Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug)

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

awesome update yar

i have no guessess regarding wats going to happen in the next update

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Naina

@Naina280599

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

I love this story. It gets more interesting with every chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Precap has got me hooked. Post ASAP!! PM me when you post it please. Much love.

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Rishrabh

@Rishrabh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Nice update. Loving the concept. Plz update soon.

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sara1990

@sara1990

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

awesome update. Waiting for your next update

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: senikada
Nice story please continue 😊

Thank you dear😉

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Shraddha Dikshit

@Shraddhadikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: pt311288
Wonderful update so much happened
My mind is blank I can't even guess what gonna happen next bcoz of ur precap update next part soon😆

Just wait and watch dear😉

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Shraddha Dikshit

@Shraddhadikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
i have no guessess regarding wats going to happen in the next update

Thanks ayshi,shall update soon😛

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Zuhu

@Ultimatevikku7

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Superb shraddha 🤗 👏

You are sooo talented !!!

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Sorry for late reply didn't get the pm for this chapter...

Anyway...

I like the way GAuri come out of her fear and Omkara is helping both are coming close and Gauri helped Omkara from svety that's a nice move...

Kaali Thakur's entry and Gauri's helplessness... KAali thakur instigated Omkara hope misunderstanding got clear soon

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Genie

@writergenie17

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Whoa girl! So much happened in this update, I'm still processing it.

First off, so sorry for the late comment. I apologize, I did get your PM and managed to answer a couple of doubts from you but reading the actual update took some time. But when I did get around to reading it, you blew me away sister.

I love everything that's going on... Gauri's efforts and success in easing out of her fears, Omkara and Gauri's slow brewing understanding and comfort with each other, the way she works around his family and even Svetlana... and best of all, everyone's fav KT!

MUs are always fun and great at moving the plot ahead... can't wait for what you have in store for us next!