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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey hun cool ff.....lol loved angads character in here...lol so hot...cant see shabdss pik though....but i assume hes shabd from maayka? anyways dooo continue soon...drop me a PM when uve updated 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi hun.yeh its shabd from maayka i'll try to fnd sme pics of hs tht wrk. n i ll let u knw wen i update nxt. thnks 😊
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Part 3.

Both couples are still locked in an eye-lock. Then all of a sudden Kavya appears

Kavya: Ahem Ahem

Dia is startled and realizes where she is and she blushes

Dia : Erm Aman sab dekh re hain cn we gt up

Aman: assi bi kya jaldi hai…

Dia: Kya?

Aman: Kuch nahin I was joking joking(he grins naughtily and gets up and puts out his hand)

Dia takes his hand and gets up

Dia: im sorry wo main dekh ke chal rahi nahi thi.

Aman: But im not sorry it was my pleasure

Dia: What?

Aman : I meant im glad I broke your fall.

Kavya: tum duno to ut gaye par in dono lovebirds ko to dekho (he is pointing at shabd and roshni who are still in the sme position with shabd on top of roshni locked in an eyelock) .

Then Aman wanting to get revenge on shabd for earlier gets an idea , he grins and then whispers the plan to dia n kavya.

Aman: calls neevs and tells him the plan.

Neev arrives dressed as a teacher called mr havasham who is the most feared teacher in the college.

Neev ; (imitating the voice of Mr Havasham) HOW DARE U RUIN THE REPUTATION OF THIS COLLEGE WITH BEING SO INTIMATE IN PUBLIC! THIS IS A COLLEGE NOT UR PERSONAL BEDROOM! UP ,GET UP I SAY! (he pulls shabd up by the ear.

Shabd: (lookings absolutely terrified): wo sir im sorry main gir gaya tha

Roshni: haan sir u see we weren't looking n we fell.

Neev: that's not good I will not tolerate such behaviour in school and u both will be punished.

Shabd(gulps): Par Sir…

Neev: bas main tumhari ek nahin sune wala. Ur punishment is u hve to run around the college playground in only ur boxers !.

Shabd: what Sir! Par itni larkiyon ke saamne main kaise…

Neev: shutup and do it now

Shabd has no choice but to do so and runs around the playground and all the girls and guys stop to look at him

Girl No 1: hai main marjawa kina sona munda hai

Girl 2 : wow he has such a sexy body…

Girl 3 (stops Shabd and puts her arms around him ) Hi handsome (in a sexy way) . ur place or mine

Shabd: (pushes her way) get away from me. Oh my god why do bad thngs happen to me only why oh why.

Shabd reaches back to the group and puts his clothes back on

. Dia , Aman and Kavya are dying to laugh and unable to control themselves begin laughing.

Neev takes of his wig and Hitler style moustache and grins at shabd

Neev: to kaisi lagi meri ye punishment

Shabd: OH MY GOD NEEV IM GONNA KILL U! shabd chases after neev.

Next Day:

Anjali , Dia, Aman and Kavya are in a maths lesson. The teacher is off but they have to complete a practice exam paper.

Dia and anjali are sat next to each other when aman and kavya cme and set across them.

Aman(looking for an excuse to talk to dia) : Dia I don't get this problem could u explain it to me ?

Dia: Sure (dia starts explaining the problem) .

Aman: thanks u explained it really well

Kavya: could u explain me it as well

Dia explains it not once but 5 times but still Kavya doesn't get it n dia is fed up and so is Anjali.

Anjali: agar tumne dia ko ik bar bolhe ke wo jawab phir tumhe explain kare to maa kasam mai tumhe nahin chorungi, u stupid duffer plz shutup!

Kavya: oh plz like I want to talk to u.

They all start working on the other questions silently. But then all of a sudden Dia feels someone moving there leg on her foot n leg she starts smiling at aman thinking its him. Aman smiles back adoringly. Then all of a sudden he feel someone playing footsie wth hm n he does so back n grins naughtily at dia not realising it anjali as she thought it was kavya n she ws jst wnting to tease him. Kavya is also playing footsie with Dia as he was also trying to annoy Anjali and he feels Dia responding so he is giving cheesy grins to anjali.

The lesson ends but they all are sitting there playing footsie n grinning.

Roshni arrives . She sees them sititng there smiling and thinks huh whts going on. On closer inspection she realise the truth n laughs. Hearing her laugh dia stands up and so does kavya. Thn aman realises tht he cn still feel the leg on his foot and both he and anjali jump up.

Roshni: I wish I had a camera so I could present tht video in assembly lol.

All the four are looking really embrassed by the mistaken footsie.

Roshni grabs dia n anajli n walks off still laughing.

Two Hours later.

Shabd: Dia so whats the next stage of the plan.

Dia: the next stage is me and u are going to join a salsa class

Shabd: why salsa?

Dia; Because its very up close dancing and seeing us doing that is bound to make roshni is bound to get jealous n admit she loves u! only thing is we need roshni to join with someone 2

Shabd: u r a genius! Since roshni needs a partner then why not aman he also will get jealous to see you so close to me, I just hope im alive to get married to roshni after he sees tht though lol

Dia: Lol main hoon na aman ko thanda karne ke liye. Par how are we going to convince them to be partners.

Shabd : easy(he whispers a plan to dia in silent mode)

Dia: fantastic now we will definitely succeed.

Next Day

Kavya: hi aman have u heard about the salsa dance classes .

Aman: yeah I did. Im thinking of joining , I just need a partner , but since dia loves dance I was thinking to ask her.

Kavya: but she already joined up with someone.

Aman: what with who?

Kavya: Shabd

Aman: ye mera dost kyun kabab main haadi bane ko tula hai.

Kavya: No problem tum bhi join karlo kisi aur ke saath dia ko jalane ko aur phir shaid tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekh ke wo tumse apna pyar ishar kar le.

Aman: Par koun?

Kavya: Roshni of course

Aman : but why roshni

Kavya: because shes dias best friend n she knows u love dia n vice versa and so she wnt misunderstand u and will help u.

Roshni is walking past.

Kavya: Roshni!

Roshni: hi jiju hi kavya , wht happened.

Aman: I was wondering if u would join the salsa class with me

Roshni: but salsas very intimate dancing so why don't u ask dia im sure she dying for u to ask.

Aman: yehi to problem hain shes already joined and that too with shabd. So I thought we should join as well to make them jealous aur waise bhi saali be to addi ghar waali hoti hain na;).

Roshni: that's great I'll do anything to get u n dia together after u r my jiju ;). But why would I make tht nautanki shabd jealous

Aman: Meri pyari saali, tumhare dil ka hal tumhare jiju se acha koun jaan sakta hai , aur waise bhi kal jo huha tha use to saaf pata chalta hain ke tum shabd ko chahte ho. Anyways lets go we have lots of planning to do.


At night.

Dia , Anjali, Prachi and Roshni are having a sleeover at Anjali's house. (ive decided Aman and Anjali are twins )


The girls are playing spin the bottle. The bottle points at Prachi.

Anjali: Truth or dare sweety

Prachi: Truth

Roshni: darpoke. Acha ur truth…wo to tum raat ko sapne main bahut smile kar rahi wo kyun tha

Prachi (blushes) wo main dekha ke meri aur neev ki shaadi ho gahi hain aur mere 2 bache bhi hain

Roshni: bas itna, socho agar tumhare dus bache hote to tum kitni hush hoti lol

Dia: bas karo dekho na hamari prachi kaisi tomato ke tara lal ho g
ahi hain. Lets carry on

They spin the bottle a few times and it lands on dia twice and she chooses truth twice. Then it lands on Anjali

Dia: truth or dare

Anjali: dare obviously

Dia: ok u have to go downstairs and make kavya a drink , and then seductively sit across him with ur legs in his lap, and run ur hand across his face and say hi sexy ur looking so good that I cn't control myself ;) (kavya , angad and shabd are downstairs)

Anjali: NO WAY!

Dia: Kyun darr gayi lol

Anjali: of course not. Fine.

They all go down stairs and sit on the sofa except fo anjali who walks over to kavya.

Anjali: kavya im jst gnna get some drinks would u like some

Kavya(thinking why is she being so nice kuch to hai): yea I'll have a coke plz

Aman: yeh me too.

Anjali: I was only asking Kavya

Aman: huh

Anjali sevres the drinks to the girls and finally serves kavya's whos sitting on the sofa. She walks over sits on the armchair and stretches her legs on kavya's lap.

Anjali: Hey sexy ure looking so unbelievably good that I can't control myself around you;).

Kavya: (shocked out of his wits but feeling very excited) To aakhir tum mujhpe maar gayi just like all other girls

Anjali ( gets up and kicks Kavya) : plz it was just a dare like I would even throw up on a monkey like u. anways lets continue spin the bottle.

Shabd: can we join in ?

Dia: sure why not baby

Aman and Roshni both look pissed off and jealous when they hear dia calling shabd baby.

They spin the bottle and it lands on Aman.

Roshni: truth or dare

Aman: dare.

Roshni : Ok u have to kiss Dia!

Dia: roshni hve sme shame!

Roshni: kyun aman tum to darpoke nahin ho , to tell me do u accept the dare.

Aman (gives his trademark angad grin) koi shak after all im Aman Khanna I have a reputation to uphold.

He walks over to dia grabs her waist and starts kissing her. Dia at first is really embrassed because everyone is looking but then she loses herself in the passion, puts her arms around his neck and the kiss deepens and continues for over ten minutes.

Anjali: Bhabhi will u plz leave bhaiya nw urn t married yet;)

Roshni: to kya hua inki shaadi kar wa lete hain.

Shabd: Aman kuch to sharam kar yar maina ke mere bhai hote we dia tumhari aadi gharwali huey par koi to haad hoti hai na ;)

Aman and dia pull apart and dia runs upstairs blushing whilst aman is still grinning. He goes over to shabd and pours his drink over him and then laughs and walks off.

Kavya: ye to gaye kaam se

theres the next part. i hope i receive more comments this time , so plz if u read thn plz comment good n bad comments r welcome bt its jst rude if u dnt comment and im sorry but i wnt update anymore if no one comments and ill accept my ff is bad. thanks hope no one is offended im just beign honest and i not tryign to be rude. thanks to all those people who liked the ff and commented i hope the ff continues to live up to ur expectations. sorry if there is typing erros i didn't have time to check it. ill promise ill improve in the nxt part i was jst really stuck for ideas so sorry if the part ws crap whcih i thnk it ws, so if u have suggestions or ideas comment or pm me. thanks 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW I just love your fan-fiction! 👏 👏 👏 It's superb. I love how the characters are so close to eachother, great friendship. 😊 Seemslike everyone has a crush, how cute. 😳 It's cute how Aman and Roshni are getting jealous seeing Kripa and Shabd together. The spin-the-bottle game was intense...Anjali talking seductively to Kavya && Aman and Divya kissing. It was a cute and fun scene. Your concept so far is great, can't wait to read more. No worries, the last part was fantastic, it was my favorite part so far! 😃
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Zoe hun when are you going to continue? I just can't wait to read the next part. I'm really looking foreward to it. Write soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: totally_desi

Zoe hun when are you going to continue? I just can't wait to read the next part. I'm really looking foreward to it. Write soon 😃

hi .thanks im pleased to hear tht ure lookign forward to the next part. at the moment im busy with my exams if i gt sme time i mite post a part as i've already started it. otherwise i'll definately continue in the beginning of june when my exams finish.😊

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Part 4



Dia is sitting on the bed daydreaming about her and amans kiss

Dia : (thinking) jab me aman mujhe chule to mujhe aone ap par kaboo nahi hota , ap to mujhe aisa lagta hai ke main uske bigar jee nahi paungi woh mera puar hi nahi mere dil ka hisa hai.

Aman is in the living room the guys have left so hes all alone and the tv is on at the background but hes lost in his thoughts

Aman: (thinking) dia ko bura to nahi laga jo bhi huha, nahi wo to usske liye dare tha par mere liye.. to wo mera pyar ka ikraar tha.

the show on tv is nach baliye and amir and sanjeeda are performing on this song, Aman looks up and imagines himself and Dia dancing together in their place . at the same time dia is listening to the song upstairs and she begins dancing imagining an imaginary aman dancing with her


Aman--
(Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke) - 2
Ae meri jaane wafa
Teri meri meri teri ek jaan hai
Saath tere rahenge sada, tumse na honge judaa
Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Mere sanam, teri kasam chhodenge ab na yeh haath
Yeh zindagi

--Dia--
La la la

--Aman--
Guzregi ab

--Dia--
La la la

--Aman--
Hamdam tumhaare hi saath
Apna yeh vaada raha, tumse na honge judaa

--Dia--
Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Ae meri jaane wafa
Teri meri meri teri ek jaan hai
Saath tere rahenge sada, tumse na honge judaa
Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Aah aah aah aah

--Aman--
Maine kiya

--Dia--
La la la

--Aman--
Hai raat din

--Dia--
La la la

--Aman--
Bas tera hi intezaar

--Dia--
Tere bina aata nahin ek pal mujhe ab qaraar

--BOTH--
Hamdam mera mil gaya, ab hum na honge judaa - 2

--Aman--
Tumse milke

--Dia--
Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke

--BOTH--
Armaan hue poore dil ke
Ae meri jaane wafa
Teri meri meri teri ek jaan hai
Saath tere rahenge sada, ab hum na honge judaa
La la la la, la la la la la la la la
La la la la la la la la

The next morning

Aman goes in Anjali's room without knocking

Dia is standing in front of the mirror about to zip up her dress when she sees aman, shes absolutely mortified aman turns around and tries to hide the growing grin on his face and dia quickly zips her kameez up.

Dia: sorry I should have locked the door and changed

Aman: koi baat nahi jo bhi hota hai ache ke liye hota

Dia: kya?

Aman: I mean I should've knocked so its my fault not yours. I just came to get anjalis college timetable since I couldn't find mine.

Dia: Anjali was in a rush she actually had a meeting with the principal so shes left.

Aman: aur baaki sab I mean Roshni aur prachi

Dia: wo bhi chalege , kyun ki prachi ne apna naam dena ta koi nahi class main , aur roshni keh rahi thi ki usko koi zaroori kaam hai

Aman: So then I guess that leaves just you and me na. it's a nice day for once as u know british weather is unpredictable (he rolls his eyes) and I think we have half a day off today from college so we could go to the beach ?

Dia: errm yea that would be great thanks.

Aman: mere dost bhi mujhe thanks nahi kehte kyunki ye achi baat nahi aur tum to… anyways I'll see u in 15 minutes.

Dia: ok baba I won't say thanks or sorry.

Aman; aur dia ek aur baat tumhe backless dress bahut acha lagta agar tum pehnti ;) (he laughs and walks away)

Dia: she slaps his arm, aman tum bhi na she pushes him out of the room and blushes

Dia: paagal


Aman and Dia are in the car and keep stealing glances at each other when the other isn't looking. Aman just can't keep his eyes off Dia in her white dress she looking like a beautiful angel, and Dia couldn't help looking at how sexy aman looked as usual


Dia is wearing this with small pearl necklace and earrings. She has no makeup on other than lip gloss , eye liner and a little blush.



Aman is wearing




Hugo Boss t-shirt




Armani Jeans


They reach the beach and start walking around.

Dia: Aman lets make a big sandcastle!
Aman (laughs) tum bilkul bachi hoo

Dia: am not!

Aman : are too

Dia: am not

Aman: are too

Dia: AM NOT!!!

Aman: OK Woman don't stress! Honestly u woman are so touchy we say one little thing and u're all out to kill us

Dia: hey say what you like about me but don't generalise that to women!

Aman: but ure all the same hum thori se galti bhi kare to tumhe larkiya hungama macha de te ho (laughs)

Dia: Jao main tumse bhat nahi karti laloo ( she stomps off)

Aman: Dia ruko to

Dia: main nahi sunehe wali tum jao!

Aman : Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon
Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon
Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon
Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon
Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon
Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon
Agar Tum Kaho
Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon
Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon
Agar Tum Kaho

He buys roses from a kid and gives them to dia. She takes them off the stalks and gives them back to him. Just imagine the rest being like the scene from yes boss.

Tumko Bulaoon
Ye Palkhein Bichhaoon
Kadam Tum Jahan Jahan Rakho
Zameen Ko Aasmaan Banaoon
Sitaron Se Sajaoon
Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon
Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon
Agar Tum Kaho

Main Titliyon Ke Peechhe Bhagoon
Main Jugnuon Ke Peechhe Jaoon
Ye Rang Hai Vo Roshni Hai
Tumhare Paas Dono Laoon
Jitni Khushbuain Baag Mein Milein
Haan Jitni Khushbuain Baag Mein Milein
Main Laoon Vahan Pe Ki Tum Ho Jahan
Jahan Pe Ek Pal Bhi Thehro Main Gulsitaan Banaoon
Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon
Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon
Agar Tum Kaho

Agar Kaho To Main Sunaoon
Tumhein Haseen Kahaniyaan
Sunogi Kya Meri Zabani
Tum Ek Pari Ka Daastaan
Ya Main Karoon Tumse Bayaan
O Ya Main Karoon Tumse Bayaan
Ki Raja Ko Rani Mili Thi Kahan
Kahaniyon Ke Nagar Mein Tumhein Leke Jaoon
Agar Tum Kaho

Tumko Bulaoon
Ye Palkhein Bichhaoon
Kadam Tum Jahan Jahan Rakho
Zameen Ko Aasmaan Banaoon
Sitaron Se Sajaoon
Agar Tum Kaho

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon
Ki Aarzoo Jagaoon
Agar Tum Kaho
Agar Tum Kaho


Aman: maaf kiya

Dia: nahi

Aman: dekho main tumhare gaana gaya ab khaan phi phakra hoon ab to maan jao na

Dia: nahi pehle mere kuch sharte hain

Aman: kaisi sharte

Dia: jaisi bhi hai tumhe maani parengi warna main tumhe maaf nahi karoongi

Aman: ok baba fine.

Dia: pehla condition tumhe 500 situps karne parenge
;
Aman : what yaha sand par but my clothes will get all dirty and 1000 in one go are u crazy!

Dia: tum karte te ho ya nahi

Aman : Ok.

He does 100 situps and then stands up gasping with his t-shirt covered with san

Aman: now what

Dia: you have to make a pass at that guy over there. She points at a gay man wearing tight red skinny jeans and a short white vest top.

Aman: what! No way Woman!

Dia: kyun daar gaye

Aman: Nahi Aman Khaana kissi se nahi darta. U just wait


Aman walks over to the guy and says Hi Im Aman.

Person: Hi Gorgeous Im Lawrence.

Aman: You too darling. Fancy going for a coffee

Lawrence (excitedly): sure baby lets go your place or mine? ;)

Dia is in splits laughing

Aman: Err im sorry but this was simply a dare which I had to do and im not that type of guy im in love with a girl

Lawrence: Honey don't worry I understand ure in denial still about being gay but its ok I'll be gentle with you ;)

Aman: im really not like that. Ok I have to go. He runs off.

Lawrence: but Aman darling atleast give me your number!

Aman reachs Dia , graps her and runs to the car. They get in the car and drive off

Dia: Oh my god I can't believe you did that lol

Aman: shut up I just saved myself that guy was just not taking no for an answer. Anyways please tell me that's your last condition for forgiving me

Dia: no you have one more.

Aman: ek aur now what do you want me to run around naked or something!

Dia (blushes): Nahi mujhe ice-cream chaye

Aman: ok lets go. They reach the an ice-cream parlour.

Aman: ok which ice cream do you want?.

Dia: Ben and Jerry's Chocolate fudge ice-cream

Dia sits down and aman returns with two mini ice cream tubs.

Dia starts eating hers and aman goes to eat his but drops it.

Dia: yeh kya aman u dropped ur ice-cream and I've finished mine so u can't have any of that.

Aman: theres a little left. he grins reaches over and licks the icecream on above dia's lip. He moves away and notices dia has her eyes closed and looks mesmerised.

Dia realises aman has moved and opens her eyes.

Dia: wo chale…I have to meet shabd for the salsa class

Aman: (thinking) yeh shabd kyun bhar bhar kabab main haadi banta hai!

Aman: yeh sure lets go roshni bhi mera interzaar kar rahi hogi

Dia (thinks) Roshni aura man ke beech main kya ho raha hain wo pehle to intne close nahi te

They reach to college

Shabd: Dia darling tum aagayi main tumka kab se intezaar kar raha tha. He hugs dia tightly

Dia: (whispers) shabd tum mujhe itna tight kyun hug kar re ho aur wo bhi aise.

Shabd(whispers) its all part of the plan baby tum bhi pose karo na waha dekho roshni hai hamare peeche aur mere ache aman hai . aman ko to dekho kitna jealous ho ra hai he's looking like he's getting madder every minute.

Dia: Im sorry sweetheart I was missing you too but I just had a few distractions.

Aman(thinking she spends time with me and misses that duffer! Well atleast she thinks im a distraction. If she thinks she can make me jealous I'll show her)

Aman: Roshni Oh my Baby I missed you soo much he plants two kisses on roshni's cheeks and puts his arms around her waist.

Dia( thinking how dare he mujhe jealous karne ke liye aman roshni ke itne kareeb jar a hain aur roshni bhi usse rokh nahi rahi!

Roshni: (sees dia) Jaan tum kahaan te meri to jaan hi nikal rahi thi!

Dia thinks jaan! What is roshni ko main tekh kar hi rahoongi. Shabd looks shocked out of his wits.

Dia: chalo shabd lets go its time to salsa baby!

Aman: yea me and roshni are also coming aren't we jaanu

They all leave for the class

The Salsa instructer explains they will all watch his performance with his partner and then try their best to perform it like that and then the best two performers will dance together and providing they do dance together will achieve the best couple award.

All the students do the dance. But dia and Aman are chosen as the best and are asked to perform on a sexy salsa number and are awarded the best couple award

Teacher: that was fantastic there so much passion and you both had great chemistry ; it looked like you are made for each other.

end of part

theres the next part sorry if there are any mistakes i didn;t have time to proof read. i know this part was rubbish and not upto the mark and im sorry about that but its just because i didnt have much time since im busy with exams. i promise for the next part which i'll write in about threew weeks as my exams will finish then; will be much beter. please comment both positive comments and criticism is welcome. and if anyone has any good ideas for how the stroy could progress then please let me know. thanks 😊 xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow awesome part dear 👏 👏 👏 sorry i couldn't read it earlier. it's funny how aman is getting jealous seeing dia with shabd and how dia is getting jealous seeing aman with roshni. that scene where aman had to flirt with the gay guy was halarious 😆 you're such a fantastic writer, i just love your scenes. they're very creative and fun to read. 😊 i love how dia and aman danced together at the end. i could just picture them doing the hot salsa dance number together 😳 write the next part soon ... can't wait 😃
Edited by totally_desi - 17 years ago
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Hey hun, when are you going to continue? This fan-fiction is just AMAZING, please don't stop writing.
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hey zoe i just saw part 4 it was grt plz cont soon waiting for u i love ur ff.

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