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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
This ff is superrbbb... Just hoping some miracle to happen. So that both MaNan won't suffer anymore. Both hv suffered alot. Now I want them happy, enjoying their life , immensely in love with each other. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: If_manan

This ff is superrbbb... Just hoping some miracle to happen. So that both MaNan won't suffer anymore. Both hv suffered alot. Now I want them happy, enjoying their life , immensely in love with each other. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. update soon


thank you so much dear. I love your comment. keep supporting. and hope you'll be with the story till the end.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
@20?

Nandu: no means no. I have decided. I will not do the transplantation.

he knew it was not going to be easy. but he wasn't someone who would give up.

manik left nandini's room saying, "haan toh isse bulwake rahunga".

CaVya's receiption day

nandini was helping in CaVya's receiption as much as she could.

she was making garlands. she used to do this before also. but the needle used to prick into her fingers. so manik bought her some cap for her fingertips. so that she doesn't get hurt.

all friends were busy doing preparations. nandini was sitting with many baskets of different flowers.

manik was accompanying her. he sat there helping her with the flowers and colours.

nandini was making all the "Toran". after she was done making the servants put them on place. manik monitored the settings.

manik was re-checking if everything was done properly or not. nandini went to him. she touched all the flowers which were near her.

nandu: manik how it's looking?

manik: fabulous.

nandu: I wanna see it manik. I mean I want to touch them and feel them.

manik: as you wish your Highness.

manik lifted her by holding her legs.

nandini touched the flowers above. had their scents. she was smiling. but manik knew she wanted more. she actually wanted to see. which she couldn't. not until she agrees for the treatment.

nandini: I think it will look good.

manik: good? naa. it will be the best. as you made it. also because it's going to be some kind of a gift for cabir n navya.

all girls were with navya in her room where she was getting ready for the receiption.

navya dressed up like a newly weded bride with no extra blusher. I meant she was already blushing and girls were teasing her.

It was finally the time navya to descend to the hall. nandini went to her and caressed her face softly.

nandu: I can bet you are looking breathtaking.

mukti: that she is. looking stunning.

nandu: you are the most beautiful bride dear.

aliya: nandu sab complement navya ko mat de dena. humaare shaadi ke liye bhi kuch bachake rakhna.

nandu: tum logo ki shaadi mein na kuch aur acche seekh lungi.

mukti: navya wish something before you go down.

navya: wish?

mukti: haan wish. karo na.

navya: par kyu?

aliya: kiyuki cake kaatne se pehle wish karte hain.

she said while bringing the cake to navya.

aliya: candles nahi laye navya. isise kaam chala le. candle se tera makeup kharab ho jata.

navya: hold on guys. ye cake kis khushi mein?

nandu: khushi mein nahi. gham mein navya. tu humaari girls gang se jo chali gayi usi ki gham mein. aur aaj toh officially jane wali hain.

navya: kahi nahi gayi main. aur na jayoongi. ayenvein maine aapni nlband member se shaadi thori ki hain. isliye kiya taki tum logo se dur na jana padhe.

aliya: smart navya. aab ye smartness chor. jaldi se cake cut karke niche chal. nahi toh boys upar ajayenge.

navya: haan abhi zyada baat maat karo. cake lao. ye yummy cake dekhke muh mein abhi se PaNi aaraha hain.

nandu: cabir ki perfect wife hain tu. baaki saare important point ignore karke sirf khane ki baare mein yaad raha tujhe.

navya: pata hain nandu tujhe bhi cake pasand hain. tujhe chorke khane nahi wali thi. aab tum log aaoge yaah phir...

all in unison: of course. tujhe cake aakele mein thori khane denge hum.

everyone cut the cake together. navya wished something. nandini too did. but pretty unknowingly.

she wished if she could see this happiness of her friends. and hopefully her wish will be granted.

the ceremony started after the bride and groom arrived with their friends at the receiption hall.

the guest were coming and wishing the newly wed couple. their friends were then welcoming other the guests.

all girls were sitting together to apply Mehndi. first was navya as she was the bride. but aliya n mukti were thinking if they should apply it or not.

no doubt almost every girl loves to apply Mehndi. but they were thinking it was of no use to make nandini apply it. because she won't be able to see the design or color. and if nandini can't apply it, they won't either.

but manik solved their problem. he brought glitters for nandini which she could apply instead of Mehndi. so that she could feel the design of it.
(guys honestly I don't know what it's called. just know that it gets hard after drying and shines also)

as manik brought it, he requested the designer to leave a empty space in her left hand. after the designer was done, manik took the work in his hands.

he made 3 dots on her hand indicating a "M" and 4 dots indicating a "N" in Braille letters.

nandini traced the design in her hand soon after it dried. she felt the two alphabets in her hand. she got to know what manik did to her hand. she liked the way he placed their name together.

manik: how's it?

nandu: beautiful. I loved the design.

manik: just the design?

nandu said nothing but just blushed. how in just a night she got over all the things happened between them.

throughout the ceremony manik looked and noticed nandini's every movement. he felt she was so much happy. but there was grief as well for not being able to observe anything.

he remembered how in childhood she was so optimistic about being able to see. but time passed and her all hopes crashed down. making not only her but everyone around her sad.

he wanted her to again have the hope. hope for a better future. hope for the thing she wished so dearly to happen. hope for her to be cured.

he knew now that she have made her mind to not do the eye transplantation, she wouldn't admit that she really wanted to see.

he very well could guess she would refuse. but he had to made her admit it. that's how he will be able to make her agree too. and he had a good plan for this.

Edited by MaNan9Diwani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
@21~A?



Manik decided to drop Nandini home. while returning back in the car...

manik: nandu. take this.

he handed her a packet.

nandu: what's this?

manik: a gift for you. wear this tomorrow evening and be ready. I will pick you up.

nandu opened the packet and touched the fabric. the dress seem to be very beautiful to her.

a smile played on her lips.

manik: you like it?

nandu: haan. I think it will be good on me. but why all these?

manik: that's for me to know & you to find out.

nandini: Huh...

manik: you'll get to know tomorrow nandu. now relax. don't stress yourself much.


next day at evening...

nandini was ready wearing this


nandini was waiting for manik and finally he came.

nandini: don't you think you are LATE?

manik: sorry nandu. I was just talking to your parents.

nandu: about what?

manik: arey. for permission. I am taking you with me tonight. permission is needed.

nandini: main kitni baar bahar ja chuki hu tumhaare saath. kya jaroorat thi permission ki?

manik: you won't understand nandu. chalo aab.

he escorted nandu towards his car and they left for their destination.

the place manik took her was beautifully decorated.


nandini couldn't see all this. so she kept touching everything to feel. silently praying if she could see also.



manik made sure she doesn't get hurt by anything.

manik took her hand and they reached a place by walk.


manik n nandini sat in a boat kind of thing.


they reached a place which was surrounded with water every side.



manik: let's eat first. nandu. then I will take you to rest of the places.

nandu: o..kayy...

manik: come sit now.

manik made her sit on the chair and pushed it front like a gentleman.

they had food and then again sat on the boat. they reached the previous place. manik took her to an open area.

there was a Swing.



it was hanging with the support of a tree branch.

manik made her sit on it properly. then started to push the swing a little. slowly slowly.

cool wind was blowing and nandini was enjoying both things. happy smile was on her face when manik decided to start the main topic.


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sorry guys. couldn't attach picture on IF.



Edited by MaNan9Diwani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
thanks dear. Happy Valentine's day to you.
ScienceGeek00 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#46
@21~B?

manik blew air behind her ear. nandini started blushing at this gesture only.

manik: nandu. till now you must have guessed why I have brought you here.

nandini kept silent.

manik took it as a gesture to carry on with his talks.

manik: nandu we know each other for years. we were classmates first. then we became friends. we were neighbour too. then we became the bestest friends.

we had many friends all together. but we 7 Wonders were closer than others. and we both were the closest.

you know when first I met you I thought "what a girl, she is so strong". but when I got to know you better, I realised that you were not that strong that you pretend to be.

nandini: I don't pretend manik.

manik: you do. you can fake in front of others but not me. I won't buy it. but let's not talk about that now.

I wanted to say so many things to you nandini. but if I start saying all that I have in my mind, it would take a long time. and I don't want you to wait that long.

nandu: then..make it short.

nandini said teasing.

manik: I want to. nandu.

you and I both knew we were more than friends. always. when I first met you I knew we would be good friends. when we got more close I knew we can be best friends.

we grew up. started to know about relations other than the usual ones we knew before. time passed with you and I realised there is something I feel for you that I don't feel for anyone else.

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all this time manik was pushing the swing slowly slowly. he didn't stop for once. but now he stopped and came in front of her.

manik held her hand in his and kissed her palm.

manik: nandu. I always have felt for you. something special. because you were special. what I feel for you is something I can't describe just in words or gestures. it's something you have to feel too to know. and the best part is I know you do. I know you feel for me too.

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manik lowered his head and stared at the grass for some seconds. it was so soft. one would want to lie on it any evening. like a soft comfy bed.

he looked up to continue what he was saying. but noticed and then remembered something else which was VERY important.

manik: did i say How BEAUTIFUL you are looking today?

nandini blushed so hard this time.

nandini: you were saying something else manik. finish that first.

manik: but you are so beautiful. and you deserve to know that.

manik said in a mesmerized tone.

nandini stand up from there taking manik's support.

nandini: if not you then I will say it.

manik: nandu...you...but I wanted...

nandini: it doesn't matter manik. be it you or me. because our feelings are mutual. we feel the same way for each other. our hearts beat the same for the other. we are two persons but still one. we are
soul mates manik. I know it because

I LOVE YOU

manik had a big smile on his face after hearing her confessing. he couldn't stop him and hugged her. tightly. like not to let her go.

manik: I love you too nandu.

nandini: when you knew it always. why didn't you say it to me before?

manik: because everything has a right time for it. and I wanted a moment when you would be too much happy. so that you can't say no to me. and you were happy for CaVya's marriage.

nandini: you had a doubt that I might say NO?

manik: not actually. I was not sure if you would be ready for a new relationship or not.

nandini: I am ready for anything now. you say. are you happy about us?

manik: more than happy. I am so so happy that I am feeling like top of the world.

nandini: but you didn't have to spoil the moment by complenting me all of a sudden.

manik: I forgot to complement you. that's why.

nandini: it was not necessary.

manik: necessary? nandu it was a crime that I forgot to complement you. that too on our first date. I should be in jail right now.

manik said quite playfully.

nandini started laughing on this. seeing that manik too smiled to his fullest.

after sometime nandu stopped laughing when she felt manik close to her. manik made his face his closer to hers. and they came at a least space between them.

their breathing turned heavy and heart beat raced faster. they could anticipate whay was coming next.

nandini didn't wait and crossed the last distance separating them. by placing her lips on his. and they kissed. slowly. softly.


(imagine MaNan first kiss in kyy s1)

Edited by MaNan9Diwani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
@22?

MaNan were sitting on the grass, peacefully. holding hands. enjoying the moment.

manik: I love you nandini. I wanted to say it to you from a long time. today I wanted to confess to you. But that's not exactly the reason I brought you here.

nandini: then what is it manik?

manik: I will tell you. but before that answer me one thing.

when we came here how you felt? with all these...this place...these decorations...lights...how was it?

nandini: of course. it must be so beautiful. you did all this. I loved it.

manik: but didn't you want to see all this?

nandini: I can't see manik. I will never be able to see. and I am habituated to this. I am happy that I can atleast feel everything.

(manik felt bad that nandini still thinks like this about herself.)

just like I do with you. I don't know how you look. but when I touch your face I can imagine how you are.

I don't have visions. which I know you have. I can't even imagine like you. I can only hear voices.

I have always known that I am blind. now as I have accepted the fact totally, I don't find any problem in this.

manik: you are lying nandini. I know because I heard your prayer that day. I know how you must have felt at the ceremony.

It's easy to say nandini. but hard to work on. all the time you will hurt yourself. you know you have a chance. you just have to say a Yes.

nandini: and If I say No...then?

manik: then you will insult every other who is like you. who can't get what you are having. some can't even think of this opportunity.

It will be a disgrace to the people who wants to get better, have a less suffering life, but can't get. because they can't either afford or get any scope to do things better.

(nandini silently heard it. she felt bad. she knew she was wrong. but wasn't strong enough to accept it.)

you have to understand nandini. all
these years you waited for this. now finally you have it. just you have to agree.

your parents they know this already. they are ready for this. but afraid of you. if you don't accept everything, doctors can't help you even.

first you have to be strong. no one will blame you if this experiment fails. you have everyone for you. beside you. they will not cry over if this fails. they will in fact give you strength to move on.

think nandini. you are so lucky. why you want to miss this chance? if this gets successful you will be able to see everything. don't you wanna see?

(nandini was overwhelmed with all these. she wanted to say yes. but she thought she doesn't deserve it.)

nandini: manik, I am happy the way I am. I don't want to change. honestly I am not having any problem being like this. as you have just said, I have everyone beside me. I don't need to see. I can see everything with your eyes.

and I can see you too. I know you are soo handsome.

(nandini started jokingly. she wanted to distract manik from the main topic.)

manik: acha? kaise janti ho tum?

nandini: when I touch your face. you know I touch everyone's face to recognise them.

when I touched navya's face and then your face I knew that instance that your face is better.

(nandini said playfully)

manik: oh. like that. My face is only better than navya? what about aliya?

(he played along)

nandini: nah. aliya is more beautiful for sure.

(saying this she started laughing. she thought that she had distracted him somehow.)

(manik became silent for quite a long time. then he returned to his serious mode.)

manik: ...say YES nandini...for this operation...please.

(nandini's laughter died down. tears started to fall. how beautiful her eyes are. but those eyes can't see. that's very painful for anyone to accept.)

(manik hugged her. burying his face in her hair, between her neck n shoulder. he was sounding desperate.)

manik: please say yes. I never asked anything from you. did what you said. but please today listen to me. can't you do this for me? please...


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Edited by MaNan9Diwani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
this story is going to end soon. thanks to all the readers for giving this story a chance.
Edited by MaNan9Diwani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Friendsforever9

Awesome update dear[DIV]Cont soon...[/DIV]

thank you so much. I will try to update soon. this story has only 3-4 parts left. so won't keep you waiting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
very nice.loved it very much

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