Shivika OS- A perfect moment

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Felicity_Khushi

@Felicity_Khushi

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

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Omg this was beautiful

The realization that I wanted from shivaay about his actions and how he feels about it was so nicely written😳

Anika is right. They both will have to move on at some point of time and if they took a step now it will be more easier for them since shivaays guilt can grow more stronger and might force anika to leave him which will phelao more raita.

I loved that slap😆 he really needed one. He cannot keep taking decisions related to Anikas life always can he without asking her at all?

This guilt won't go away so easily. They both have to work together to make their life liveable away from the shadows of their past.

I loved it❤️

Can we get another one soon?😳😆

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Pratibha Sharma

@justprati

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its good, I loved the ending. U presented their feelings so beautifully. Couldn't ask for more. Keep writing :)

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Maham

@ManoRockz

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Loved it khushi ❤️
Especially the slap 😃
I would be happier if there more than one slap 😆
Awesome writing 😉

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow...beautifully written.

You have to continue.

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Just beautiful, felt this OS..

Keep writing more..

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

This os is sooo touching khush!

Seriously!!! Loved it from my heart!

Really beautifully written!

It does not look like that u r writing something after 6 months!

Really nice!

Do write more os on shivika!

But first complete ur assignment!

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Rishiak47

@Rishiak47

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

I wish they something like this happens in the show. Awesome update. Great.

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ISensedYou
Reswa
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Omg this was beautiful
The realization that I wanted from shivaay about his actions and how he feels about it was so nicely written😳
Anika is right. They both will have to move on at some point of time and if they took a step now it will be more easier for them since shivaays guilt can grow more stronger and might force anika to leave him which will phelao more raita.
I loved that slap😆 he really needed one. He cannot keep taking decisions related to Anikas life always can he without asking her at all?
This guilt won't go away so easily. They both have to work together to make their life liveable away from the shadows of their past.
I loved it❤️
Can we get another one soon?😳😆

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