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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: anu91
Loved it dear...
Finally I read full story...
U wrote it so well. ...

Thank you so much sweetie x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shru, iss wonderful TS ke liye comment bhi to detailed hona chahiye na? 🤗
And you deserves all the appreciation and many more 😳

Preet - you are a sweetheart and I love you xoxo

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Kelly08

@Kelly08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Loved it ...plz pm ms on further update . I read all the 3 parts yesterday midnight itself looking forward to read more

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Kelly08
Loved it ...plz pm ms on further update . I read all the 3 parts yesterday midnight itself looking forward to read more

Hello! A new reader- yayyy! Wow- you liked it? So grateful, thanks! I've sent you a buddy request, accept it and I will PM you next time I post something. Oh and there's lots of blabbing stories which are all under my index below if you fancied reading any of those:)

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Hey Shruti 😊Jambo

Pole Sana Rafiki for almost being the last one to comment on this wonderful story. Like Viji your a brilliant writer. You had me swooning over Sanku. If only we could have seen this charming and confident Sanku determined to win his lady love with such renewed passion on the show as well. Their love story seems to be on a limbo with not much progress what with all this crappy kidnapping drama. And you perfectly interweaved all the plots of the TV show amidst their story with an equally perfect ending

What a fine piece of writing. Hoping to read more. 😃

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10
Hey Shruti 😊Jambo
Pole Sana Rafiki for almost being the last one to comment on this wonderful story. Like Viji your a brilliant writer. You had me swooning over Sanku. If only we could have seen this charming and confident Sanku determined to win his lady love with such renewed passion on the show as well. Their love story seems to be on a limbo with not much progress what with all this crappy kidnapping drama. And you perfectly interweaved all the plots of the TV show amidst their story with an equally perfect ending

What a fine piece of writing. Hoping to read more. 😃

Jambo Sana Ruqaiya! (is shortening to Ruqi annoying?! or is there a short form you use?!). Please don't say pole hon! I am really grateful you read and commented so nicely! So glad you liked it so much and thanks ever so much for liking the writing- made my weekend! God knows what's happening at the moment, just hope it ends asap and we get what we want! Lots of love xx

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Jambo Sana Ruqaiya! (is shortening to Ruqi annoying?! or is there a short form you use?!). Please don't say pole hon! I am really grateful you read and commented so nicely! So glad you liked it so much and thanks ever so much for liking the writing- made my weekend! God knows what's happening at the moment, just hope it ends asap and we get what we want! Lots of love xx

😆 yes yes Ruqi is fine. In fact you made my weekend. Swasan part was incredibly romantic and totally 😳especially the first kiss and I liked how you described Swara who is most of the time practical and rationale but when it comes to her family and especially her sister she abandons all logic and acts out of emotion. Oh and I love the quote from HP. Can't remember it though. I had read order of the Phoenix such a long time ago.

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Part-1

Woe didu...

New story...

First congratulations for becoming rockerz...

Awesome uodate di...

Just loved it...

Beautiful...

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Part-1
Woe didu...
New story...
First congratulations for becoming rockerz...
Awesome uodate di...
Just loved it...
Beautiful...
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Hey sweetie! I just realised I'd missed this comment, so sorry! Thank you for this. I hope your wrist is better now? Ah thanks for the wishes on the colour promotion- too much talking on forum! So glad you liked this! Hope you'll be able to read the latest series posted, have PM'd you the link. Lots of love xoxo