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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks yaar Radhu!
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Hey!


How are you guys doing?
I saw that you have a lot of questions.
You will come to know about it here and in the coming parts.
Happy reading!

*******

Part 2


Few minutes passed, Imli emerged from her room to find an immobile Chakor. She got her out of her trance only by shaking her like a maniac.
"Eww! I touched you! Where were you lost. Where is Suraj? Leave it! Prepare lunch, I will be back in 10 mins." she yelled and left to her room.

Chakor swallowed all her emotions down her heart and continued her work.
Imli came back after taking a quick shower. She tried to contact Suraj but he didn't pick up her call.

Next day when Imli was having her lunch she received a SMS from Suraj stating:
"I'm in hostel.
Will meet you on Monday."

After reading it, she was a little more frustrated than before as she had contacted him through all ways. "What does he think of himself? Am I a money machine? I need to talk to him." muttering all this she left her food half-finished.

Chakor knew partially the reason behind all this but she can't express it.

Days passed and Imli tried a lot of tricks to get to Suraj but nothing worked.
Like she tried to slip expecting him to catch her but instead got a new friend, splint.

After she got well, she acted as sleeping and falling over his shoulder while they were watching TV, he made her lay on the couch and shifted to the other one.

Once she accidentally spoiled his dress to get to touch him while cleaning it, he just left her there and ran into the bathroom closing the door on her face.

The same day she tried to ask for towel from bathroom when he was in hall reading a book, instead of going himself, he sent Chakor pouring ice water on the fire castle that Imli has constructed.

Even she started to wear more revealing dresses which attracted those guys whom she will not even give a glimpse but not Suraj.

More and more tricks were sketched and nothing worked.

On the other side, Chakor tried to be distant to Suraj but she now knows that he will not do anything that will hurt her. May be sometimes he will tease her but never hurt her. He stands by his word.
Whenever possible which means when Imli is not there, he tries to help in kitchen by cutting vegetables, cleaning utensils, ...

He tries to touch without her to jerk away from him and think like it happened unintentionally but the distance she keeps between them makes it impossible.

However, he got lucky twice.
Once, oil was on the floor without noticing it, Suraj slipped and landed on Chakor, then they both landed together on the floor with Chakor under Suraj and his lips pressed against her forehead. They got up immediately but he got lucky to hold her for few seconds in his arms.

The other one was when Chakor was cooking and Suraj cutting vegetable, he got something in his eyes. He tried several times to be calm and composed to not irritate himself and rub his eyes but that didn't get him to anywhere.

He asked Chakor to help him, the nice soul she is, she helped him blowing air. With the irritation he got, he griped her shoulder. She finished her work properly and went back to cooking while he was standing like a statue until he was jerked out by Imli.

The more she distanced from him, the more he is attracted to her.

Whereas Chakor was Chakor. Doing her work.
The only difference is nowadays she feels a zoo running in her stomach when she feels Suraj watching her or trying to get close to her.
With all the dominance of Imli over Chakor and little over Suraj, she got to have a soft corner for this person.

She doesn't know what is the relationship between Suraj and Imli.
She doesn't know what is Suraj thinking about her.
She doesn't know what is happening to her.

Like that 3 months passed.
Only few more days and the girls will go back to Lal's house and Suraj back to his normal life.

Suraj is getting out of the college canteen when he hears few guys near the parking area teasing someone.
"So Baby! How about we go the movie together?"
"No yaar I would like to take her to the beach?"
"She is going to come with me to my farmhouse. Am I right dear?"

Suraj hears a lot more than this until he sees the bent face of the girl who is surrounded by 3 boys of his class.
"Hey buddies! Thanks for taking care of my girl." he said approaching the gang. "Chakor! Come let's go, I finished my work." taking her hand.

- These bas***ds! They made the Beauty to shed tears. I would have punched them if we are not in our campus. -

Hearing a familiar voice and touch, she lifted her head with small smile in the corner of her lips, stopping the tears from flowing down.
"How do know her?"
"Where are you taking her?"

"Calm down guys! Let me introduce her." putting his hand around her shoulder "She is Chakor. Your Would-Be-SIL. Am I right darling?" winking at Chakor for the last line.
She nodded.
All she wanted at that moment is to escape from them.

- At least for this drama she is my future wife. -

"Congrats bro!"
"Never told us!"
"We thought Imli and you were a thing!"
At the mention of Imli, Chakor shoot her head up to face the gang.

- What is the meaning of her reaction? -

"She is my friend and nothing else buddies. And by the way, I will invite whole college for our marriage. Have to go now! Catch you later."

"Yeah!"
"Take care!"
"Sorry SIL!"

Turning away from the group, Suraj smirked shaking his head and headed towards his bike still holding her by her shoulder.

"I need to go!" Chakor said trying to gain a few millimeters distance between them.
"How can I leave my Would-Be-Wife alone in my college?" leaving her shoulder, he immediately hold her hand tightly.

- She feels so soft and fragile. -

"I... I'm not!"
"Get on!" once he was on his bike with her left hand in his left.
She shook her head.
"If you don't, I will tell Imli you are roaming in streets, enjoying while she thinks you are in temple praying."

- This is the only way I can make her go with me. -

"Nooo"
"Then come!"

She sits behind him with her both legs on one side, taking the help of the bar.
"Sit properly. You will fall if you sit like that."
"HmmHmmm"
"You are not wearing a half-saree or a saree, so do it."
"No" she whispers.
"No problem! Get down and stay here. I'm going to the apartment; I will speak to Imli."
"I will."
She gets down and sits with her legs on either side of the bike.

- I think luck is in my side today. -

"Hold me! You may fall!"
"I... I'm holding the b... bar." holding tightly the bar behind her.
"Let's see for how long."
She bent her head.

They started their journey towards home when suddenly:
"Please! Go... Slow!"
"No I will not! Hold me by my waist and I will."
"No"
"Then No too."

- Let's see how long it continues Beauty. -

"Oh My God!"
"What happened?"
"Why did you apply sudden break?"
"What's the problem in it Honey? The signal turned to red, so I stopped."
"And I kissed." she muttered thinking she is talking in her head but no, she said it a little louder.
"You have the rights to kiss me Honey! It's just one place."

As he was on high speed, when the light turned to red he stopped his bike abruptly which made her hold his shoulder and her lips pressed against his back.

- I'm getting lucky minutes by minutes. -

He adjusted the mirror to see her face clearly and continued:
"There are lot more places where you can caress your soft lips over them."
"Shut up!" turning crimson
"What? I'm just telling the"
"Kill you!" without letting him finish.
"I'm waiting to die in your lap Honey once our great grandchildren's marriage happens."
"GOD!" she palmed her forehead, closing her eyes but one hand was still glued to his shoulder.

- It feels so good to speak to her like this. -

The light turned green and there is still 10 minutes to reach the apartment.

"Why were you in the college?"
She didn't answer.
"I asked you something."
Still nothing.
"Why do you want me to threaten you using Imli's name?"
"Don't say anything to her."
"Then tell me."
"I...I came to pa...pass my fin...final year exam."
"In our college?"
"Hmmm"
"When did you come to classes?"
"Corr... Correspondence!"
"Ohhh! Which course?"
"MA"

- Not bad Beauty! Same course! Will be working together for our company in future! -

"Why hiding it from Imli?"
"She don't know."
"That's what I'm asking."
She keeps quiet.
"Forget it!" he said.

- One day or the other, I will know everything about you Beauty. -

Finally, the ride came to its end.
"I'm not going to see you after few days. Can we be at least friends for the time being?" he asked her when she got off the bike.
"Friends?"
"Yeah!" nodding.

- I want to see her for my life time but for that we should have had a good start but no. So hope she accepts to be my friend. -

She shook her head.
"Am I not even capable of being your friend? I'm sorry for what I did before. I want to have a happy memory of us together before I go from here."
She shook her head.
"Please! I'm sorry." he got down from his bike.

They made their way to the apartment.
She went directly to the kitchen once she freshened up. On her way, she saw Suraj speaking on telephone with Imli.
After few minutes, she came towards Suraj with 2 cups in her hand.
"Friend!"
"Me?"
"Hmmm" she nodded.
"Thank you!" with a big smile, he took a cup from her and waited for a hand shake with her and she accepted it with a simple smile.

- This day is for sure my lucky day. She accepted my friendship. Yahooo! -

"Did Imli said anything about dinner?"
"Sorry forgot to tell you!"

- When you are near me, I tend to forget the world. -

******* PHONE CONVERSATION *******

"Hello Imli!"
"Hey! Sorry to say now that I will not be in my apartment tonight. I'm going to a girlz party at Sonia's house after shopping. You have to stay in your apartment."

- Yep! I have my free time with my Beauty without that Torture. -

"No problem! I'm already here. I don't think of going back for 40 minutes of ride, back to hostel. Do you have any problem if I stay here?"
"No yaar! You can! No need to ask! Ask Chakor to do the dinner you wish!"
"I will take care of it."
"Ok! So see you tomorrow!"
"Yep!"

******* NOW *******

"Oh! So what do you want for dinner?" finishing her coffee.
"Pizza is on the way! Sit!"

- No extra work for my Beauty today. If she comes with me, it will be forever. -

"Pizza?" sitting opposite to him.
"Yeah! A pizza party between 2 new friends! Isn't it interesting?"
She lifted her shoulders and made a face saying 'May be'.
"Do you want me to cancel it?" taking her cup and making his way to kitchen to clean them.
"No! It's ok!"
"Are you sure? If you want, we can cook something simple."
She just smiled.

"Hey! Why don't we play something until?"
"Play?" shocked to know that he wanted to play.
"Yeah! Like 'HangMan','Dictionary' or '20 Questions?'. I think '20 Questions?' will be the best as we will come to know about each other as friends."

- It will help me know about her and her about me. -

"Noo Noo Noo" shaking her head.
"Why? Are you afraid of telling truth?"
"Not like that but"
"Hey! Cool down! We will only simple questions! Nothing serious!"
"Hmmm" she nodded.

- May be one question will lead to another one. Let's see. -

"Ladies first! And ahaan only truth! So Shoot!"
"Shoot!"
"Ask your questions Chakor." Smiling at her.
"Oh! What is your favorite colour?"
"You wasted one question Honey!" she made a face "Calm down. It's Black!"
"I knew it was that."
"Hmmm! I didn't think it was this obvious but you see you wasted one question! Any ways my turn! I'm not going to ask your favorite colour as I know it's yellow."
"How do you know that?"
"There is always something yellow on you!"

- Like a sunflower! -

She smiles.
"Coming to my first question: Since when you are at Lal uncle house?"
"Sinnnce 8 years!"

- How can it be possible? I have been there since my parents fixed my Bro's marriage. I have never seen her. -

"8 yeeaarrs! I have been there but I have never seen you?"
"My turn!"
"No problem! I have still 9 questions!" grinning.

*******

Thanks for reading dears!
Hope you all liked it!
There will be a lot of revelation in the next part.
If you liked the bike ride, hit the LIKE button and COMMENT!
Next Part: Part 3

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Fabulous sis..Love to read more..
Suraj was impossible..he know how to control her..The way suraj gives her a permission for kissing was outstanding..
He said to her tat he want to die in her lap after their grand childrens marriage was chanceless dialogue..
Waiting for his question and answer session..I think a lot of surprises r waiting in the queue in 3rd part..
Eagerly waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Thanks for pm
Interesting update👏
Finally sukor become friends😊
Chakor is studying MA but imli don't know, she is so full of herself😲
Loved how suraj ignored imli or can say insulted imli as her tricks fails🤣
Loved how suraj flirts with chakor😉
Loved the college part, he is one woman man😊
Sukor's moment as said by suraj as luck were awesome😊
Suraj's idea of 20 questions is brilliant, now secrets will be revealed
How come suraj didn't cross chakor in 8 years😲
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Suraj suraj... amazing...
I dont know.. if chakor attracting or not... but.. suraj.. this boy.. his flirty attitude surrly atttacts me...very much

As usual.. in ur story... suraj has upper hand over chakor in case of clever tactics... 20 questions..superb idea..

😆

Kaaash.. ye chapter aur long hota.
Your story..in such a good flow.. and when in abruplty ends.. 😲

Maithu dee... *thumbs up* for this chapter too..
Love sukor..

Next chapter.. alone sukor.. 19 questions pending..cant wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous! I love this Suraj, the perfect balance of flirtation and care; and to top it, he constantly ignores Imli and thwarts her advances.

How dare Imli feel disgusted for touching Chakor, Chakor is 1000 times better than her. I'm happy that she is ambitious and is trying to build a better future for herself.

I'm curious to know why Chakor is so afraid of Imli and why Suraj never met her while he visited.

Love the 20 questions game and I'm glad Suraj and Chakor are getting closer. I wish Imli has stayed away for a week and not a day.

Eagerly waiting for the next update and thanks for the PM.
Edited by meshmesh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Awesome !!
I love Suraj in all your stories.
Good to know that Chakor is studying.
Can't wait for 19 more turns in game !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Maithu...you cant do this to us,abruptly ending the part,when the game had just started...😛
I really liked how Suraj ignored that tamarind,she makes me frustrated even in the mention of her name...😡

And Suraj...I am already head over heels in love with the original Suraj,and you make me time and again fall for him,with the varieties of Suraj,you provide us with...😉
The way he flirts,my goodness,a girl is usually genuinely irritated and angered when a guys so openly flirts with her...but the attitude he flaunts while flirting and his dialogues...a girl cant help falling for him.

And yeah,like the original Suraj,even this one owns his words and is a gentleman,I am so glad...😳

Seems like all loopholes will be sorted out in the next part
[I just wish Imli does not jump in from nowhere in their game]..😡

Waiting for the next part.
See you.😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing maithu di
i simply loved it .
especially the bike one 😆
waiting for surajs questions ...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
pls post ur CAY as soon as possible
because i am waiting very eagerly for the next part 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Fabulous sis..Love to read more..

Suraj was impossible..he know how to control her..The way suraj gives her a permission for kissing was outstanding..
He said to her tat he want to die in her lap after their grand childrens marriage was chanceless dialogue..
Waiting for his question and answer session..I think a lot of surprises r waiting in the queue in 3rd part..
Eagerly waiting for next update😊

Thank u dear!
Yep! The surprises are the for sure!
or sad one, that is up to u all!

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