Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug)

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: sreekailas
U decided to update this one after ages.. But even after this looong gap, this story is still afresh! Thanks for writing these cute chapters!!

Sorry for the long gap dear but happy that u still.loved it...😆

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: eishe10
Wonderful updates😉

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Tasnim

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Hey Shraddha..thanks a lot for the pm...you know, jab aapko pata ho ki aage kya hone wala hain tab story padhne mein aur bhi maaza aata hain.. 😉 😆

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Hi guys, I'm back with khidkitod double dhamaka...

Thanks to all for commenting, shall reply to all of you...sorry...

Hope u would like this chappy.Sorry for typo errors.

Colour 33

Om had come back from his gallery .It had been a long time since he had visited his gallery since he was busy in office.He thought of shifting all the artworks from home to gallery because he so missed his gallery atmosphere.He was preparing a mental note to take gouri there from next day onwards as she wanted to spend some time there.

It was a Sunday noon & gouri's resting time.He slowly entered the room thinking she is taking her nap but was amazed to see her missing.He checked the second floor but failed to find her.Scolding her in his mind he descended downstairs & heard some rustling in kitchen.He reached halfway & saw a very surprising view.

There stood the khidkitod jiju saali duo, Shivay & Gouri working on some dish.Shivay was teaching her & she was simply squeaking like a kid.Om was really adoring it.How shivay was caring her like a small girl.They were singing songs & cooking.Om had never seen this desi side of shivay; he was even imitating Salman at times.

As Om stood there, he felt a hand on his shoulder; it was Anika.

A: oh bte ki what r these 2 doing?

O: didn't u see bhabhi ?

A: but Billiuji told me that he had some important office work.So this was it!!!

O: but this is a really superb combo.She had told me about studying to cook foreign dishes from shivay.

A: come on Om, let's attack them.

They moved on to the kitchen & was wide eyeingly watching all those cooking sessions.

A:(coughing) excuse me r v allowed in this kitchen?

S: of course both of u come..

G: didi , I have studied to make miratisu...

S: oh gouri it's tiramisu...tiramisu

G: vahi toh bhaiyya...I think it's almost ready.

S: cause anika, unlike u she knows cooking so this makes me to teach her easily..

A:Billiuji it's not fair, u r teasing me...

G: oh meri pyari didi, who told u don't know cooking.U have made paneer for me na back in home.

S: omg, I remember eating her paneer on her peheli rasoi...

A: Mr.bagad billa, now I know to cook it properly ok?

O: guys just stop it.Y don't v try the dish now.

" OBRO MOMENTS WITHOUT ME HUH?" came a sound, definitely rudra.

R: bhaiyyas & bhabhis entering kitchen without this handsome bro of yours...

G: hey Rudy ...come on first spoon for you.

R: ( eating, thinking) wow.. chulbul bhabhi...did u make it..?

G: yes, yes...

R: ( frowning) oh no...it's not good.

Gouri's face fell she took back the plate from rudra.

R: it's just superb bhabhi...u r an expert in this.

S: credit goes to ...

A: gouri itself...( laughing)

G: no bhaiyya itself ( giving a hug)

A: oh see Om, they r always best buddies.

O: it's ok bhabhi , me & rudra r there with u . ( hugging her)

R: Yes bhabhi( thumbs up)

G: oh she is first my didi ok...

All share a group hug & a "DIl BOLE OBEROI" moment...

Gouri & Omkara were getting ready.Gouri got a call from dadi asking her whether she is ready to go to their family temple as they had to reach before to do oberois special puja.

G: suno...

O: kya gouri?

G: hmmm...just tell me which sari to wear.

Om was busy in his laptop so couldn't pay more attention.

O: anyone gouri...

She was little annoyed.

G: bolo na... which one...

Om was silent.

G: this is bad.Nowadays u r not caring me; u r only worried about our baby.

She was slightly annoyed but simply wanted to distract Om.

Hearing this Om was disappointed.It was true he couldn't give more time to her in this time of 5 months pregnancy stage. He felt that she was upset with him & he couldn't see but hurt during this time.

O: oh mera chiraiyya, I'm sorry I was a little busy.

G: wo...ka hai na...I'm feeling tired suddenly.I am not able to do anything.So.

O:( worried) is it?What happened?Is it normal in this time?I have told u many times not to do anything big & just relax.U won't listen; u will simply roam here & there isn't it.I will ask dadi to cancel today's trip.

G: nahi uska koi zaroorat nahi hai...I'm I'm.fine...Just select a sari for me & I will b ready fast.

He took a dark green sari with orange border ( Hope IPKKND fans might remember astha & shlok going to temple, that same sari)

After few minutes, Om was ready & he saw her coming wearing the sari.He made her sit in front of the dressing table .

He made her wear her accessories; a small necklace, ear rings, bangles etc.He slowly made her stand up, applied sindoor & made her wear her mangalsutra.He also slightly kissed her on her cheek& then her neck.They were adoring themselves thru the mirror.He kissed her on the forehead too.As he moved his eyes on to her lips & moved closer , the ringing phone distracted them.But he wasn't ready to go.Gouri slightly pushed him & asked to attend the call.

Gouri was all set with the puja items & was coming downstairs.She went to dadi & asked her permission to go.

D: Beta, I know u r a big devotee of Sankarji.So pray to maataji to get a good healthy child & also for the health of ur pati.

G: not only that dadi, I will b asking maataji to bless our whole family with health, wealth & happiness.I will pray for the welfare of our khandaan.

D: ( smiling) tu he sahi bahurani, u r the best gift given to us by maataji.May ur child b also sanskari like u.U will always have my blessings with u.

She saw Om looking on & followed him to the car.She could feel that Om was distressed, she worried for him but chose to b silent as she didn't want to spoil the mood of the trip...

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.

I really don't know if u would like this part.Sorry for typo errors.

Colour 34

Om was driving silently, engrossed in thoughts.He wouldn't b this silent with her, she thought.So something is there.She didn't want to poke her nose in that problem because if it was to b shared, he would've definitely told her.So she was thinking of ways to cheer him up.

G: hey Sankarji...
O; kya...did u forget to take something?
G: han... bilkul...
O: come on gouri, when will u be responsible?U r going to b a mom & still now u r just like this? Acch what is it that I forgot, we will buy from some shop

G: woh...I forgot to take my kambakht...( toffee)

He stared her...
O: gouri u r just impossible...U r still like a child...
Gouri became silent & she was looking out.

O: kya hua mera pagli ko?? Ha...Don't be silent...I want to hear something from you...
G: u were silent all this time , right?So I'm going to b in moun vrath.Im always blabbering, so I will keep quiet.
O: come on gouri, nowadays u r becoming short tempered.Did u see this honey?What ur mommy is doing?So after u come out u should b always be with papa, be a papa's girl done?

Gouri was giggling.
G: so u r planning to take her in ur team ha?I will show u ok? Nandi...

It was just few more kilometers from the temple.They had stopped at a dhaba for having some light food.

G: After our honey's arrival, v should come with her to this dhaba, such a beautiful ambience.
O: r u alright gouri?U told that u were feeling fatigued.R u fine now?
G: ha...par I'm having slight headache now.
O: y don't v go back then?
G: nahi...it's maataji ki puja.She will.give us all prosperity if v pray to her in spite of all our health issues.Just see I will b alright as soon as I reach the Mandir.
O: fine have it now.
G: I don't want omkaraji...I might vomit ...
O: no , u will b further more tired.See I will feed u.Open ur mouth.

He feeded her with small pieces of roti.She was showing faces but he kept on feeding her.An old couple sitting opposite to them were smiling seeing this.Gouri was embarrassed seeing them looking at this.
G: bus karo na , see they r looking us.
O: so what?meri patni, meri marzi. What is wrong if I feed you?
G: I'm not a kid ...to do this...
O: of course, I'm feeding both my pyaara sa bacchom, U & my honey...

Gouri was moved; she couldn't control her tears hearing this.
O: kya hua is it spicy?
G:mm...she didn't want to make it emotional.
He made her drink water.As the food finished, he slowly pecked her in the cheek.She smiled innocently as he went to wash off...

After almost 1 hour, shivay was on his way to home.He thought about gouri & Om; he took his phone to do a call to them.But as he was about to dial, he received a call from an unknown number.

Person: Mr.shivay Singh oberoi?
S: Yes what is it?
P: ur brother & his wife had met with an accident and is now admitted in Bhatia General Hospital.Please do come immediately, the situation is a bit worse.

The phone fell down from Shivay as he did a sudden break; his heart was aching & eyes were being blurry.He rushed to the hospital.

Meanwhile he called anika & asked her to take Rudy to come to the hospital.He asked her not to inform anyone else about this.A shattered anika , took rudra & went off to the hospital immediately.

As they reached the ICU, aniru saw shivay standing all broken in front of it.
A: kya hua, shivay what happened to both (crying)
S: woh...relax anika it's ok both r in ICU.Doctors didn't tell anything till now.Dont worry they will get the best treatment itself; if not in this hospital then any other best one .I will take them; nothing will happen...
R: bhaiyya, I'm feeling tensed.I want to see both of them.Please bhaiyya ( crying)

Shivay was hugging both & consoling them while the doctors came out...

Precap:- why did Om had to call shivay at midnight??

Expecting tomatoes, chamelis from all of you.Dont kill me for giving such a track.After all life is not always smooth , right??Soon everything is gonna b normal...

Until we see with next chap,
Bye, take care & love u lotzzz

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Tasnim

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Oh God..!! The most heartbreaking news is coming...

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Hawww shraddha not done han...mujhe lg hi raha as they are going for temple kuch na kuch is going to b happend but thiss!!!!accident!!!omg they had met with an accident but how ?? Hope in next chapters you clear this..hope they are fine hope their baby is fine but mere mind ne already assume kr liya.. we cant send you chamelies dear nai toh next chapi kon dega😆

Btw both chapi are amazing..beautifully written