Recompensed- Part 3, The Restitution Series - Page 5

Originally posted by: KawalArora

amazing amazing amazing...amazing Shruti its sooo amazing really hats off to u. How u write so beautifully i was impressed already now... really u mk me speechless n i m not able to tell how it feels to read ur work. U write as if u r going through those emotions urself. Such a work really u r my ideal my fav writer. lots of luv n plz continue

Originally posted by: KawalArora

Shruti plz read my os zindgi sath sath uploaded today bcoz u r my ideal n i really want u to read it n give me honest comments so dat i can improve

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Vampire Diaries??😃 Man, we have so much in common Shru! I feel so great😊. Defintiely. Love SanLak. I hope they are well shown in the show as well. Yeah Adarsh deserves a role too. He's the second Ram Prasad in the show.
Oxymorons fascinate me. I love using them and this one was perfect. 😉
Do have a good sleep and belated Happy New Year 2016🤗

Originally posted by: Sree...

Thank you for not resurrecting/ rebirth/ hamshakal Kavita. I'm so glad you didn't go in for that angle, yet there was a Kavita connection. So tired of unbelievable/ unrealistic twists.

Sometimes I forget Adarsh is DP's son😆

Waiting for your PM!!!

XOXO

Originally posted by: medhasankar

---Reading shrutu...wait.

Okay done.

First of all hugs galore.🤗xxx

I read a brilliant thriller part. Its just flawless. You always tend to detail..and somehow in thriller parts..every movement is described so well, that it became like a motion picture. Now I am drawing breath after finishing this.

I love the swasan convo. Its just 😳

the way she claimed that I would have made u put sindoor on me and mangalsutra...👏and he retrned the sentiment tenfold. I am glad he called all this madness tamasha.😆

They held hands the entire way. and that hand on knee was😳

I really loved the portrayal of kaveri. Her childhood, her dreams and the reality which crashes them. Very well etched shrutu...its like a vicious circle😕. Until the victims become the evil.

Kavita was a tragedy. I wish the CVs had not brought her back, but then she should have remained a pleasant memory.

People cannot face life alone after all. When their companions pass away, they are sad..they mourn and then they must move on. and if Sanky has moved on and he loves his wife any sensible person back from the dead would know that holding on would be heartbreaking. It would be way more prudent and happy all around to let go and move on in life.

Kaveri's grit and her outcome was the highlight here for me. It outshone even swasan.

I had lectured Viji about how the only way rags could have so much control over every member's life and spending habit would be if she were a HUF karta.(she got bored, but she was too nice to say so😆, sorry viji😛 --get a Virgo started on biz law😆) taking control that way in a co. would be damn hard...and even if she did sign, I would have expected her to lawyer up long ago. But really there had to be some loophole. this one was convenient enough and u made it sound believable.

good job sis.you finally killed the b***h

You know why I get late nowadays. This weekend was the last hol I will have in quite a while

Love ya always...

--Medha.

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Shruti 🤗 This is wonderful!! I loved it. And Im sorry I'm late in wishing you Happy New Year.

Firstly the development of Kaveri was brilliantly done. The instances that turned her into the person she is today was so amazingly written.

I had always wanted to hear Sanskaar speak to Swara about Kavita. I wanted him to talk to her and move on. I wish they had let Kavita remain as a pleasant memory of his past instead of bringing her in to create meaningless drama.

I loved Swasan scene. It was magical. The sindoor seems to have become a daily routine between them. Their way expressing their love for each other.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Sarra! How are you? I'm having a great time still, thank you and New Years was lovely- we went for dinner with family and then to a house party at my sister's neighbours which was great fun. Hope your 2016 started amazingly too.

Thanks so much for such a detailed and nice response! I am less than thrilled about the Kaveri track in the show and even less so about Kavita. I have managed to avoid Kavita for now but couldn't do the same with Kaveri so tried to recast the story as I like to do. Am pleased you find it readable and even engaging in that sense. Absolutely my point, if a character is well fleshed out, the negative positive debate is academic. In fact as a writer I have great attraction towards negative and grey characters.

Haha- we all love Sanskaar and a Sanskaar who masterminds things is so natural but compelling right? I am already disappointed in the wasted potential with Sanskaar in the show. They always veer off on stupid tracks and never fully exploit the characters they have. Even Ragini is the same. I see so many ways in which someone like Sanskaar should be taking charge and foiling plots etc which is what we did have a taste of, but now it's rather absent. I am so bored of swaragini sisters drama, yaaawwwn, I find SanLak way more engaging, hence the angle here.

I didn't want to deal with Kavita, I'll have to at some point I am sure but the track is already irritating me. I too never wanted Kavita to be other than a good memory for Sanskaar but of course I always knew too that they'd never leave it at that. They have to ruin everything.

Your totally right about Ragini getting her due. I too hate it that in the show they never show her really "lose"! Even now she'll get turned positive but she committed truly despicable crimes time and time again! What about that? What's the message?! Part 4 will tell you all about how and what happens to SwaSan in the end of my story and I hope you will like it!

Please always go on as you call it, it keeps me going to read everyone's comments! Part 4 will hopefully follow soon, already on the case.

Lots of love as ever xoxo