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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonujames

very nice.loved it very much

thanks dear. thanks a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@23?

nandini was taken to the hospital after few weeks. they consulted doctor who said that this process should be started as soon as possible.

nandini's old doctor who was handling her case from childhood. an old and experienced doctor. Dr. Shetty. he approved the idea which manik gave him and agreed to the procedure.

manik's senior and a researcher. Dr. Alam. he was also gonna be in the operation team.

it was a special operation. as it was based on a research project, everything was new to all. so everyone needed help. they needed as much intelligence as possible.

some Indian doctors along with a foreign specialist. she couldn't come to India soon. so she would be in a video conference throughout the operation.

nandini's parents didn't know that manik was donating nandini. others were unaware too. nandini's parents enquired for it and got to know what manik wanted them to know. that the donor refused to disclose his identity to anyone.

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in these weeks MaNan were officially together. and their friends also knew that.

they were so happy for both of them. happier than they were when they heard about CaVya. cause they are in love.

dhruv and aliya were also the same. but their friends knew about them from the beginning. so when they announced, it was not as excited as it was in MaNan's case.

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manik was so romantic with nandini now a days. as he had got the official permission to do romance.

nandini was also liking...correction..loving this romantic...again correction..extra romantic gestures of Manik.

MaNan's parents also knew about them. they were okay with it. as if It was bound to happen.

they were right. MaNan are meant to be together. at every means. in every life. they should be together always. they are the divine couple. soulmates. made for each other from...no no..before their birth.

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all the time manik was with nandini when she was taken to the hospital. but when she entered the O.T. he suddenly disappeared. no one knew where he is.

no. two persons had knowledge of this. they were his parents. he couldn't hide this from them. it was a life changing decision. he couldn't take this step alone.

his parents were not same as the show. they were the loving and caring parents. the one every child want to have and want to be.

manik shared everything about his decision to his parents. they supported him totally. they knew that manik wasn't wrong. and also that it was his duty.

it was a very important decision for them. as manik could lose his eye sight in this experiment. be it just one eye. but being blind will be a curse for anyone.

that's what all would think. but for manik he was taking this risk for the one he loves. and it was totally worthy. not just because his love for nandini. but as a human being also nandini deserved this happiness.

his parents wanted him to tell everything to nandini. but manik denied. he knew nandini would not agree if she gets to know before.

his parents reasoned if she doesn't like all this after knowing everything then what. and answer was ready by Manik. he assured that he would make her. he knew that once the operation is done she can't change it. and with time she will be okay with everything.

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the operation was finally done and successful. nandini gained consciousness. but was not allowed to open her eyes. then after a day she was wearing black goggles. so that light doesn't come straight to her eyes. doctor said she was still not ready for this.

when at last she got to open her eyes, everyone was there except manik. doctors said she will take time to adjust with the lights. but she has to do practice.

soon she will be able to see from her right eye. doctors assured that. she will feel strange for some months. but eventually will get adjusted.

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all were very happy to know these informations. but nandini couldn't be too happy. because for the one she agreed to all this wasn't there with her. so unusual of manik.

she knew something very major happened. couldn't think much what it could be. but knew manik wasn't with her for a reason and she had to know that reason.

"where's manik?"

nandini asked as soon as she got the chance. everybody's face fell. they didn't have any answer.

"I am asking where's manik? please someone tell me."

"we don't know. " cabir said.

"he was gone from the day your operation started." said mukti.

aliya told all that they tried to contact him a lot of times but failed.

they were talking all this when manik's parents entered the room. nandini still couldn't see. she wasn't allowed to.

all other noticed them. so dhruv asked them if they know anything about manik by now.

till now manik's parents were lying to everyone that they even don't know where he is. saying he only left a letter written that he was fine wherever he was.

but now was the time they should disclose the truth to all. so they said everything truthfully to every person present there. including nandini.

after listening to everything she was feeling guilty. she never thought that manik will do this much for her. she knew he could even die for her if needed. but this certain thing, the sacrifice never crossed her mind.

from a long time manik was hiding this truth. he hid so perfectly about him being the donor.

nandini felt very bad that manik didn't share this with her. she deserved to know that's what she thought that time.

with guilt, pain, desperation she also felt anger building up inside her. she was angry on him for hiding this important thing from her. angry on herself for not getting any hint what her best friend cum boyfriend was planning.

manik was released by then. ready to meet nandini. he couldn't wait more. he was assuming the danger coming.

knowing nandini's anger, he knew he wouldn't be spared easily. and knowing that by now his parents would've told everything to all as planned by him.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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@24~A?



it was the time jab nandu ka Kaala Chashma utarne wala tha. she was going to see everything properly for the first time. before this when she tried to see anything for a test of her eyesight, she was only allowed to see certain things. now she will see more.

doctors said her eye was more comfortable in front of lights than before. so everyone was excited for this moment. even all the doctors. they all gathered outside nandini's room.

inside her cabin was only one doctor. doctor Shetty. and her family and friends excluding manik.

manik was coming to her cabin. he was terrified thinking how would nandini react knowing the whole truth. she didn't yet know one thing. and manik was planning to tell her that after the session.

the operation in manik's part wasn't successful. yes nandini's part was. but not manik's. that's why he can't see now from his right eye.

it was an experiment. getting nandini a donor was hard. but when manik could be the donor, how could he let this chance go.

manik wasn't sad that he lost his one eye. but happy for nandini. that she atleast got eyesight.

but she didn't still know it. and telling her wouldn't be so great. manik could tell that knowing her anger well.

manik reached there and sat beside nandini. all were happy to finally see him there. but nandini still couldn't see him.

feeling someone's presence she got up from her lying position. she knew it was manik. she was happy too. she got to be near him again.

though nandini already knew, she wanted to confirm. she moved her hands all over his face. capturing the same structure of his whole face. she was satisfied at last.

doctor took out the black goggles from her eyes. and asked her to open her eyes slowly. as her eye was adjusted to the lights already, she didn't find any problem opening them.

for the first time she could see properly. OMG. only she could describe how she was feeling that time. or may be even she can't describe her flooding of emotions.

the first person in front of her was manik. because she has just felt his facial features, she knew it was him.

"so that's how you look", she thought.

she noticed everything he had. his eyes ', nose ', lips '. which till now she only touched now can see too.

she remembered how soft his lips are. everytime they kissed. ' she could feel them. she wanted to taste that lips once more after seeing them.

manik smirked noticing that her gaze stopped at his lips. he to divert her concentration, called her and she noticed everyone else then only.

(you guys must be thinking life mein first time she is seeing lag nahi raha. toh the answer is it's not her very first time. she has already seen for the first time. that was the things doctor told her to look at.

first person she saw was actually the doctor. then her parents. she was trying to adjust with all these. doctor tried to teach her some basic things. slow and steadily. so that she doesn't get too excited all of a sudden or too confused. )

nandini looked at everyone else. they one by one came and hugged her. while hugging she thought, "was I really thinking of kissing him? what's wrong with me. I am supposed to be angry on him."

after the hugging session ended doctor left saying she should take rest after sometime and not pressure her eye.

nandini looked at manik and then folded her hands over her chest. manik got terrified. because this sign means she was super angry.

manik ki to aab vaat lagne waala hain...


Edited by MaNan9Diwani - 8 years ago
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12th cbse board exam for me in march9th .commerce stream.l am not able to read anystory.l am new in forum.but leave forum bcz of exam for long😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonujames

12th cbse board exam for me in march9th .commerce stream.l am not able to read anystory.l am new in forum.but leave forum bcz of exam for long😭

thank you. and same pinch. main bhi 12th mein hoon. science group. exam ka naam shuntei I am getting attacks . pata nai kya hoga exam mein. ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@24~B?



everyone left from the room so that nandini could take rest. manik sat beside her on the bed and let her sleep for sometime.

nandini's eyes were closed. after a few minutes she remained like that. manik thought she slept. so without disturbing her he tried to escape...from the bed ... and sit on the couch for some moment.

as he was about to stand up from there, nandini's voice came.

nandini: manik. don't you have anything to tell me?

manik: ya..a..I have actually...(don't know where to start)

nandini: what are you murmuring?

manik: nothing nandu. as you are not sleeping, you can hear me out now.

nandini: you may proceed..( she said in intimidating tone)

manik: let's begin from our childhood. nandu you know na how much I wanted you to see. I started believing that I can help you only. so started learning about these problems. this became my life's goal.

when I discovered that you have a chance to see this way, you don't know how happy I was. I became so happy that I forgot that there was still something I need to do. find a donor.

we all tried hard. but it was seeming impossible to find a perfect donor for you. I almost lost hope. but then I got an idea. and it worked.

when I got to know that I can be your donor it was like the silver lining for me. but I couldn't tell you. knowing you would never agree knowing the risk.

nandini: what risk?

manik: risk...risk of losing my eye sight.

nandini: oh my god. it had that much of risks. manik who told you to do this. anyone else could do it. you know right a Brain Dead man could be the donor. you didn't have to take this risk.

manik: it was very hard to match with your tissue. fortunately you got a match and that's mine. I couldn't lose the chance for which I worked all these years hard. I had to make it work.

nandini I am very sorry for hiding this from you. I know how important it was to know for you. but I was helpless.

you are so stubborn. wouldn't agree if you knew before. it was so hard to make you agree even when you didn't know. what would I do?

nandini: very sorry manik. for me you had to take a big risk only for me. thank god nothing happened to you and you are okay.

manik: nandini I was going to discuss this only. I should've told you already. it's okay now but maybe you don't feel this way soon. it is actually...

nandini: manik again. you scaring me.

manik: I wanted to tell you that my experiment wasn't fully successful.

nandini: what do you mean?

manik: doctors tried a lot. they are the specialists. but fate can't be changed. they tried best. but it didn't go well.

from now I won't be able to see from my right eye.

nandini: are you kidding manik? I can see your eyeballs moving. and I may be seeing now but knew from before that eye balls don't move if the eye is completely damaged.

manik: I know too. I can move my eye balls because it reacts to lights. only lights. so it moves. but I can't see.

nandini: manik. why didn't you tell me before?

manik: I didn't want you to be upset and cry for this and hurt your eyes. it won't be so good.

nandini: why will I cry? it's your fault. when you weren't sure why did you try this? you could wait more.

manik: no I couldn't. I could not wait more. I waited for too long. I didn't want to make the wait longer. It was already pending from years.

nandini: but manik what about you? (she became too soft this time) can you be okay? will you be alright?

manik: I don't think so. but dr. shetty still have hope. because my eye still responds to light.

nandini: at least something good in it. (finally smiling)

manik: so you are no longer angry on me?

nandini: no. I forgive you.

manik: really? so easily? it's a relief. thank you..thank you..thank you. (hugging her)

nandini: awww..manik. I can't be angry on you for long. I love you that much..

manik: love you tooo...


so. it's the last chapter. the story "blind love" a tale of a blind nandini and her friends and a lover who can do anything for her. this story ends here where two lovers love each other Blindly..Unconditionally..Irrevocably...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Epilogue

A girl is sitting on her one knee. A boy is standing in front of her. bending his head a little to get a clear view of her.

she is his life. the happiness he found. the peace he found. the solace he found.

she is his everything. his world revolves around her. he couldn't imagine his life without her nor she could.

he has a family. she has a family. they have their friends as their family. But their family is incomplete without each other.

the girl is ready to express her feelings to him. the guy is ready to make her a part of his parental family.

their family & friends are ready to accept her and him in the new way.

Yes. they all are present here. to witness the pure relationship ready to take the new step.

the girl is Nandini. the guy is Manik.

nandini is on her knee from last 10 minutes. physically painful for nandini and mentally painful for manik.

nandu: manik why it is so difficult? why I am not able to say what I want to? why it's difficult than the way it was felt before?

see manik. same place. same setup. just we exchanged our roles.

if you are thinking how I know about the decoration then let me tell you I have seen the pics. same pics that had been sent to you that day.

but that's not the point. I was talking about the awkwardness we are having now.

I remember when we were young, we shared everything without hesitation. but now we have our own discomfort.

but why? we're best friends right?

people say when there is something more than friendship you have to let it go for the sake of your friendship.

But I can't be selfish, nor can you to do this to our friendship and what's beyond.

I always had feelings for you. I know you had too.

we didn't talk about it nor discussed about it. may be we wanted to forget. or we don't need to describe anything to each other.

today I am giving a long speech. sorry for that in advance. but I needed to share to you all these, thoughts of mind. just the way you had also shared the same with me that night.

Cabir: Nandu bhook lagi hain. Cabir said showing his stomach with his hands.

nandini: sorry cabir. blame my long speech. main kuch zyada hi bol gayi. but aab main short mein khatam karti hoon.

So Mr. Manik Malhotra will you marry me?

manik sitting down in front of her. closing his eyes. then opening them with a broad smile.

manik: Yes Yes Yes.

theu had happy tears.

Mukti: Bas. aab ho gaya na? now jaldi se rings exchange karo.

they all were being impatient. they waited for this moment. after knowing about MaNan's relationship, they wanted them to be one. to be married. like CaVya. CaVya were happily married.

MaNan exchanged their rings. everyone present there clapped.

someone placed a hand on mukti's shoulder from behind.

person: ab toh tum khush ho na. ho gayi unki official proposal.

mukti: ya baby. super happy. now hum humaari group ki 3rd marriage enjoy karenge.

pehle cabir aur navya ne shaadi ki. phir aliya aur dhruv ne. aab nandu aur manik bhi shaadi karenge.

person: aur uske baad hum...

mukti: haan haan hum bhi kar lenge.

person: aise maat bolo baby.

mukti: aww. mere Abhi baby ko bura laga?

Abhi: hmmm...

mukti: don't worry. main ek kissi dungi na toh sab kuch thik ho jayega.

Introducing this mushy mushy jodi. a new addition in these friends life. Abhimanyu Thakkar. mukti's fiance.

Read about their First Meet in the extra chapters.

All elders blessed MaNan for a better future. they were going to start a new level of their relationship and their life.

this day was after some years of the operation. I won't mention the time. you can imagine as you want.

many things many events took place in between these years. Like they came to a conclusion that they won't experiment the same with the other eye .

Dhruliya got married recently. Mukti n Abhi was also getting married. so humaara MaNan kiyu piche rahe? they also took this decision which was already waiting for years.

Aab agar MaNan bhi shaadi kar rahe hain. khush hai ek sath. toh aur bacha kya?

kuch hai baaki. Aap logo ke vichar. thoughts, comments, likes, dislikes everything. Advice bhi. agar kuch add karna chahiye. yaa kuch part delete karna chahiye. toh please tell. Comment or inbox.



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