Recompensed- Part 3, The Restitution Series

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

wow!amaizing...

love the little swasan moment..pure with full of love.

sanlak togethr handle the situation.i like laksh alot here..

u use tht raaz of adarsh being thr child...hihi!gd one.

oops!swara ko goli lag gayi sanskar ko bachate hue...ab???

updt soonish...missing u..

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kavita_b_2004
In one word ... Beautiful... Awaiting for the next update...😊

Hey Kavita! I think you are a new reader? If so, welcome! Thanks for this and I'll try to update the final part as soon as possible:). Many thanks again!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
wow!amaizing...
love the little swasan moment..pure with full of love.
sanlak togethr handle the situation.i like laksh alot here..
u use tht raaz of adarsh being thr child...hihi!gd one.
oops!swara ko goli lag gayi sanskar ko bachate hue...ab???
updt soonish...missing u..
🤗

Hey Sonu! Thanks a lot and glad you liked it. Nice to know the little SwaSan moments being appreciated:). I am (never thought this would happen!) liking Lakshya on the show now so continued with keeping him positive in this:).

Re Adarsh, yes, I felt it could make some sense as I don't get how the big raaz in the show was only Kavita's supposed death by DP and I didn't want either of SanLak to be AA's child, and it also made more timeline sense here for it to be Adarsh, plus gave DP reason enough to want to conceal that so much.

Yes Swara literally took the bullet meant for Sanskaar, what better way to prove the extent of her love eh?!

I'll update as soon as I can, miss you all too!

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey Shruti,
I have read all three parts of the restitution series today at one go. I have no words. From part 1 to part 3 you have justified Sanskaar's actions in a more sensible way than what is shown in the show. Hats off there because truthfully this made more sense than the rubbish plot of Rashmi Sharma!

Part 1 - Resolved: My god Shruti! Your emotion portrayal of Swara in the first paragraph and then the emotional turmoil that Sanskaar is going through was so heart breaking! Seriously you have written it so beautifully! The suppressed rage taking flight, the hurt and agony for Swara, the need to control his emotions to curb Ragini! So so well written. And can I just say your last scene where Sanskaar all but follows Swara's car to make sure she has safely reached and ofcourse because his heart needs to see her was a master stroke! This part was ended so well, 'when hearts are resolute in unity to fight the odds to be together, nothing and no one can put them asunder'. So so beautiful!

Part 2 -Rectified: Finally Sanskaar takes Swara in the loop. The first part was heart wrenching. Swara's state was so so sad. Shomi is a mother who knows her daughter so well and knows what should be done with complete resolution. Loved the whole SwaSan scene, finally some spark in Swara where her anger also comes out at being so terribly treated. And the kiss! Before I forget, love you so much for making Lakshya so awesome! I really really like SanLak bromance! I am eagerly waiting for scenes where Lakshya and Sanskaar join hands to fight some negativity in the show. Thank you for that awesomeness.

Part 3 - Recompensed : The way you have portrayed Kaveri Roy was just wow! Splendid job! 👏 Absolutely stunning. So well written! Hats off. This part was an all out battle with action! The Sanskaar, Lakshya and DP joining hands, the way they took back their business and house, and the Adarsh Bhaiya twist! Such drama filled and action packed update! :D The whole pistol and Ragini finally losing all her marbles scene was just something unexpected. And the way you ended the part describing Ragini's body at the end of the stairs, I was like 'Ouch!' 😆 I have to say this is the first time I am reading a Ragini-going-mad-with-pistol scene! Not bad!

Desparately awaiting part 4 and am really sorry for not commenting earlier and for respective parts at the respective parts! Update soon and keep writing!

-V

P.S.: Can we have a little insight in Adarsh Bhaiya's mind in the next part? Would very much like that. :)

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

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Shruti🤗. U din't know how much I'd been waiting for this one. Sorry, had been so busy yesterday so cudn't read and just reserved it. But it was awesome. Man!!

Kaveri and DP's past connection was well displayed I must say! That torment that she might have gone through, when se had been ditched was very well displayed through the best choice of words.👏
Lakshya and Sanskaar were in full on mode, must say. Of course what else do you expect from Sanskaar Maheshwari!😳
But still, the two brothers rocked<3. They were totally ready for anything Ragini says and they had all information regarding the secrets of DP and Kaveri. Cool huh!😎
The revelation of Adarsh's origin was shocking! I was actually expecting it to be Lakshya, No offence!😃 But Adarsh, as he's older, it definitely makes sense.

Oh my! U made Ragini, PURE EVIL (not that she isn't) but still man. 😃 That gun shooting thing was so terrific and a thrill. I knew Swara would come in between the gun and Sanskaar. Mera dil bol raha tha!
This part was very beautifully written.👏How Sanskaar was totally lost in Swara's anguish, pain and her eyes. The only thing that mattered to him was his love who had been shot and now was bearing excruciating pain and how badly he wanted her alive. So tragic and lovely and tearful yet beautiful. Oxymorons I know, but they perfectly suit here.

Waiting for the next!😊 Do update soon.

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Okay, so i am finally caught up to all three parts now.

I loved the back story that you put there. It makes so much more sense than the one we have in the show. This actually justifies the anger and jealousy driving Kaveri to hurt DP and Maheshwari's rather than the current one we are seeing.

It made some much sense since DP does seem to love AP a lot now, that his dalliance with Kaveri would have been pre marriage and that his upbringing would have made it impossible for him to accept her. Adarsh being their child make some much sense in context of the timelines. I like how you have shown Sanskar was different. He has more courage to fight against all his conservative upbringing...thought fate had different plans for him (better ones). Her anger and him moving on, her should daughter too not getting a chance to leave the life they have been stuck in, feeling more hatred in her, beautifully put through.

I liked SanLak bonding in the laksh one, but i liked DP giving them charge here even better. they have really come across as a good pair here. turning the tables around completely not just in terms of Kaveri plot, but the property matter and most importantly the way they trapped ragini through their superior business understanding, which she clearly lacks. RGM doing all fraudulent businesses and SSM owing everything - marvellously done.

But corned animal hits back worse, cause they have nothing to lose, and that is what she did, hurt the one person she is completely jealous of for having what she never could. Swara got hurt...though i am glad it was only a flesh wound...of course that wouldnt register for Sanskar. All he saw was his love limp in his arms, bleeding. And Ragini too wasnt spared in the end...will she even make it? I doubt from the weird angle you have said she fell in. tragic life and tragic death.

Looking forward to the next part when you set all things even righter and bring the two love birds finally together - never to be separated.

beautifully worded and even better for someone like me, logically made so much sense 👏 👏

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Shru 🤣 Kaveri Roy to Kaveri Bai 🤣 That description of Kaveri's childhood...all the while I read it as Kavi's childhood Why must this woman be made Kavi's mom in the show😭 Why couldnt Kaveri have just been DP's dirty past & nothing more🤢

"Tears hardened around the heart help to form a shell that can defend and allow one to defend with ferocity from behind the walls." 👏 👏 👏 Amazing line!

OK I liked his way of working. SSM & RGM was all very Jeffrey Archer😳 Especially loved the coup with the MM thing. But just one question: if the audit trail is so clear wont her lawyers argue that she has been setup since a fraud would never leave such a clear trail right?

How good it would have been to see daadi, poti, kaveri rotting in adjacent cells Buddha taklu bich mein aa gaya🤢 tab AP ko yaad aaya ke ghar ki baat hai, swara ko jail bheja tha tab kya tha🤢

The Clifton Chronicles is an amazing book isnt it?

That part about life flashing before ones eyes when he is dying & then Sanskaar felt as if he was the one dying though the bullet had hit Swara...that thing brought tears to my eyes😭 This man is going through this trauma a second time 😭 Why are the fates (or in this case you!) so cruel to him😭

But even in all this I cannot help but applaud Ragini. Her target was always Swara I guess & she knew the way to get her out in the open was to aim at Sanskaar👏