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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -loving_life-


Correction it's not a torture but a treat to read ASYA stories 😊
Yippee today you're updating right?!!!



Haha my stories are treat!!😆
Ok!! That is difficult to digest!!😛
I will be updating today!!😉
Happy?????😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
very interesting prolouge
wow asya were married
excited for next update
plz pm me for update
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MH2002



Haha my stories are treat!!😆
Ok!! That is difficult to digest!!😛
I will be updating today!!😉
Happy?????😊

Very happy 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😆😆 I expected that!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi...
Hope you all are fine.
Thanks for appreciation.
Specially for Anchal (-loving-life-)
So here is the first part.

Asya SS:
"WE ARE BACK!!!"
Banner Credits to Zephyr.

Chapter #1

Hospital:

"But Mrs. Khan you can't.." Doctor was interrupted as Zoya's phone rang. Zoya immediately picked the phone. "Hello." "Zoya do you even know mai kitni tense hogai thi?? What are you doing in the hospital?? Zoya is Bhaijaan Ok??" "Niks I told you I don't want him to come here but see he is in ICU. He needs blood but I cannot donate it. What should I do?(crying) No you are not coming tum un dono ka dhyan rakho mai yaha dikhti hu." With that she ended the call. "Doctor is there any other way through which we can give him blood?? I mean blood banks kahi sai toh.." "Mrs. Khan if Mr. Khan have any sibling?? Because blood banks are empty right now!! N blood will be able till morning but we need blood right now." Zoya was not able to think anymore. She saw Asad through the door and said "I won't let anything happen to you." She saw Asad was injected and was treated. Zoya moved towards the car and the driver followed her. "Mam where??" The driver asked. "You know very well!!" Driver nodded and started the car and went on.

Siddique Mansion:


Everyone (Ayaan, Najma, Humeira, Imran and Nuzhat) was talking in the lounge. "You know what Asad bhaijaan kaha karte the kai my baby will be called junior tamator but..." Najma stopped as she realised that what she have said. "I miss him and Zoya so much!! Ayaan Bhaijaan u came back in 2 months but look it has been..." She was not able to say anything further. "Najma pata nahi kyu aisa lag raha hai ki kuch bohat bara hone wala hai." Ayaan said. "Haan tu hone wala hai na Nuzhat ka nikah raha hai yaar!!" Imran tried to lighten the situation. "I wish meray Nikah par Nikhat baji, Asad Bhaijaan or Zoya zaroor hotay. Bhaijaan apke aur Humeira baji kai nikah par woh nahi the toh kitni kami feel hoi na." Everyone was sad thinking about AsYa and Nikhat. (Sorry to interrupt but I made some changes regarding Nikhat and Dilshad's leaving scenario. Nikhat was married to Farhan but after sometime she got know that he is cheating her. She left him n somehow reached ASYA. Everyone in SM don't know where is she.)

"ASAD!!!!!!" Dilshad woke up screaming. She was sweating profusely. Rashid came towards her with a glass of water. "Kya hua Dilshad??" He asked in concern. "Rashid Asad Asad is in pain. Mujhe Asad kai paas jana hai. He is in pain. Usko chot lagi hai." Dilshad said while sobbing. Ayaan, Humeira, Najma, Nuzhat and Imran came running upstair on hearing Dilshad's scream. "Kya hua Ammi?" Najma asked in concern. "Najma Asad ku dard hu raha hai!! He is in pain!!" Dilshad replied still crying. "Badi Ammi khawab tha!! It is nothing like that!!" Ayaan tried assure her but all went in vain. "Ammi jab apne Bhaijaan ku khud dard diya tab apko unka dard feel nahi hua kya??" Najma asked looking at the floor. "Jab ap tab nahi pehchan payi tu ab feel karne ka kya faida." With that she left the room. Dilshad was crying. Rashid asked them to leave he will take care of her.

Everyone left to their rooms but they stopped as the doorbell rang."Who is here at 2:30 in the morning??" Najma said. Najma opened the door and the ground below her feets slipped as soon she saw the person. "Zoya.." She whispered. Everyone ran outside to see who was there. Everyone was shocked to see Zoya that too in disheveled condition. "Zoya!!" Ayaan shouted. Hearing Ayaan's shout Dilshad came down. "Zoya.." She whispered in shock and happiness. Before anyone could ask anything Dilshad asked Zoya to come in. But her reply shocked everyone to the core. "Asad kai sath kasam khai thi kai without him I won't enter this house. I will not enter this house. This will hurt my Asad more." Without any further interruption she continued "Asad needs you Ayaan!! He is ..is .. in ICU. He needs your blood. I can't give my blood to him otherwise I would have definitely given it. If you can help than come with me in city hospital. Otherwise I can give my life for Asad than what does this blood means to me??" She turned to leave but Dilshad's voice made her to stop. "What happened to Asad Zoya??" Zoya turned and replied with an utmost cold voice. "You lost that right 5 years ago Mrs. Khan. When you abandoned your son you lost the right to ask anything about him.." Dilshad's eyes were full of tears. "Let's go Zoya!!" Ayaan said. "I am also coming." Najma said. Zoya, Ayaan, Najma and Imran moved towards hospital in Zoya's car.

Inside the car Zoya's phone rang. "Zoya they woke up and asking for you and Asad bhaijaan. They are continually crying. Should I bring them to hospital??" "No Niks I will send the driver to pick them!! They are with me and I don't want them to know anything about you. You send the maid with them. Ok??" Zoya said.


Once inside the hospital the doctor asked Ayaan to come with him. After an hour Zoya asked the driver to go home. Doctor inform that Asad will become conscious in sometime. He was shifted to a room. Zoya was sitting beside his bed others were waiting outside. Asad's fingers moved and eyeballs began to move. Zoya stood and waited for Asad to open his eyes. Asad opened his eyes but closed his eyes hurriedly as the light urgently hitted his eyes. Slowly and steadily he again opened his eyes. He looked at his surrounding and then his eyes fell on Zoya. Zoya was relieved that Asad gained consciousness."Asad!!" She whispered. Asad was looking at her confusingly.

"Who are you?? Where am I?? Who am I??" He dropped the bomb on Zoya. Zoya was shocked. "Asad are you joking or something??" She said. "My name is Asad. Ok. But who are you? N what am I doing in a hospital??" He asked. Zoya's eyes were again filled up with tears. "I am your wife Asad. Stop joking." "You are my wife ...wife... Ahhh" He held his head while trying to remember. Zoya quickly checked his head. Tears were caressing her smooth skin. One of the tear fell on Asad's hand. Zoya turned to leave. "Where are my champs??" Asad asked suddenly while in a half sitting position. Zoya turned towards him and saw him looking here and there innocently. "MR. KHAN!!" She said with anger. Asad turned towards her and said with a little smile "Yes MRS.KHAN!!" Zoya came towards him and slapped him on his arm. "Do you even know how much scared I became?? How could you even do this??" She kept beating him. "OUch ouch Zoya I am still on hospital bed. Ouch!! Ok fine I am sorry!! Plz forgive me." He said while holding her hands. Zoya hugged him tightly. Asad also reciprocated. "But still Zoya where are my champs??" Asad asked after breaking the hug. "Niks is sending your champs..." She stopped as she heard voice of a boy calling loudly "MAMA". She turned towards Asad and said "They are here!! I will go and bring them." With that Zoya went out. The sight she saw left her perplexed.


Ayaan and Najim were sitting outside when they saw two boys who could not be of more than 4 running here and there. One of them came towards Najma and asked "Shallamm aunty Ap ne meli mama ku dekha?" He asked. "Nahi tu!! Kon hai apki mama baby??" She asked lovingly. "Mai baby nahi hu mai!! I am ... MAMA!!!" He left his incomplete as he saw his mother. Both of the kids ran towards their mother. Ayaan and Najim turned towards the direction and they received the biggest shock of their life. Zoya was sitting on her knees open arms and the kids were running towards her screaming mama. The kids hugged Zoya while Zoya showered them with kisses. "Mama abu kaha hai??" The second one asked this time. "Ahad abbu ku thori si chot lagi hai tu woh ..." She did not continued as she saw big fat tears in the eyes of Aman. "Aman ap ru kyu rahe hu??" Zoya asked in concern even knowing the reason. "Abbu ku chut lagi hai... Mujhe abbu kai paas jana hai. Mama plzz!!" He said while weeping. "Aman aise rote nahi hai mama nai kaha na choti si hai. Our abbu is strong. Haina mama??" Ahad said. "Aman look who is speaking?? Ahad ap ki ankh mai bhi tears hai. Chalo abbu kai paas chalte hai my babies." Zoya said while wiping their tears. "WE ARE NOT BABIES." Both of them screamed while Zoya took them.Ayaan and Najma were having tears in their eyes. They were happy and sad too. "Yeh...yeh bhaijaan kai sons the Najma?? I can't believe it. Zoya kai bache." Ayaan said still looking at the closed door. "Bilkul bhaijaan aur Zoya par gaye hain.. I wish mai bhi bhaijaan kai paas ja pati. But I think we can't." Najma said sadly.



So I am done!! I know bohat kharab tha. But what can i do I like to torture people.
Do like and comment.
Till the next time GOODBYE.
Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Love the story till now 😆
This is sad to see the broken family and Asad joke was funny but mean, I loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wowww
Nice update
The chapter 1 is full of soo many mysteries but i knw as the story will proceed the characters will be more clear
Good thing that asad is fine now... and the story is 5 yrs after that with little changes
Why is zoya sooo cold towards dishad??? What has dilshad done with asya?? Why r they soo far away with each other??
Let's wait for the next chapter
But Yesss the update was fantastic..continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it..
Can understand lil bit..
But y zoya cdnt give blood is she preggo...
I hate dilshad ...y ...she is a very selfish one...n nazma I didn't expected it from her now what is the use to say words ...I think she too didn't stood for asad in past...
Loved ahead n aman... soo cute...
N asad he nearly gave me a heart attack...
Loved to core...
Always wanna read a story with this concept where zoya stood for asad instead of dillu...
Pls update soon...
Will be waiting eagerly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the first part
Amazing update
Like ur other story this one also filled with a lot of suspense.
Asad nd his pranks 🤢
Asya hv two sons ahad nd aman that was so cute
Can imagine asya son saying "I'm not a kid " 😆
But I had a lot of questions In my mind
Why Zoya behave so rudely with dilshad nd khan family?
Is this bcz she choose rashid over asad??
Then why did najma told such hurtful words to her mother?
Why can't donate blood to asad ?? 😕 😕 😕
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 😃
Edited by LuvurselF - 8 years ago

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