FF: Diye Pyaar Ke - 2nd Upd pg 18 Aug 9

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fathima amra wazeer

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

wow wow great update ...please continue sooon this sounds really intresting 😛 😛 😛

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rmj1990

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

awww man !!! now i wanna know who it is! PLZZZ UPDATE SOON=))

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

*OMG* saayma darn..did she have to dream of it couldn't it be real 😆 ...i loved the update...want more more lol.. [

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

wow nice story pllzzz cont soon

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SunriseGreen

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

omg an update after sooooo long 😆 but i loved it...sagar my macho man 😉 he's so protective and i love it 😳

please continue soon! don't make us wait like before!

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Sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

awesome update! so glad you continued this!

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MaGiCiAn

@angel.41

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

Hii everyone! 😊 So sorry for the long wait, I'm a lazy person as you may have figured by now. So I'm going to stop my bhak bhak and just write the update for you guys. Enjoy!

Part 5

Okay so after leaving from the office, Saagar and Vidya proceed home. Saagar first drops Vidya home and then goes to his own home. He literally goes upstairs, not just dropping her off at the bottom. So, Saagar turns off his car and turns the emergency lights on and they both proceed towards the apartment doors. Vidya uses her keys to open the doors and they walk down the lobby to the elevator. Saagar presses the button for the elevator to come, and in about two minutes it arrives. They both proceed inside and both attempt to press the number 11 for Vidya's floor and their fingers touch as they approach the button. Vidya and Saagar both look at each other and smile, while Vidya slowly retreats her hand with a soft smile still on her face. Slowly, yet quickly the elevator reaches the eleventh floor, and both Saagar and Vidya get out. They walk down the left side since Vidya's apartment was on the left, and stop as they approach her door.

Vidya: Thanks for everything. (with a smile)

Saagar: It's okay... You know Vidya, you don't have to be so formal just because I'm your boss. We're friends...so act cool. (hits her playfully on her shoulder)

Vidya: (laughs a little) Okay "Saagar". Andhar aogai?

Saagar: Nahin, abhi nahin. I have a lot of work to do at home.

Vidya: Oh come'on.... just one cup of coffee?

Saagar: (looks at her for a moment then replies) Fine..

Vidya smiles, and then leads him into her apartment. She's the one to enter first, while Saagar follows her in. Vidya tells Saagar to be comfortable while she makes the coffee, and so Saagar seats himself on the sofa doing what's been told. Vidya starts making her coffee and meanwhile Saagar busies himself with the TV. When the coffee is done, she pours it into two mugs and proceeds to where Saagar is sitting. She is still a little shaken by what just happened so you can't necessarily expect her to be too energetic and all. She gives one mug to Saagar and seats herself beside him on the sofa with the other one in her hand. For a minute there's just silence, but Vidya soon breaks it by starting a conversation.

Vidya (takes a sip then continues): Hey. You know... you never told me about your family. Kaun kaun hain tumharey family main.

Saagar: (pauses a little then continues) (he turns towards her and smiling answers her question) Family..... *sighs* main, mom, Saahil, Maya aur dad. And of course dad's new wife. (makes an ugly expression and drinks his coffee.)

Vidya: (a bit confused) New wife?..

Saagar: Yupp. Mom says that after I was born... there was nothing but happiness in the house. Then when Maya was born everyone was happy that we had a daughter. Even when Saahil was born, there was joy all around. But soon everyone could realize how sick dad was getting from all this family-type environment. *sighs again* We all just.. started drifting apart. Dad's lack of responsibility towards us all caused fights amongst us three and between our mom too. Then one day... dad stepped in with his "new wife"...... broke mom's heart. That's when we all actually realized that the four of us were all we needed for each other, and thats' when I decided to come to India, settle down here away from his shadow and then I guess soon call mom, Saahil and Maya here as well.

Vidya (looked a little down after hearing his story): Sorry.. (notices how quiet he became so decided to cheer him up) Heyyy... don't worry so much. Let's just forget all the sad things for a while and enjoy. 😊 Come, its beautiful outside and I have a balcony.... 😃 Come, lets go!

They both place their coffee on the table and go outside standing there letting the cool breeze come to them. Vidya spreads her arms out with a huge smile on her face and eyes shut enjoying the time. Saagar comes and stands beside her, resting his hands on the railing. Suddenly, it starts raining. All of a sudden..! And not just tiny tiny raindrops, but it was raining hard! Vidya exclaims as she starts getting wet and starts running inside expecting Saagar to follow. But when she turns around she still finds Saagar in the same position and so screams to him, "Saagar! Andhar chalo bheeg jaao gey tum!" She is still confused at why he isn't budging so she decides to go outside and pull him in. She goes to him standing beside him breathing kind of hard and puts her hand on his shoulder and whispers, "Saagar.." . At this Saagar turns his face towards Vidya, and she notices his expressions are serious and at the same time notices him crying and trying to hold back his tears at the same time. "Kya hua.." she whispers, stepping a bit closer to him.

Saagar (sobbing and trying his very very best not to cry)(he makes repetitive pauses between his sentences): I've always lost whom I loved the most..... Bachpan main.. I loved my dad the most.... always... and today, this is where our relationship is at... and because of him, humara parivaar bichchar raha hain... we're getting farther and farther away from each other.. I.... I.. just don't to lose them.. I don't want to lose my brother or my sister.. or my mom.. (turns towards Vidya slowly) .. I don't want to lose you.

Vidya is surprised to hear Saagar say that about her.... and finally begins feeling a bit happy inside. She kept repeating to make himself and her feel better, beginning to get some tears in her eyes: "You won't lose me.. (after a 5 sec pause) you won't lose me.." In her mind, she started having second thoughts about her and Saagar. Should I tell him? Is it the right time or not? She looks down at the floor and slowly moves her hand off his shoulder.

Then suddely, very very very coincidentally, both Saagar and Vidya together say what neither of them expected themselves to say or each other to say. Vidya while looking down, and Saagar while looking somewhere else (lol) say at almost the same time: I love you. And both are equally shocked to hear the other say those words and open their eyes in surprise. They are still looking in opposite directions not sure of what they should to next but fortunately Saagar takes the first step and turns himself completely towards Vidya while Vidya still has her head down. Then in the next five seconds Vidya just immediately hugs Saagar and starts to cry (still in the rain) while Saagar puts his arms around her and hugs her equally strong, happy for what just happened. Vidya feels safe in his arms and Saagar just feels like holding her like this for eternity.

Okay guys... that's all for now. I know I cant explain special scenes properly so just forgive me for my lack of quality lol. Enjoy! 😊

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Narmeen

@narmz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

ur update was awesome....seriously cnt wait until the next update but this time dnt take years to update...please 😳

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

awesome ff! i just read all of it!! i dont like sameer.

i LOVE it!! plz update soon

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Ankita

@Ankuu

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#40

omg i just read ur whole ff...and i must say
I LOVED EVERY SINGLE PART!
omg ur such a talented writer and the last part was....sooo romantic *sigh* and it was just perfect.....
plez ple plez plez continue soon =D
i love this ff already =)

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