he smiling..? She seemed to get an autograph of him and he was signing it with so much of a grin. He doesn't smile this much.. something felt unusual for her.. but still Gauri went on watching wat is going on.. Within few seconds, an unexpected had happened. The girl rose on her feet and kissed his cheeks.. Omkaara kept a straight face but was not objecting. How dare she kisses her Omkaara.?

"Ek jhaap mein deewar mein sata dena chahiye iss chaalak ladki ko.. Himmat to dekho.. meri pati ko kiss kar rahi hai.. aur usse kya hogaya aaj.. aise deewar jaise kade hokar reh rahe hai.. kuch kehte kyun nahi? Gauri was fuming in anger now. Little did she know that Shivaay and Rudra were laughing at this on the other side of the another pillar cross to her with Rudra recording all this in his phone.

R: "Bhaiyya.. sirf 3 second baaki hai.. Bhabhi O ke upar bulldozer chadane waali hai

S: "Haan.. kitna possessive ho rahi hai.. Uski man mein zaroor Om ke liye feelings hai. Bas dikhati nahi usko

Omkaara's conversation with the strange girl was continuing still. The girl was clutching his hand now. Gauri was not knowing whether or not to crash the conversation or to wait and watch. They were looking like they were about to leave. The girl asked him for a selfie and Omkaara was posing with a smiling face. The girl leaped and pecked him on the cheek for another selfie. Gauri lost it..

"Omkaara ji. Her voice was near to shout.

<To be continued>


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Edited by yayini - 7 years ago
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Angry, Jealous and possessive Gauri. Watchover Om, Bulldozer is on your way. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hahahaha...rudra rocked😎
Gauri shocked😲
Yaaay...dabaang gauri on the way
Sooo excited for next updateee...😳
Obro convo was bang on karthi..⭐️
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Hey it is possible for u to give at least 4-5 updates in a day ek se man nHi manta😆
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awww Rudra you are a rockstar...
kya idea diya tune...
ekdum khidkhitod...
gauri will kill om...

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