FF: Diye Pyaar Ke - 2nd Upd pg 18 Aug 9

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Hey Y'all ! 🤗🤗🤗Firstly Merry Merry Christmas and a Very Very Happy New Year to everyone!🤗🤗🤗I know its pretty late to say all that, but unfortunately I hadn't have had time for myself much especially after my parents went for Hajj.. lol It was "me" in charge of the house for a whole month, and on top of that: SCHOOL! lol Can you imagine, going to school, coming back and going to another school to teach, and then coming and trying to manage cooking and doing homework all in a couple hours? Phew! Glad that was over...anyways, I was thinking of starting a new FF.......yes, yes, I know most of you'll be like "Hey but what about your other one? 😕" Yeah well guys, I had the next part done but somehow when "someone" erased their account my computer, my WHOLE FILE was just gone! Weird, eh? Anyways, I hope you don't mind the delay but till then I hope I can entertain you with this FF of mine. Just for now, I have like a sorta "mini trailer" if you'd call it with the character outline. Enjoy 😊😳. (PS: Try to picture it as if it really is a trailer...I'll try my best to make it seem like one😳)

Characters:

Saagar Pratap Singh ' A 26 year old man, whose parents are from India. Even though they are from India, they both went to live abroad in the states to expand their business, taking Saagar with them. Saagar thus completed his study abroad, but later realized the importance of one's motherland and decided to come to India and settle down here permanently. He runs his father's business here; the one he left behind before going abroad many years ago. Therefore, Saagar lives all by himself in the huge house he has. Oh and of course, he has his nanny. (lol even though he's 26 😆)

Vidya Raj Sarin ' A 26 year old young girl. Her father left her, her elder brother and her mom a few years after Vidya's birth, and then later they received the news of his death. She and her mother lived in New Delhi whilst her brother was sent abroad for further studies. After a while, her mother passed away as well due to depression and sickness. Her brother's character is played by Rakesh Bapat (the same guy who plays Neel/Neerav in Saat Phere). Vidya now lives in a hostel with Shalu close to her University.

Shalu - Vidya's closest friend, also 26 years old. After Vidya's mom passed away, which was just a few months ago, Shalu didn't want to burden Vidya by asking her for the dorm room rent, thus covered her costs. Shalu's parents now treat Vidya just like their daughter with the same love and respect.

Chinu - Shalu's fiance, they got engaged 4 months ago. Him and Saagar are not related to each other in any way....and yeah, that's basically it about it him. 😛 Even though we all love Manish a lot. 😛 Chinu and Vidya have a thick brother-sister relationship.

Sameer - Yes yes, played by Manish Raisinghania (same guy from Teen Bahuraaniyan 😉) and is a huge part of Saagar's business. Even though they only got to know each other after Saagar came to India, Sameer handled his business very well and is an important key to his success.

So guys......I hope you actually enjoy the first part...if it sounds lame then just tell me..or if I should add details, feel free to tell me. Enjoy 😛😳

Part 1

Okay so it begins by showing Vidya facing the window in her dorm room, with Shalu and her parents all serious. Shalu's parents are sitting on the couch looking VERY serious, and Shalu is standing behind Vidya. You can instantly tell that their is something wrong.

Shalu's Mom: Dekho Vidya bete, hum tumhe kissi tara ka dukh nahin dena chahte hein. Humari baat ka matlab sirf yehi hein, ke tumhe ab apne peron par khade hojana chahiye.

Shalu's Dad: Exactly beta. I think it's time you become a little independent.

(Note: Indirectly, they were trying to tell her that we can't look after yu no more, go find another place for you to live.)

Vidya: Mein samajh sak tee hoon. Aap sab ne mere liye itna kuch kiya, ke agar me chahoon bhi to saare ehsaanon ko chuka nahin paaongi.

Shalu's Mom: Beta hum tumse tumhara kharcha nahin maang rahein hein.

Vidya: Pata hai....lekin, uncle-aunty, I have only one request from you, and that is if I can stay here until my graduation is over. Sirf do char haftaun ki baat hogi, aur fir I'll be gone.

The parents both look at each other and then at Shalu. Shalu's face shows that she really doesn't want Vidya to move out, and hopes she can stay. Therefore, her parents agree. Vidya promises that she'll begin searching for accommodation for herself as well as a job. She begins her search through the University, but surprisingly finds no luck. She then searches in the local papers, if there are any companies that require help. Just when she was about to lose hope, she spots this one advertisement that matches up with her education and skills. She decides to submit her resume in. The company name, was "Pratap and Sons".

Okay, so I hope you like that part 😛....comments are always welcome good and bad. 😛 😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was great.. something new to read and exciting.. cont soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi!!!! i really really lik ur ff!!!! please do continue!!! ~niti~ 😛
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Hey Y'all!! Thank you everyone who commented on my FF.. it gave me a motivation 😛 .

Asma - lol thank you! 😛 🤗 🤗 I've posted the Precap for now...hope that satisfies for now 😳 Thakn you for reading! 🤗

Patel - Thanks, glad you thought it was new and exciting! 🤗🤗 Same, have posted the Precap. 😳

Niti - Hi Niti! What's up? Lol, I'm glad you like my FF and I will continue soon, in like a couple of days or something. 😳 Till then, I have the Precap. 😳 Thank you! 🤗🤗

Once again thanx everyone who read 🤗🤗. Check the Precap to know next epi. 😳 Enjoy 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am exicted to read more....VERY NICE UPDATE!!! 👏
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Great start! Ok so...Vidya and Sagar will meet in your next update...can't wait to read that...plz cont soon!!! 😊
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lol will update soon 😳😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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where is the part?
don't see it
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Hey Y'all! Well Well Well, I got 6 replies!! 😃 😃 lol Isn't that awesome?! lol Anyways, I decided to continue with the second part tonight since I didn't have much homework to do. I hope you enjoy this part as much as the last one... Enjoy 😊 😳

Part 2

So now Vidya is looking for a job and accommodation. Time goes by, and one evening Shalu and Chinu decide to go to the movies and tell Vidya to tag along as well. She first says no because she knows Chinu and Shalu will be so occupied they won't have time for her, and thus she'll be all alone. But since they were insisting so much, she gives in.

The trio enters the theater and stand in the line to buy the tickets. Vidya just tamely looks around hoping she's not the only one who's actually alone... and doesn't recognize anyone familiar. Soon, it's their turn in line and they buy the tickets to watch "Welcome".

[Okay you guys, this part couldn't get copied..I spent an HOUR writing it and now... I don't want to retype it so I'll just summarize it as detailed as I can. Sorry for any inconvenience 😳.]

- Vidya decides to go outside and just chill there, so she does
- There, she notices someone standing close to her looking through his phone seemed bored (who is Saagar)
- She decides to start a conversation since he looked nice, and thus starts a conversation
- They both start talking and then realize that they both are alone here with their friends, and interestingly they both want to watch the same movie "Strangers"
- After a lot of hesitation, they both agree to go for the show since they could still make it, they had half an hour. Saagar goes to buy the tickets and buys for V too, but she insists on paying him back but he refuses to take money from her as she's a girl
- They watch through the movie and then when its done, they exit together
- Vidya tells Saagar so many times she'll go home by herself, but Saagar still insists on dropping her off
- He drops her off, and on the way V finds out that S is already graduated and has his own business but didn't bother to ask the name
- S finds out that V has just recently completed her education, but there are a couple of weeks left for Gradutation
- After he dropped her off at campus, they say bye to each other, good luck and thanks and then Saagar notices something on the seat
- When he picks it up, he realizes one is some money and the other a little piece of paper. He reads, "Sorry...couldn't stop myself. 😊" and thinks to himself, "Honest girl.." and drives home.

Part 3

So, Vidya submitted her resume to "Pratap and Sons" for the position which she was looking for. She was really excited as she'd also been looking for accommodation, and for the one she really loved, this salary was enough to cover those costs. So in short, it was good to keep her living well by herself.

A few days passed, and Vidya also looked for other postings at other places as well. It was 4 days since she gave in her resume for the job she really wanted, and no one had called her for an interview. So she decided to call them back. (Secr = Secretary)

Secr: Welcome to Pratap and Sons. If you know the extension of the person you wish to call, enter it now. If you'd like to talk to a representative please press 2. Someone will be with you shortly. [Vidya Presses 2.] [After like holding for one minute, someone picks up.] Pratap and Sons, how may I help you?

Vidya: Hi, my name is Vidya Raj Sarin. I am actually a graduate student who applied for the position of an Executive Manager, from the newspaper. I handed in my resume about four days ago, and didn't really receive a reply yet.

Secr: Okay, kya naam bataya tha aap ne?

Vidya: Vidya Raj Sarin.

Secr: Ek minute......erm....ma'am woh post toh - (realizes her blunder and pauses for a minute)

Vidya (notices pause): Hello?

Secr: Erm...ma'am.....woh....I'm sorry ma'am....woh, humne ghaltee ki thi transcript me....aap ko pehle phone karna chahiye tha....woh darazal...aap hi ko interview ke liye bulaya gaya hai....woh....aaj..sade gyarah baje.. (11:30 AM)

Vidya (looks at her clock): OH MY GOD, ARE YOU SERIOUS?! Sawa gyarah baje to already baj chuke hein!! (it's 11:15)

Secr: I'm...I'm really sorry ma'am.. woh.... (but before the secretary could finish, Vidya hangs up.)

Vidya gets ready as quickly as she can, and dresses as formally as she could. She gets at the place at exactly 11:30 and enters the building panting, asking for which floor to go to. The secretary guides her upstairs and drops her off right in front of the office. Slowly and steadily, Vidya calms herself down and enters the office confidently.

Boss: "Aaah....Mrs. Sarin...late??"

Vidya: MISS Sarin......sir.. (trying not to use a tone to angry the boss)

The boss turned around his chair to face Vidya. Both Vidya and Saagar are left looking at each other in shock. They just stand/sit there looking at each other like that for a few minutes realizing how stupid that moment was. And then they just both start laughing like nothing. Vidya thinks she didn't make such a good impression at her boss and so controls her laughter. But Saagar was thinking. "Wow…wasn't that stupid?" And finally amidst his laughter gets up off his chair.

Saagar: You know…it's really funny how this all is a "coincidence" may we call it.

Vidya: Yes…sir.. (very nervous now so decides to speak minimally)

Saagar: I don't need to waste my time interviewing you.

Vidya (looks at him worried): You don't?

Saagar: Nope. Because last night's conversation gave me enough information about you that allows me to take a company-related decision.

Vidya (scared): Of course.

Saagar: I know you are an honest, hard-working and intelligent girl who WILL make this company progress. You fit perfectly for this job and I believe in you already. Therefore, I now pronounce you this company's CEO. Welcome to the team.

And with that Saagar walks outside with his hands in his pockets to tell everyone else that someone's got the job leaving Vidya puzzled but happy at the same time, thinking "Am I really that good?" and laughs it off.

Okay guyzz…I think thatz all for now…will update in a couple of days. Hope you liked it.
Edited by angel.41 - 17 years ago
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aawwwh that was greatt... fab update ...loved it 😃 😃

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