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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: butteru

Thanku soo much .. yes i'm new here 😊

i read all 3 parts in just one hour i guess as i could not stop myself from reading it .. 😃

n yes i would love to read other FF or short stories written by u .. soo plzz inform me whn u start other FF if u can 😊

Great to "meet" you! Aww, thanks again! I will send you a buddy request, accept it and I can PM you on new work. Like I said, if you look at the link below to the Index I have there's loads of other ramblings from me in case you were ever bored! 😆

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butteru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Great to "meet" you! Aww, thanks again! I will send you a buddy request, accept it and I can PM you on new work. Like I said, if you look at the link below to the Index I have there's loads of other ramblings from me in case you were ever bored! 😆

thanks for adding me in ur list .. 😊

i just saw ur link .. OMG

i will try to read all your stories 😳 cuz i'm totally free these days 😆

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

This is brilliant!! How I wish the show would portray it this way.

I adored the bond Sanskaar and Swara shared. They are so secure in their love and the trust they share is unbreakable that it is almost impossible to bring in a conflict/ MU between them.

Uttara is a sweet heart. She can now be the sister Ragini could have been to Swara. And DP time and again proves that he is a commendable businessman. Sujju and AP need to learn something from DP.

I love your work!! Can you please PM me the link to your future work?

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Jwala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

shuru... sorry dear very late to comment. . I'm very lazy.. about your updates.. what will I say? do you know I'm afraid of reading your fictions. . because I don't know what to comment. . just speechless. . I felt bad for swara.. these brainless MM wasis made swara and sanskar's life hell.. no comment for ragini. . but lakshji he is more disgusting here.. he don't bother about swara's reputation. . he made her characterless by his one statement. . but I think in the show he don't do that.. and sanskar. . he is a gem.. how much faith and love. . swara understood his value. . and she confess her love.. I want them to leave MM.. but in the show it is impossible. . shuru I don't know how to praise you.. if I said brilliant it will be very less .. ye updates superrr se uperrrt se uperrt ho.. thank you dear for tolerating my bakwass comments. . love you a lot..

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
This is brilliant!! How I wish the show would portray it this way.
I adored the bond Sanskaar and Swara shared. They are so secure in their love and the trust they share is unbreakable that it is almost impossible to bring in a conflict/ MU between them.

Uttara is a sweet heart. She can now be the sister Ragini could have been to Swara. And DP time and again proves that he is a commendable businessman. Sujju and AP need to learn something from DP.

I love your work!! Can you please PM me the link to your future work?

Hello! Awww thanks so much for your nice words, you've made my Monday better! Exactly how I see SwaSan, they don't need forced MUs between them, especially Sanskaar who really thinks Swara is perfect! I so wish they give uttara a nice role! I love Taklu DP, in lots of my stories he has star supporting role:). I'll deffo PM you in the future and presume you know from the index below where the old ramblings are? I'll add you to my list for future PMs and thanks again:).

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Asyalover
awesome awesome just awesome

Thank you ever so much!:)

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Sorry for late replying Shruti..
Read the last two parts in one go.. They are fantastic. Loved it completely. Swara's realization and the consummation..
Laksh ko achcha punch mila.. I am expecting thoda aur jhapad par its ok..
Sanskaar the detective! How much I love this man! A perfect hubby.
Loved Swara supported him and didn't do her mahanta drama..
I am still blushing remembering the
*ahem ahem* scene..

Thanks for the PM Shruti..

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: harshsriti
shuru... sorry dear very late to comment. . I'm very lazy.. about your updates.. what will I say? do you know I'm afraid of reading your fictions. . because I don't know what to comment. . just speechless. . I felt bad for swara.. these brainless MM wasis made swara and sanskar's life hell.. no comment for ragini. . but lakshji he is more disgusting here.. he don't bother about swara's reputation. . he made her characterless by his one statement. . but I think in the show he don't do that.. and sanskar. . he is a gem.. how much faith and love. . swara understood his value. . and she confess her love.. I want them to leave MM.. but in the show it is impossible. . shuru I don't know how to praise you.. if I said brilliant it will be very less .. ye updates superrr se uperrrt se uperrt ho.. thank you dear for tolerating my bakwass comments. . love you a lot..

Jwalu 🤗 for the nice comments and 😡 for the sorry- your not allowed to say sorry - Sanskaar fan girls pact remember?! 😛

Haha don't be afraid- whatever you comment I love to read and am very grateful too! And the comments are far from bakwaas, the only forgiveness you will have to seek is if you don't read and comment xoxoxo

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sonal

@SONAL30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Hey shru🤗

Again a beautifully written story

Part 1.

Hey ram...Ragya the bokwass couple n their bokwass drama🥱m not commenting on them useless fellows🤢

Coming to SwaSan...Both of them vr so soo sooo cute😳

Sanskaar was feeling something fishy but he kept quite because of his wife...aww he loves her so much

The useless couple again used her n our stupid swara again fell in their trap...haha she is so isshmart😎

Plzz sanskaar send her to a mandir she belongs there only...itni mahaan chori mahri aankhon mein toh aansu a gyee😭 kahaan hain swara devi ke charan mujhe chooney hai...she is mahaan than simar n gopi vahu...sansku u r so unlucky oops I meant lucky...slip of tounge😛

Hmm back to the story...she again chose her chameleon kind of sister over her sanskaari sanskaar n went to the farmhousebewkoof aurat...that was a trap😡

N then she told everything to her hubby...how Convenient...pehle karo raasleela phir kaho hamara thode hi na hai character dheela🤢

But our mahaan sanskaar forgave her...m proud of u my boy agar aapki biwi ka dimaagi santulan kharaab hai toh ismein aapki kya galti hai

He was angry but stil didn't utter a word...awww😳

N then he kissed her n she allowed him to do that...how romantic😳...only good thing about this bokwass diwali day😵

Part 2.

They both were in there dreamland n were still lost in that dreamy kiss😳

Both thought ki the other one won't feel comfortable so they didn't pick up that topic again

Swara went to baadi n daadi gave her the much needed gyaan...bachpan mein badaam hi khila deti thoda toh dimaag chalta swara devi ka😆

When she came back to the MM the family starts questioning her...she deserves that😉

Sanskaar again showed the immense trust on his wifey but after the revelation on kidnap n then that CD...he felt broken n cheated

The chameleon n useless couple showed their true colors...laksh said swara loves him...ohh hello r u a male bimbo...lol heard it on splitsvilla but this is the best name for laksh😆

N finally swara devi ke dimaag ki batti jali n she put 2 n 2 together🥳 pehle hi mentos kha leti🤣

Sanskaar supported her in front of the mentalwasis...n swara felt so good

I really love SwaSan's trust their camaraderie😃

They r so adorable😳

Part 3.

Sanskaar took a decision for both of them n swara felt he is done with their relationship...sabko apni tarah samjha hai😆

Sanskaar sensed the dangerous motives of chameleon couple😲

Both of them were dangerous n disgusting🤢

Loved Uttara n swara's bonding...she gave her the right advice...proud of u uttara after Sanskaar DP n RP u r the only person left in MM who have barins😆

The best nanad ever😃

Swara went to sanskaar n finally confessed her feelings n they finally became one😳

But again laksh came to haunt them...yep he haunts people

He even forced himself on her bhabhi😭poor girl was so scared but as usual our hero came n jo pitayi hui na laksh ki sabse jada khusi mereko hui🤪

Loved the way sanskaar protected swara n was about to throw the chameleon couple in the jail but he again showed that he is a obedient son...he believed in DP n his judgment but didn't agree to stay in MM n left with his wife n finally they spent some comforting moments together😳

Loved the update dear🤗

N again sorry for the long reply...kyunki main hoon aadat se majboor...side effects of being a Ranveer Singh fan😳😃

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Purbishona
Sorry for late replying Shruti..
Read the last two parts in one go.. They are fantastic. Loved it completely. Swara's realization and the consummation..
Laksh ko achcha punch mila.. I am expecting thoda aur jhapad par its ok..
Sanskaar the detective! How much I love this man! A perfect hubby.
Loved Swara supported him and didn't do her mahanta drama..
I am still blushing remembering the
*ahem ahem* scene..

Thanks for the PM Shruti..

Please don't say sorry dear, so happy you read it and liked it! Thanks for the comments xoxo

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