Trial By Fire- A SwaSan 3 Shot - Page 18

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey shru🤗

Again a beautifully written story

Part 1.

Hey ram...Ragya the bokwass couple n their bokwass drama🥱m not commenting on them useless fellows🤢

Coming to SwaSan...Both of them vr so soo sooo cute😳

Sanskaar was feeling something fishy but he kept quite because of his wife...aww he loves her so much

The useless couple again used her n our stupid swara again fell in their trap...haha she is so isshmart😎

Plzz sanskaar send her to a mandir she belongs there only...itni mahaan chori mahri aankhon mein toh aansu a gyee😭 kahaan hain swara devi ke charan mujhe chooney hai...she is mahaan than simar n gopi vahu...sansku u r so unlucky oops I meant lucky...slip of tounge😛

Hmm back to the story...she again chose her chameleon kind of sister over her sanskaari sanskaar n went to the farmhousebewkoof aurat...that was a trap😡

N then she told everything to her hubby...how Convenient...pehle karo raasleela phir kaho hamara thode hi na hai character dheela🤢

But our mahaan sanskaar forgave her...m proud of u my boy agar aapki biwi ka dimaagi santulan kharaab hai toh ismein aapki kya galti hai

He was angry but stil didn't utter a word...awww😳

N then he kissed her n she allowed him to do that...how romantic😳...only good thing about this bokwass diwali day😵

Part 2.

They both were in there dreamland n were still lost in that dreamy kiss😳

Both thought ki the other one won't feel comfortable so they didn't pick up that topic again

Swara went to baadi n daadi gave her the much needed gyaan...bachpan mein badaam hi khila deti thoda toh dimaag chalta swara devi ka😆

When she came back to the MM the family starts questioning her...she deserves that😉

Sanskaar again showed the immense trust on his wifey but after the revelation on kidnap n then that CD...he felt broken n cheated

The chameleon n useless couple showed their true colors...laksh said swara loves him...ohh hello r u a male bimbo...lol heard it on splitsvilla but this is the best name for laksh😆

N finally swara devi ke dimaag ki batti jali n she put 2 n 2 together🥳 pehle hi mentos kha leti🤣

Sanskaar supported her in front of the mentalwasis...n swara felt so good

I really love SwaSan's trust their camaraderie😃

They r so adorable😳

Part 3.

Sanskaar took a decision for both of them n swara felt he is done with their relationship...sabko apni tarah samjha hai😆

Sanskaar sensed the dangerous motives of chameleon couple😲

Both of them were dangerous n disgusting🤢

Loved Uttara n swara's bonding...she gave her the right advice...proud of u uttara after Sanskaar DP n RP u r the only person left in MM who have barins😆

The best nanad ever😃

Swara went to sanskaar n finally confessed her feelings n they finally became one😳

But again laksh came to haunt them...yep he haunts people

He even forced himself on her bhabhi😭poor girl was so scared but as usual our hero came n jo pitayi hui na laksh ki sabse jada khusi mereko hui🤪

Loved the way sanskaar protected swara n was about to throw the chameleon couple in the jail but he again showed that he is a obedient son...he believed in DP n his judgment but didn't agree to stay in MM n left with his wife n finally they spent some comforting moments together😳

Loved the update dear🤗

N again sorry for the long reply...kyunki main hoon aadat se majboor...side effects of being a Ranveer Singh fan😳😃

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Shrutu...

Me very very very late...huff pufff and huff...reached here.

Great work sis...

I adore this daadi...muahhh to u for that..n double muaah for dp n uttara

When will someone have sense in this blasted show????😡

Okay...@1st part...where swara was curled up missing him...and sanskaar was holding up by a thread...very well etched

👏

Then came in that portion where her flashbacks happen about how they were slowly becoming the couple we regularly pray for

I adored the descriptions where ragini obviously used those photos to bowl sanskaar out. I really hope swara burnt those photos in the show re.😕

And

Laksh obvio would turn a double teamer..we knew that from go.🥱

The realization...and the confession. Wow. Very well done sis. Totally romantic and rang true...swara madam ran to her ashiq...😳

And confessed. Kya karegi...door I bardaash na hota hai

The part where laksh was drunk. Masterstroke. U gave us a hint that even though that perbert would probably have done that in his senses as well...still being drunk maybe had heightened and put him out of control somewhat. As if I believe that. He would have literally beatwb his bhai and climbed over him to get swara. Whatever.

Etching ragini and laksh ...in the same sort of weave...their psyches are somewhat close as of now..except for the fact..that one is the player...and one is the plaything. Good job portraying that.

Sanskaar also has more sense here. And he is solid.like his punch. Yippee. He cracked his knuckles hge hit so hard 😆

And bandage by wifey.😃

But dadi. This lady here is the best.

Love ya sis...and the romance blooming amidst all this nonsense thorns...was ur masterpiece.

Xoxo.

Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl

This is so amazing Shruti. I don't even remember the count of how many times I have already read this.

I just wish if CVs could show something like this in the show..

Its just amazing.. I am speechless...

Do write more. I have read almost of your works by now. They are brilliant.

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti 🤗 What a marvellous TS 👏 Finally managed to comment here 😃
Okay so coming to the different parts:
Part 1- I loved the initial description of the day and the The gentle patter of the unexpected rain against the window.
Swara's pain description was awesome, and Sanskar's concern towards her even though he was in his apartment.
Laksh as you said is just Ragini's pawn, she is manipulating him and wo uske ishaaron par nach raha hai 😕
The way you described Swara's inner turmoil, take a bow 👏
'Then there was Swara herself. It would perhaps be difficult to find a more contradictory young woman.'
I completely agree, she was convinced that her maa and baba's marriage was unbreakable, but not her and Sanskar's 🤔
She can't even see that Laksh is just pretending to give a chance to Ragini.
'Previously he had always maintained a guarded distance in anything more than friendship, but this Sanskaar was charming and even openly flirtatious.'
Oh i love this flirty Sanskar 😉 And Swara doesn't mind this side of him as well 😆
I loved the following description and how Swara started to feeling attracted towards him as well ❤️ How she felt natural taking out his clothes for him, made sure he took his vitamines; and then they took the tea together in the balcony. I could imagine the scene in front of my eyes Swara is essential for Sanskar and Sanskar is essential for Swara ❤️
'He knew he could not let her go, she was as essential as breathing to him, and he was now determined to woo her and to make sure she was made aware over time, that she did not have to go anywhere if she did not want to.'
Seems only Sanskar (even DP though) has brain in the whole family. He sensed that Ragini was planning something and Laksh too. If only Swara could sense this.
He brought a lehenga for her on Diwali and Laksh as well 🤢 Glad she gave it to Ragini and wore the one gifted by Sanskar 😳
Aww and when he saw her the next day wearing it, he was mesmerized
'Swara, tum bahut hi atchi lagg rahi ho. Tumhe maanna hoga ke meri pasand ka jawaab nahi?"

'Errm, haan Sanskaar yeh lengha sach main bahut atcha hai."

'Main lenghe ki nahi, jissne lengha pehna hai uski baat kar raha hoon Swara," How sweet <3
And their kiss ☺️❤️
'Their lips met, a gentle brush at first, his mouth hard against the softness of hers. He put his arms around her and she melted into them as fluidly as liquid gold [...] Sanskaar poured his longing and love for her into this kiss, she responded ardently, her body and soul recognising and meeting his need with her own unguarded response.

2 Part- Dadi, i'm loving her 😆 She immediately questioned Swara about Sanskar and whatever she said was absolutely true 👏
Swara finally couldn't deny the fact that this was not friendship, but more than it. 🥳 Yeh show mein kab dekhne ko milega?
'Chori, gussa hone se koi fayda na hai. Yeh hi duniya ka dastoor hove he. Tu bole hai ke thare aur Laksh ke beech main sirf dosti hai, lekin thare badi saas aur saas ki galatfaimi bhi mhareko samah aave hai. Thare ko kya zaroorat thi akele unn dono ke saath jaane ki?' Very well said, why didn't she go with Sanskar? This is her mistake.
Ragini's drama 😡 Airline tickets and hotel booked in the name of her and Laksh 😕 How easily everyone believed those 'papers' instead of Swara.
No one took her side, apart of Sanskar, and once again he proved what true love is. Their relationship is based on trust.
She didn't inform Sanskar about the pics and kidnapping even in the show
Laksh, how cheap he is! "Abh hame sabh ko sach batadena chahiye, ke hum ek doosre se pyaar karte hain!" Swara should have slapped him right there.
AP is so annoying now 😡 Aankhein band kar ke she believes Ragini and Laksh. Sanskar, can't praise him enough 👏 I just love him ❤️
Laksh & Ragini's conversation ugh, their stupid plans 😡 They know that Sanskar is Swara's strenght.
And then Ragini's 'kidnapping', Laksh tried to frame Sanskar in this. He is stepping so low, yuck 😡
Poor Swara, when Sanskar said to her to pack her clothes she felt bad 😭 She can't live without him now 'Swara felt as if her heart was fracturing in a thousand pieces.'

Part 3- As always you managed to depict Swara's feelings and her pain in a magnificient way Shru 👏 She needed Sanskar the most right now, but he wasn't there.
Of course Sanskar was in the same situation, he didn't want to stay away from her.
He did that to protect her from Ragini's evil plans.
Loved how you showed Uttara's character here (i think she will play a huge role in the show as well now as she might be the one who kidnapped Ragini or she might have a connection with the kidnapper).
How sweet of her, she came to meet her bhabhi at the Badi as she was worried for her. How hope to see her supporting SwaSan in the show as well. Any ship name for Uttara & Swara? 😆
Thank god she suggested to Swaa to visit Sanskar atleast once.
Aww and the SwaSan's moment ❤️ First of all her confession to Sanskar (yayy!) 'Sanskaar, woh pehle ki baat thi. Kya tum sach main nahi jaante ke main abh tumse pyaar karti hoon aur tumse alag hone ka soch bhi nahi sakti?"
It marked the start of a new beginning in a true sense for Swara and Sanskaar, and they both gloried in it.
OMG the next part was shocking 😲
Laksh 😡 Kitna gir geya hai yeh ladka 😡 He doesn't even know how to respect someone 😕
Phew Sanskar reached there in time, along with DP. I guess he was left completely speechless by Laksh's behaviour.
Lol i knew it Ragini's kidnapping was just a plan, that unfortunately for Laksh & Ragini, didn't work 🤣
I loved how you kept the suspense till the end, and then revealed everything 👏 Well done Shru 🤗
Detective Sanskar 😎 Laksh and Ragini deserve a severe punishment.
The ending was beautiful 😳 'The meeting of their lips, the touching of their bodies, their exchanged words of love, and their thankfulness at having each other, were all a beautiful and heartrending paean sung from their souls to vibrate in the cosmos.'
You always leave me speechless with your works Shru, you are a wonderful writer 👏
Big hug 🤗

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Originally posted by: -Ros-

Well written, as ever Shruti 😳

Flirty Sansku is the best! ☺️ Him leaving out no opportunity to express his affection while simultaneously being satisfied with her response..

Their kiss was magical. ❤️ Really liked how he just left her to figure what she took out of that moment.

Them being awks with each the morning after was soo chweet!

Jhappi to Dadi for giving Swara some sound advice. 🤗

If there are any posts for SR CVs going, you should take it 😉. The characters speaks more sense in your story than that utter 🤬. What AP said to Swara was SO good- she really needed to hear it & I'm glad it finally set the alarms off in Swara's mind.

Absolutely in awe with Sanskaar's trust on Swara, even after the photos (Still to come on the show 🤢) and CDs. This man ❤️.

Swara's confession was lovely- simple and straight to the point. Then... ☺️

I have no words for what Laksh did. 😕🤢 Thank goodness Sanskaar and DP were there to save the day! Does not surprise me one bit that Sanskaar was the only one who pieced the puzzle together and figured out who recently majored in kidnapping.

Loved the way Swara left the decision of sazaa to Sanskaar. ⭐️ If that happens in the show, I will rejoice forever. 😆

Finally Swasan left the mental asylum! They can now romance in peace. 😳

EDIT: I change my mind about you taking CVs post They'd probably melt your brain with their nonsense and turn you into one of them. 🤔 and we wouldn't get to read awesome stories that keeps us sane while putting up with the shiz in the show. 😆