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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Wonderful start. Imli keeps trying to attract Suraj's attention but he's not interested. I don't like the way she's treating Chakor, she's arrogant and treats her as if she's not a human being.
I'm curious to know how Imli and Suraj know each other and to know more about Chakor's and Suraj's background stories. looking forward to the next part.

Thanks yaar!

Hope the next part reveal the answers for few of your queries.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Awww so sweet maithu you are sweetheart,
I'm glad to know my opinion matter to you...
Well I like first chapter intresting start1...I Hate imli...and now I hate her more...she is useless, arrogant even suraj also not interested in her...The way she behave with chakor I want to punch her...I have question why chakor is so chup chap type...definitely kuch to hua hai I thought her past was bitter ...but now she have suraj he will find out why she is like that...He is so cute...I like sukor's scenes there interaction I know zyada baat suraj ne hi ki fir bhi it's good...
Fabulous update maithu waiting for next...

Yep dear!

It means a lot to know what you all think about my writings.

No need to punch Imli dear, she will fall herself one day.

Chakor's character is even mysterious to Suraj for now.

Thanks a lot dear!

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

seems interesting...

god this Imli is a jerk just like the original,,,,,always behind him.😡

But Sukor...Omg,,,,,

What a morning Chakoriya...it must have made your day,for sure.😉

there is something really mysterious about Chakor,in this story,and I feel that their story would be an emotional one..❤️

Flirty Suraj...makes me weak on my senses☺️

and Maithu,I got what I wanted,see in the show alswo when Suraj had seen Chakor,for the first time,he was clean bowled...must have thought..."she is THE ONE FOR ME"...and he got her.👍🏼

the meeting in the kitchen in the last part was sooo sweet,how he immediately changes roles from a flirt to a gentleman...I liked the part...

Good job done,Maithu...👍🏼

waiting for the next part😃

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: A.Theepa
Awsome
Waiting for next part

Thanks dear!

Will be updating tomorrow.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: SofiaIshVeer
Intersting
Waiting for next part

Thanks yaar!

Update tomorrow!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
Maithu dear, it was awesome... Imli is disgusting, i think she is grey... First time i ever read a story about chup chap chakor... May be jungli billi is clearly shown in chakor's pov... Suraj is fall for chakor in first sight, but it is too much for him to hug her like that... Waiting for chakor's pov...

Thanks buddy!

She will have a role in all this but not the major one! As always this story is also around Sukor only!

The hug was a way of expression!

You see he trys to say a lot of things to her but seeing her in that state, he is unable to show his feelings! He is a lot than just attracted to her! And he is expressing it through this action

There will be no Chakor POV as said!

Make yourself in her place and feel it! I'm just repeating What I said while starting the part! So tell me how it feels to be in her place!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Like Suraj I also want to see Junglee billi in Chakor 😉
Awesome update !

Thanks dear!

Sorry to say! You will just get glimpse of JB but not the full form!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: pershial
interesting .
good start di
eagerly waiting for ur next part ...
this time i loved suraj more than chakor .

Thank u dear!

Glad you loved the Suraj here.

Will be updating tomorrow!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: saniya__
Really well written...Imli loves Suraj but it's good that he ignores her...update soon

Thank u dear!

More humiliations are in the waiting list for Imli!😉

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: KUTUR
seems interesting...
god this Imli is a jerk just like the original,,,,,always behind him.😡

But Sukor...Omg,,,,,
What a morning Chakoriya...it must have made your day,for sure.😉

there is something really mysterious about Chakor,in this story,and I feel that their story would be an emotional one..❤️

Flirty Suraj...makes me weak on my senses☺️

and Maithu,I got what I wanted,see in the show alswo when Suraj had seen Chakor,for the first time,he was clean bowled...must have thought..."she is THE ONE FOR ME"...and he got her.👍🏼

the meeting in the kitchen in the last part was sooo sweet,how he immediately changes roles from a flirt to a gentleman...I liked the part...

Good job done,Maithu...👍🏼
waiting for the next part😃

Thank u Buddy!

Here Imli is same as she was in the starting after the leap.

I think he is more than just a flirt, what do u think dear.

It was a bit difficult to write the last part. But I think it got well seeing all your comments!

Next part tomorrow morning or in the afternoon!

See ya!