Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Awwh.. such a beautifully written update omkara told her to come next love the online and sweetys moment.. omkara without listening told his schedule and give the basic tip

Love the last scene where omkara helped her...


Thank you Ila, for regular comments...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Unres... Sorry for the late comment...
That was so refreshing... It's great to see a relaxed and encouraging Artistkara... He's such a natural at it when he's around Gauri.

And poor Gauri had all the enthusiasm and willingness in the world but her childhood trauma is preventing her from being able to put a brush to canvas. But we saw the first step toward redemption today as Omkara held her hand and helped her sketch... so beautiful.

And the interactions you show between the family members, especially with Omki's Sweety and everyone else are just plain adorable... love it!

Eagerly waiting for updates!

p.s. If I had to guess colors for all four chapters, I would go with

Midnight blue for Color 1
Grey for Color 2
Forest Green for Color 3
Sunflower Yellow for Color 4

PM me if you want to know why I picked those... actually PM me with why you think I picked those colors... 😃
Edited by writergenie17 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: pt311288

this is lovely update

gauri learning form Omkara guess in near future she can compete him 😆

all ur updtes are very good liking it a lot

update next part soon😃


Thanks a lot yaar, you have made my day😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome...it was a lovely update...

something is stopping gauri from drawing...
she is so much affected by the past
I really loved omkie's sweety


Thank you aishu, will get to know her past very soon 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Unres... Sorry for the late comment...

That was so refreshing... It's great to see a relaxed and encouraging Artistkara... He's such a natural at it when he's around Gauri.

And poor Gauri had all the enthusiasm and willingness in the world but her childhood trauma is preventing her from being able to put a brush to canvas. But we saw the first step toward redemption today as Omkara held her hand and helped her sketch... so beautiful.

And the interactions you show between the family members, especially with Omki's Sweety and everyone else are just plain adorable... love it!

Eagerly waiting for updates!

p.s. If I had to guess colors for all four chapters, I would go with

Midnight blue for Color 1
Grey for Color 2
Forest Green for Color 3
Sunflower Yellow for Color 4

PM me if you want to know why I picked those... actually PM me with why you think I picked those colors... 😃


That was a really encouraging comment genie.
I always love your this kind of explanatory comments.
Happy to know that you guys loved it, coz I was a bit hesitant to update this.

Shall update soon and lovvving your stories too😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Hi Shraddha..
This is a delightful thought that Ri is a student of OM. Actually something more to do with this passion. The part where choti cherry was sitting on his lap. wow awww moment. I very much like these kind of chweet moments.. ❤️

This is interesting.. Om is going to learn more than teaching and Gauri is going to learn something more than art.. Waiting for the next color..

Love,
Yayini
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: yayini

Hi Shraddha..

This is a delightful thought that Ri is a student of OM. Actually something more to do with this passion. The part where choti cherry was sitting on his lap. wow awww moment. I very much like these kind of chweet moments.. ❤️

This is interesting.. Om is going to learn more than teaching and Gauri is going to learn something more than art.. Waiting for the next color..

Love,
Yayini



Shall come back with next colour very soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Hey RIKARIANS...🤗
I'm in a lala land of rikara...all those fake romance, challenges, nok jhoks...😳👏 They r setting fire on screens.

Even my mom & grand mom are addicted to this, leaving our regional language(malayalam) soaps.😛

Thanks to all who commented on this ff and silent buddies too...


I am not sure whether you will like this part... please do drop in your comments rikarians.😭

Recap:- Om met gauri in an art competition, who have certain personal fears which keep her away from painting. Upon her request, even in his busy schedule, Om is ready to become her guide in art. Her fear is engulfing her from very first day itself, but Om is ready to help her n overcoming it, even when he doesn't know what exactly her problem is...

Colour 5

It was a sleepless night for Gouri. She was thinking deeply. She didn't know how to overcome her fear. She once again tried to sketch, but it was a failure...her heartbeat was rising...She was sweating...and she finally gave it up...

Next morning, she reached his gallery. But she was welcomed by the loud voice of Om. He was in a very angry mode that day, due to some business issues. Gouri was surprised because even to moti, he hadn't spoken in this way. She silently went to the room and arranged the canvas.

Om entered the room, frowning and asked Gouri to repeat yesterday's chapter. But unluckily, Gouri could only make few strokes on the canvas. She already had a problem with drawing and moreover she was shocked with his behaviour. The pencil fell from her hand.

Om lost his temper. He was already angry with the problems his assistants had made, which was leading to the loss of a big deal, and on top of that this girl is continuing her antics.

"What are you trying to do? Can't you sketch properly? Where is your attention? What is your big problem? See I already have a busy schedule and I found out sometime just because I thought that you are worth it? What did you study in sketching, ha? Not even able to hold the pencil properly? Just stop this now, practice in your home properly and come back after 2 days? Do you get it?"

A small river was forming in her eyes, but she didn't cry, because Gouri kumara Sarma never cried in front of anyone. She took her bag and just left from there...

Om's whole day was very bad. After reaching home, he didn't talk to anyone, not even sweety. A big deal was going out of his hand because of a small carelessness. He had to work a lot to get it back.

At some point, he remembered Gouri. He felt ashamed that he had misbehaved with a lady. He thought to call her but later dropped that plan. He didn't know why she had this problem of touching the canvas.

Here Gouri was determined; she took this as a challenge to him and herself. She began roughly sketching; closing her eyes, thinking her dad. She failed many times; but didn't give up. As she moved her hands through the table, the glass fell down and broke. Her hands were bleeding: but she continued. Finally, after a long time she managed to draw a picture: picture of a pigeon flying out from a cage. She thanked sankarji...

After 2 days, she reached the gallery. She went inside the room and arranged few pictures which she managed to draw to draw from home.

As Om entered and saw Gouri he was a bit confused. He didn't know how to face her. But seeing so many pictures sketched by her, he was totally amused. He appreciated her in his mind but told her,

"OK, so finally you have overcome your fear. It's good. So you know a good amount of drawing. Fine...so let's start with the next level"

It was a very enjoyable class that day. Gouri got to know many more new things, some small tips to make her sketch feel real, some shading effects etc. She was so happy at the end of the class.

When she was about to leave, Om told her,

"I'm very sorry Ms.Gouri, about last day's incident. Actually I was a bit stressed up with my work and when I saw you being so careless I just couldn't..." Gouri interrupted,

"It's OK sir, I understand. Yes it was true that I had few personal problems, but now I am alright. After all, you are my guru, so you shouldn't apologise." She became happy as Om smiled at her...

The next few weeks, witnessed the development of a unique relation between Omkara and Gouri. Both were very much indulged in their passion - art. All their talks were totally related to art. Gouri was literally feeling that she was growing up as an artist, in every sense - not only just in sketching but in terms of dedication and passion.

Their interaction was not just confined inside the gallery. Both attended many art exhibitions and camps. As Om was one of the topmost artists, Gouri could easily access many opportunities and interact with other big artists. Her language was never a problem, as Om was there to help out. They even began going for few outings.

While Om taught her the complexities of art, she, in turn taught him the simplicities of life - enjoying pani puri and some dhamakedar dhaba food. Even though in old days Om used to enjoy all these, the depressions of his present life had prevented him from enjoying all these desi things.

Both of them, never discussed anything other than art, not even family matters or personal things - because there was so much more to be talked about art only. Yes, it was indeed a special bond - both like friends or a teacher-student one.

Both of them deeply respected each other's and had a strong admiration, secretly in their heart. But that was not really expressed outside. She even began helping him in his works in the gallery. Once Rudra met her in the gallery and both spend some quality time with each other. It was that day; Om came to know about her real dabang avatar. Rudra started teasing him in front of his family stating that Gouri is his new secretary. Every member literally wanted to meet Gouri one day, who has brought some appreciable changes in Om.

At times, both could read each other's mind. One day Svetlana had come to meet OM. He wasn't interested at all in her presence. Gouri, at first was irritated by seeing this chichi romancing with Om. She came to know that svety was his fiance.

But later she felt that, Om wasn't enjoying her presence. So in order to help her sir, she cleverly talked to Om about some project and asked him to meet someone. Om found this a good chance and escaped from svety's hand. Even though he didn't thank her verbally, he did it in his mind.

One day, Gouri came to the gallery, even when she fell ill. Om was really impressed with her dedication. He had even dropped her home as she was really unwell. He was confused, as he was not even close to riddhi , in this way. He didn't know whether she was affecting him. But he wasn't ready to make any relation with any girl due to his past. He made sure that he wouldn't do this in future too.

A fine morning, Om had arranged a meeting with one of his client in gallery. Actually it was that client who requested to keep meeting there - KALI THAKUR.

As Gouri entered the gallery, she got the biggest shock of her life. The man who had snatched every happiness from her life...the one whom she hated to the core...was in front of her...she didn't know what too? She just ignored him and went inside, suddenly she received a call. As she attended it , she felt that she was losing her breath. She was devastated...

Om entered the room and saw that Kali was already seated. Both of them had a good time discussing about their new deal in Bareilly which is going to happen after 3 days. As their discussion was over,

K: arey sehri babu...3 din ke baad, it's my shaadi.

O: (confused) but sir, you are already a married person, right?

K: ha..ha..ji.. but abhi I am in love with another girl and so is going to marry her. Actually she is here in this city; I have also come to take her back.

Om was feeling disgusted.

K: I love that chidiya so much, she is from a poor home but now going to be malkin of poora thakur family. After all which girl wouldn't fall for power and money? (smirking)

Om wasn't interested in this. But that name..forced him to look uo...

K: USKI NAAM HAI...Gouri...tumhari student..vudent...( laughing)

Om was just freezed. He had never expected this. He had considered her as a girl with self respect. But now she has stooped to the level of Svetlana. Om was just staring Kali with immense rage. He wanted to throw out Gouri along with her fiance. But he just controlled.

Gouri was shocked. She had actually wanted to escape this man and pursue her dreams. But he has found her now.On top of that her aayi is now with kaali. He is now blackmailing her with aayi's life. She decided, she can't risk her aayi's life. She have to become the prey for Kali's bad deeds to rescue her aayi. She has to leave today, just now.

She didn't know how to face Om. She had really enjoyed his companionship. She always felt secure with him, but she knew that it wasn't a permanent one; but still she just wanted his presence...And now time has come. She will never be able to come back here. She had to accept this.

She thought of telling the truth to him so that he can rescue her...but no Kaali would destroy him too... Even the tears forgot to flow out from her eyes. She took her bag and went to his room. She saw a message from kaali in her phone, to go with him to bareilly after 1 hour.

She entered Om's cabin, with trembling steps.She couldn't face him. Here, Om was trying to control his rage. He saw Gouri at that moment. Hhe wanted to shut her out, but all there beautiful moments were coming to his mind...

"Sir, I...I...I'm going back to my home, as my mother is not well. I have to attend her."

Om just lost his temper, hearing her lying so freely in front of him. He wanted to shout at her. But he didn't, because he didn't have the right to.

He asked, "When will you be back?"

Gouri didn't know what to tell. How will she tell that she will never come back?

"I...I will call you back sir."

Om was just clutching the sharp edge of a wooden idol as a result of which his hand was bleeding. Her lies were flowing like blood.

Gouri saw this and was concerned. She took a piece of cloth and cleaned the wound. Her tear fell on his palm. He was staring at her for one moment. He saw tears in her eyes. He took his palm back and told that he would take care of it.

Gouri was sad. She began walking to man entrance. She was taking each part of the gallery in to her heart as she wouldn't ever come back .She didn't know why Om was so angry. She slowly turned back to see a frowning Om. Then she left from the place in an auto.

Om's eyes were filled. He was once again shocked with that betrayal. He could see her turning back, he knew that she wanted to hear something from him, but he wouldn't utter anything. His eyes were blurred due to tears. Finally she disappeared from his eyes.

But nature knew that these 2 were going to meet again...not just that...these 2 were going to share the same boat of life for the entire birth...that's why the same breeze touched and passed both their hairs...

Precap:- A very big leap following turning of tables????


How is this guys?? Please do drop in your comments.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Nice story please continue 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Wonderful update so much happened
My mind is blank I can't even guess what gonna happen next bcoz of ur precap update next part soon😆

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