Recompensed- Part 3, The Restitution Series

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Loved this part Shruti...will write more soon!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Anna--
Shru,
What an enthralling, mind numbing part the third part was. 👏👏 Absolutely loved it!

I liked how Sanskaar and Laksh together check mated Ragini ; that was what I wanted to see in the show - the brothers coming together to trap Ragini in her own game. I wish SanLak bond was more explored in the show just like you have explored it here. 👏👏👏

Ragini's outburst was expected when she felt that she had been cornered and I am so glad you picked up the track that we all had discussed. True, most of us wanted Laksh to be the son from the illegitimate affair but Adarsh definitely makes more sense. Loved how the reveal happened and it made more sense after you explained to us about Kaveri and her longing to be loved and respected. Her journey was troublesome but thoroughly enjoyed it. ⭐️

The promise that sanskaar made to Swara was beautifully portrayed and I absolutely wish Sanskaar would go to Swara - ask her for some time and promise her the same thing.

The end - I was numb. Even though I am desperate for Ragini's redemption in the show, the end scene here gave me the chills. I too would believe that if Ragini wanted to hurt Swara - she will have to hurt Sanskaar first - and that would kill Swara's being completely! This was so beautifully written and I am so moved. You do like to make me cry dont you? 😆

Absolutely fantastic read! 👏👏

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Anna

Anna 🤗

Thank you so much for this! I am so pleased you liked it, loved reading your feedback, it made me feel very good!

Yes the brothers have so much potential when they can work together, even if Sanskaar is always the lead and Lakshya isn't the sharpest tool in the box imo. But I certainly cannot resist a good bromance.

As fascinating as I find Ragini, I have no doubt she crazy! Who can forget that chilling monologue of hers when we all thought she would turn positive after the trio exposed her?! *shudder*. Yes I had actually intended to make it Lakshya but I felt I would lose the suspense edge slightly and also it just didn't sit with my plot as then Kaveri would be an extra marital affair rather than an old love, which is how I wanted to show it. I am so pleased you felt Kaveri was relatable even in the negative avatar she clearly is.

Re SwaSan - that's how a lot of us see them and it irks me no end as you know that the show always fails on these angles for the sake of stretching silly drama out.

I was so angry on Ragini I couldn't redeem her, I wanted her punished. I did feel bad afterwards despite myself but karma takes no prisoners right?! Haha, I think I have earned a reputation as a sadist and all round mean writer- the majority of my readers all say I make them cry and I feel pleased at that 😆.

So pleased love that you liked it so much and let me know in such a lovely way! Love you

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Loved this part Shruti...will write more soon!

Thank you Tas! I was hoping you'd have time to read! I've completed the whole thing now and you should have the annoying pm 😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hi again Shru...🤗

As I promised in part four, I came here next. This had your specialty in intense story-lines in it.⭐️ From calculating Sanskar to past plots and present attacks of Kaveri to the final blow made by Ragini it was one fast and furious ride of emotional storms. 👏

I really liked the Kaveri you fleshed out for this one, from a childhood yearning for acceptance and a youth of given and denied love, to witnessing the death of the child she brought up and having to part with the child she gave birth to...well, the woman was thrown to flames, what can she do if not to burn in to blackness and turn a darker shade?

However unjustified when you see the big picture, I can understand her anger of knowing about Sanskar's present, it might seem to her that he doesn't value Kavita's love and has moved on rather easily and kaveri viewing it from the faulty prism of Durga Prasad and her own relationship would feel enraged!

I enjoyed the SwaSan interaction before the battle commenced, it had a much needed soothing and bright aura amidst all the dark and intense plotting going around.

Oh how much I love the solid and heavy skyfall Ragini suffered. She should have known before challenging Sanskar to such a dual that she would be ruined to no end. This was one Guru, Shishya battle I enjoyed thoroughly, had a smirk in my lips while I read this through.😃

I don't know why but Ragini always reminds me a serpent.🤢 Now that she is cornered and beaten by others she does what she do best. Hisses and bites! I knew something explosive would be her reaction to the trap she had been caught in, this woman have proved again and again that she can give and take life whenever needed. And did the same thing here.

The moment the bullet when off, I knew Swara would be shot. It's so logical that she would step between her love and death. But what touched me deeply was the way Sanskar experienced death, when his love was dying. The depth of his love is just...Sanskar I have no other word that would describe such vast emotion.😳

These two are truly meant to be and their portrayals are always so sharp and intense that you are left recalling the incidents again and again. Wonderful piece, this has just joined my favorites among your works. However my most favorite still is Overpowered By Love. This comes close as a second best I guess.😊

Loads of love,

Sakura

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Again I'm the latecomer!
Shru 🤗
It was absolutely enthralling.
The planning, plotting and checkmate!
I loved SanLak in this one.. Ragini was trapped in her own game..
Kaveri, the mysterious woman. You described her journey so well. It makes so much sense than the show. I could relate to her character properly.
And Adarsh, the result of illegitimate affair! Its a surprise for me. I don't know what to say about DP. This man and his so called respect in society!
The ending gave me goosebumps. I seriously do not want Ragini to redeemed. Cause such person really need punishment, more than rotting in a jail may be. I am suspecting your story is going thats way. Its my sixth sence telling to me. 😆
The SwaSan moments is beautiful. And at the end you really left me crying.. Swara got hit and Sanskar was feeling the pain. You described it so beautifully.
Last but not the least a huge thank you for not ressurecting Kavita!
I am really hating this character now-a-days. I never hated any fictional character that much. She turned me into a violent person. Just one glimpse of her and my blood starts boiling in anger.
Okay can't write more.
Off to read the next chapter.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Saku and Purbi- I am so grateful for your lovely replies and I'll be posting proper responses tomorrow from the iPad as the phone will irritate in doing the response yours deserves! Thank you for this, it'll help me sleep nicely X

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Shrutiii..OMGGG...😲😲😲

The ending was just unexpected.. what is going to happen to Swara..😭 And I don't know why..but I am concerned for Ragini too..I don't want her to die..😲

But seriously Sruthi dear, this update was really full of surprises..👏

Adarsh being DP and Kaveri's illegitimate son was the major revelation..😲

I loved the way Sanskaar and Lakshya planned everything with DP and together they all made Ragini fail in her every single plan..

And thank god, AP took everything gracefully, and she still loves her husband in spite of all that..I don't know, if a woman of this age will forgive such a husband, but that is the strange quality of women of her generation..They still think their husband as Pati Parameshwar..😛 Good for AP-DP,..😆

Ok..Now I just want to go and read the last part Shru,..I just cant wait anymore😊

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sparkler8
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Hi Shru,

Looks like another new year has passed since I reserved for this post. A multitude of reasons and my blatant forgetfulness when it comes to reserved posts are to blame.

Now getting into the OS, I wish, you were the writer for the show. The logic and nexus that you have established for the ignorant events in the show is amazing. I liked how you take the Story of Kaveri Bai much earlier than the party night to connect with Ragini's kidnapping.

Sanskaar and Lakshya plotting for the engineered disclosing climax was something I am sure every Swaragini fan would want to watch. Thanks to you, we can at least imagine it.

Beautiful writing, superb flow, detailed captures of the main scenes!

Keep writing, Shru!

Cheers

Sharon

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