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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Awww so sweet maithu you are sweetheart,

I'm glad to know my opinion matter to you...

Well I like first chapter intresting start1...I Hate imli...and now I hate her more...she is useless, arrogant even suraj also not interested in her...The way she behave with chakor I want to punch her...I have question why chakor is so chup chap type...definitely kuch to hua hai I thought her past was bitter ...but now she have suraj he will find out why she is like that...He is so cute...I like sukor's scenes there interaction I know zyada baat suraj ne hi ki fir bhi it's good...

Fabulous update maithu waiting for next...

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Sruti

@vs215blooms

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Maithu dear, it was awesome... Imli is disgusting, i think she is grey... First time i ever read a story about chup chap chakor... May be jungli billi is clearly shown in chakor's pov... Suraj is fall for chakor in first sight, but it is too much for him to hug her like that... Waiting for chakor's pov...

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av131

@av131

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Like Suraj I also want to see Junglee billi in Chakor 😉
Awesome update !

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Yeahhh I'm first...😛

Yeeehee! 😉

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: vk1nonly
Well written.i think imli here is a grey character...But I will love to see this.Is chakor her servant or what.i hated her attitude on our so innocent chakor.And Suraj,he toh always rocks.'''''

Well you get to see about Imli in upcoming parts, not only in the next one.

The relation Chakor shares with Imli will be revealed by Chakor.😛

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: chasa
Nice one..really intriguing. .I think imli is a vamp...anyway please update soon. .

Thanks yaar!

Will try to update on Saturday as I will be working on CAY for now.

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

interesting .

good start di

eagerly waiting for ur next part ...

this time i loved suraj more than chakor .

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saniya__

@saniya__

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Really well written...Imli loves Suraj but it's good that he ignores her...update soon

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Hate imli, she was just ordering chakor😡
Loved suraj, he is flat on chakor😉
Chakor is so reserved & mysterious as well
Waiting for next

Thanks dear!

Hate Imli for being a ball to be thrown at anyone on th way, so made her like this here.

Will try to update on Saturday.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It was awesome..asusual u r with diff chakor and suraj..
Luved suraj pov..i m very happy tat suraj jaan s maintaining the distance btwn imli..tat sounds great..Now i understand the sp very well..
Tq very much for tis weekend..u made my day with ur TOFM..
Just loved it..and luv u too❤️🤗

Thank u sis!

You see, he is flirt and all but one woman Man here.

Glad you understand the sp as it contained a lot of '...' to not reveal the suspense.

Hope you will like the next part too!

Love you too sis!❤️