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@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Khushi...i loved it...it was so heart felt and so real...and so hoping that we get such a poignant moment in the show!!! Kiss and all...ok...I'll just take is confession...and a passionate hug!!!😳

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Soju.
same to same comment 🤣

How can someone be so lazy?😲🤣

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

You make me wish this happpened in the show. This is what I have been talking about. This is the needed scene and because something like this has been missing their relationship and acceptance in the show seems out of place.

Thank you Thank you for this

Brilliantly written

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

AWWW AWWW

AWW

and super aww

loved it totally

wow i can totally imagine such a scene

please do continue

bye sumi

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

This was sooo beautiful Khushi!!!

The way u made things turn out..and finally the realization of Shivaay was brilliant. That is what everyone is wanting from Shivaay... we all kno2 he has admitted his wrongs... but has never felt guilty..menaing being in the same place of Saahil.

Karma is a bit*h. Nd u bought it out perfectly.

Next best thing was...Anika asking to heal him...to be his taaqat for once... to support him was sooo heart touching. He opened upto her...but his guilt swallowed him.

Nd then Shivaay accepting his crime..nd his fate. Apologizing to her...nd Ready to free her. U know i expected a slap and thank God it turned out that way. Agar mujhse aise Mehta toh main bhi yehi karthi...zor se ek thappad lagati.

Beautifully enjoyed scenes Khushi.. .thats what made this is really awesome.

Then the rush of emotions and feelings that they couldn't part..and their heart stayed together...not wanting to part.

The desire just sparked off like lightning..and finally they shared a kiss of love.😳😳. That too was written beautifully.

Finally the ending was nice.. she being the most happiest at the present moment in the whole world.😳

This os was absolutely beautiful. Awesome written. Touched my heart.👏👏

Superb wrk Khushi. And i really wish this happens in the show...

Ye le hugwa..🤗🤗

Love Sharmi.❤️

Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Khush that was beautiful;) I'm glad you compared the two marriages coz let's face it...both happened by force. Yet these two have come a long way and can leave the shadows of the past behind. You did full justice to the story!

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Michmichi

@Michmichi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Beautifully written ❤️ Would love to have scene like this in the show before Shivika takes their marriage to the next level ( intimacy)

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Jalaja

@jp_mars

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

This was amazing..seriously 👏

I really want a scene similar to this one.

Fab job 😊

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Felicity_Khushi

@Felicity_Khushi

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

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Wow i'm shocked actually😲

i thought perhaps some chamelis or chandnis coming my way😆

Thank you all for such lovely reviews.

I will personally reply to each and everyone, but i'm a bit short of time here. Already yesterday instead of doing my assignments, i kinda was writing this OS🤪

But all your reviews are very heartwarming, even some comments which are copy -paste like by Kitty😆

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Felicity1234
☺️
Wow i'm shocked actually😲

i thought perhaps some chamelis or chandnis coming my way😆

Thank you all for such lovely reviews.
I will personally reply to each and everyone, but i'm a bit short of time here. Already yesterday instead of doing my assignments, i kinda was writing this OS🤪

But all your reviews are very heartwarming, even some comments which are copy -paste like by Kitty😆

🤣

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