Adi FF: You promised us a Family!

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This FF is set right before the leap and my version of how I would have like the characters to portrayed. Constructive criticism is welcome :)

Adi FF: You promised us a Family!

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"I am leaving with Shagun Mumma." He spoke his last words to the Bhalla family and most importantly to his father who stood holding Little Pihu in his hands looking indecipherable, and moved out of the house holding Shagun's hand firmly not bothering to look back.

There was nothing to look back - no Ishimaa , no Papa , no Ruhi. They had failed him - they didn't give him the Family they promised to give. I am not coming back , Pappa. I hate you , you didn't keep your promise , Ishimaa.

Little drops slid down his eyes as he finally looked back one last time as the house which no longer was home as the cab moved away.


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Wonderful prologue... Waiting for the story to unfold

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