zamane se aurake le jayega saawariya. AK,KA,NP,SR

hi everyone this is my first fanfic although i have read many. let me know what you all think

Characters

Dia-18 years old. bffs with anjali,roshni and priya. loves aman. hottest girl of college. very caring and loving and the jaan of the college.

Aman. 18 years old. sexiest n hottest guy in college all the girls are crazy over his chocolate brown eyes, fit body and sexy voice. very sweet and kind hearted. secretly in love with dia. bffs with shabd, neev and kavya.

Roshni. 18yrs old

very mischevious and fun. loves to tease dia and want to get dia and aman together. loves shabd angads friend.very hot

Shabd. 18 years old. sweet goodlookind and charming. treats dia like his sister and is verry close to her teases aman that shes hot and that shes his girlfriend. wants aman and dia to be together. loves roshni and has told dia but doen;t want her to know as he thinks she may not feel the same way.

Anjali. bff of dia, roshni n priya. very beautiful, fun and naughty and outspoken . loves teasing her friends. very close to dia as they know each other since pre-school. alwawys hatchign plans to get aman and dia together. loves arguing with kavya as he loves himself so she annoys putting him down to earth.

Kavya. 18 years old bffs with aman , shabd and neev. loves arguing with anjali. is a flirt. very cute and charming.

Priya. 18 years old. bffs with dia, roshni and anjali. very simple sweet and traditional. very close to neev as they are childhood friends. waiting for her prince charming.

Neev. 18 years old bffs with aman, kavya and shabd. a very big flirt. very close to prachi his childhood friend. verr charming and cute

A girl is getting ready in front of the mirror. A girl with long chocolate and golden streaked hair is brushing her hair putting on a touch of lipgloss. She's a little conscious of how she looks because although she looks gorgeous its quite a change for her as she usually ties her hair back never wears makeup and has never wore contacts before, but today she has blue contacts on.

GIRL: . Oh god I have to go.

Narrator: Shes always had guys interested her because although she doesn't really believe it shes really beautiful not only that but she's intelligent and speaks her mind so shes the jaan of the college. Shes never payed that much interest to guys but one day she fell in love when she saw this guy save a child from getting run over there was just something about him when he spoke to the child so lovingly and the way he blasted the driver. (not only was he incredibly good looking but he had a good heart unlike the other guys) . she had/nt spoken to him much but got to know a lot about him through others and she found his reputation was just as she had imagined. There was something about him which just made her think they were destined for one another.

As she was walking many guys turned to look at her she was dressed quite simply but very stylishly she had black skinny jeans on which were tucked into her high heeled platform leather boots which were hugely in fashion but not many had them since they were expensive and she had a hot pink dress with butterfly embroidery in different colours and finally a delicate little black zip sweater. She had a little kajal on and a touch of lipgloss. The guys around her were practically drooling, Its Dia!

Dia: hi priya are you ok

Priya turns around n gives her a look like she wants to kill her. Me thinking isko kya hoga ya aisa dekh ri jaise ke main jaanwar ho aur wo hunter.

Miss Julia: everyone inside please

the two girls sit down on the same table. A third girl is staring at dia . all of a sudden she reaches forward and say: dia is that you?

Dia: Sarah of course it me!

Sarah: oh my god u look so different u've gotten even fairer and also wth ur contacts I thought u were some new half caste girl and to be honest I thought u'd be a bitch cz u look amazing.

Priya: I thought the same thing! That's why I gave u that funny look

Dia: u guys make me laugh.

After class

Roshni: have u seen dia everyones saying shes looking mindblowing

Divanka: shes right in front of u khoti.

Dia: come on lets go we have to go to history class

Roshni: yea I knw why ure so excited to go history ;)

Dia: kya matlab hain iska tum to janti ho mujhe history pasand hai.

Roshni: haan phar itna ni jitna tujhe aman pasand hai

Dia: please woh to mere taraf dekha ta hi nahi

Roshi: my dear janu woh tujhe dekta hai lekin chupke chupke jaise tu usko dekhthi hai

Dia: jaa jhoth na bolo

As she's saying this she hears someone say: 'Damn Baby you'r looking hot!' and they slap her bum.

Dia: (slaps the guy without looking at his face coz the guy has his sunglasses on and shes really angry) tumhe mujhe chone ki himmat kaise khi u pervert.

The guy takes his glasses off and we see his face and then his body. He has big chocolate brown eyes which makes any girl melt , and hes a mixture of tanned and fair, he's around six foot and has a six pack. Hes our very own Aman

Dia(realising it can't have been Aman who misbehaved with her) : Oh my god im so sorry , tumhe chot to nahi lakhi and she puts her hand on his cheek rubbing it softly

Aman just stares at her and then snaps out of it and starts walking towards her until he has her backed into a walk then he whispers huskily: 'aaj to tumhe marne ka irada hai'

Dia (stuttering)kkkyyaa?

Aman (laughing) mera matlab ki tumhare adaa se saare dewaane ho hi gaye wo bhi jo pehle se tumhare deewane hai' anywayz ill see you class and he walks off smiling.

Dia blushes.

Roshni: acha yeh kya ho ra haa taa

Dia: kuch nahi maine aman ko galti se tappar mara

Roshni: to tumhare gaal tomato ki tara laal ku hoga usne aasa kya keydia meri jaaneman waise jahan se maine dekh rahi thi tum to usse pyar kar rahi thi apna hath uske gal pe rakh ri thi (laughing). Aur wo tumhe itne pyar se dekh ra tha ,(starts singing) raja ki aayegi baarat rangeeli ho gi raat magan main nacho gayi

Dia: Roshni I'm going to kill you.

Dia is chasing after roshni.

Should i continue. let me know if u all like it.

Preview: Dia and Roshni are exchanging notes to each other in class but one comes into amans hand..and Roshni falls into someone's arms ;)

I will only continue if i receive mre replys atleast 7-10 replies. so if anyone wnts me to continue and comment. and if anyone doesn't like anything abt the fanfic thn also comment as even contructive criticism is appreciated. 😊 xxx

Great story-line! omgg u hav my 3 fav coupless yayy!

great please continue.....awsome baby.... please continue

thnks for the comments evryone. im writing a part but will decide to post it when i hve mre replies. 😊 xxx

k great ff
i hpe you cont soon and
i love the cocept grat job
lots
of
love rhea

Originally posted by: superstar15

k great ff
i hpe you cont soon and
i love the cocept grat job
lots
of
love rhea

aww thnks. i'm writing the part and ill post it soon hopefully it will be better than the first. and will get mre replies. take care and thanks again to evry1 who hs commented and all thse who hve viewed this but not commented plz comment it doesnt tke long

xxx😊

hey gr8 story line...

continue soon

hi evryone ill be posting another part on friday or saturday, thnks for all the replies. and as for all the other viewers who dint comment i hpe to hear frm u in my 2nd prt which hpefully will be better 😊 xxx

Part 2

Teacher : Class as last week u missed an important science lesson the history class is cancelled today and this is a science lesson can everyone take their turn by boiling some water n then follow the instructions on the board

Dia is boiling her water and a girl walks over to her and pushes her towards the sink so that dia nearly falls , we see her face , she is a average looking girl with lots of make up and she's wearing a extremely small mini skirt with a crop top. Shes none other than Mishti

Mishti: Oh soo sorry Dia (sarcastically)

Dia: Its ok Misti tumhari to aadat hai asi ganone harkate karne ka

Misti: Atleast main tumhari tara miss goody two shoes nahin hoo, aur waise bhi aman ko to mere aadate bahut achi lag thi hai and he even asked me out.

Dia: Mishti mera dimaag hai main tumhari thara bewakoof nahi hoon , main janti hoon ki aman assa lakha nahi hai jo tumhare jaisi larkiyon main koi interest bhi lahe , kyunki wo bahut shareef aur alag sa larka hai

Misti: Tum ko to bas yeh marche hai ke wo mujhe pasand karta hai , tumhare jaisi
Simple larki ko kon pasand karega tumto kissi souten banage kabal nahi ho , aur aman
Mera hi hoga samejhi

Dia is really angry by now and then shes gets an idea. Shes picks up the kettle and
When she pours the water into the jug she 'accidently' throws some water
on mishti's hand

Misti: AAAHHHHH u kamini wht have u done to my hand

Dia: Oh im sorry my hand slipped par shaid yeh uparwale ka ishara ta ke tumhe apni
Bure nazrein kisi aur ke pyar par nahi dalni chaye. (walks off smirking)

Misti: thinks Isse to main dekh lungi!

After class

Shabd : Hey Babe Looking Good! Whistles

Dia: Thinking this is the 100th time someone has whistled at me abhi to main is idiot ko nahi chorungi. Turns around. Oh shabd tum bhi na I thought someone mujhe line mar rat ha.

Shabd: Maine Chahu to bhi tumhe line nahi mar sakta akhir tum meri bhabhi jo ho aur waise bhi mujhe abhi marna nahi hai , aman ko agar lakha main tumhe line marta hoon to wo to mujhe zinda hi bury kar dega. .




Dia: (blushes) Shabd shutup! U shld be thinking of how get roshni to love u nt me and aman. Waise mere pass ike idea hai uske liye.

Shabd: KYA!!. Main kuch bhi karne ke liye taiyarr hoon.

Dia: Tumhe bas yeh zair karma hoga roshni ke samne ke tum mujhe pasand karte ho , aur mujhe bhi natak karma hoga ke mujhe tum pasand ana shurru hoge ho aur phir jab roshni jealous ho jayegi to wo hud hi apne dil ki baat bol de gi.

Shabd: Ok bt whts the first step.

Dia: shes coming quickly take some flowers from the grass and give me and give me a hug.

Shabd does this and hugs Dia

Roshni: ye shabd kisko gala laga ra hai. She sees Dia and is shocked she feels really jealous. Just then Aman comes and sees and gets mad yeh shabd meri dia ko hug kyun kar rsa hain

Shabd sees Aman

Shabd ; Thinking baap re baap main to gaya meri raksha karma prabhu! Er Dia see you later. he runs off.

Shabd reaches the canteen and breathes with relief and then feels a hand on his shoulder.

Aman: Tum kaha jaa re te?

Shabd: Wo main…

Aman : Shabd iske pehle ke ma tumhare chare ko itna bura banao ke tumhe plastic sugery ke zaarursat ho tell me why were u hugging dia.

Shabd: Wo itni hot lakh rahi thi isle aur waise bhi wo meri girlfriend hai na tumhe kyun jaalan ho rahi hai (laughing)

Aman: tere to.

Next Day


Dia: Anjali is back today I can't wait!


Roshni: yeahhh me too!

Anju: tumne zikar kiya aur main agayi!

Dia and roshni : Anju! They both hug her.

Kavya: Hi Bandaria , waise anju tumhe wo Michael Jackson wali rang ke treatment kar wani chahe kyunki tumhara chehra gorilla jaisa kala hogaya hai after coming from Turkey

Anju: Kavya u monkey , u dog atleast main tumhari thara nahi hoo , jo mithun ke hamshakal lakh te ho!. Come on Roshni ,Dia main duffers se bhaat nahi karma chahti.


As they are walking two guys are running really fast and they don't see roshni and Dia and they fall on top of them. Aman falls on Dia and Shabd falls on Roshni both couples are in an eye lock.

heres the 2nd part sorry for the long long wait. let me know what u all think and people who view this plz comment bth gd and negative points are welcome. hpe u enjoy the part , wrote it in aursh so sorry if its rubbish promise i will get better as continue writing the parts. thanks xxx