Voyage: A Manik-Nandini Fiction| *Completed* Ch11, Pg 27 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bitasta

Welcome back!!!

I hope everything is fine at your end now. The problems are parts and parcels of real life... The crux is to retain your sanity despite the chaos. You seem to have done the same perfectly...

Your works are bliss to read... Don't ever give up.. Take your time, you'll still have readers like me lurking to read your works..

God bless,
Anura


Thanks Anura!

You have rightly said it's all a part of life and just can't give up because I have got a 'Life'. I would rather fight it.

About the write up, I am glad you found it worth enough to read and comment. I am planning to straighten out my schedule and get this done; though not in a hurry as I want it sensible and read-worthy. So might take a bit of time to plan but I am hoping I would update soon. More because I have got readers like you lurking around. ^_^

Thanks once again !
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Posted: 8 years ago
I was so surprised to see your ff in my posts. This was awesome.

I had to re-read the last chapter first but this was beautiful.

I'm so excited about the promise.

Also welcome back! *hugs*

-Love, Zoha
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

I was so surprised to see your ff in my posts. This was awesome.

I had to re-read the last chapter first but this was beautiful.

I'm so excited about the promise.

Also welcome back! *hugs*

-Love, Zoha


I was as surprised as you are, for finally having posted something ;P

I think I know what it is when a chapter is updated after a long gap. I have been through it. But the fact that you went through the pain of going through the previous chapter means a lot to me.

Thank you!

I am not sure how well would the promise be portrayed in the coming chapters *Fingers crossed*

*Hugs you back* hopefully I am back for good.

Love,
Shenz!!

PS: I was more surprised to have received your comment. It means a lot to me. Thank you! ^_^
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Posted: 8 years ago
Surprised? Well, you people better be. 🤣 I had to come up with update when I knew I have got readers around, waiting.

I had completed the chapter this morning but just didn't get the time to post it throughout the day. By the way, do not ask me how the hell did I manage to jot it down; especially when and where.

Not sure how well this chapter would turn out to be; and also, if it is good enough or not. I did have certain ideas on a different track but it would have turned out too mainstream. And I didn't want that to happen. I prefer random and not mainstream.


Whatever you think, do share you views.


Do note, there might be typo errors amd so on. Haven't proof read.

Enjoy, hopefully!!


Chapter 7




He walked her through the narrow alley, leading her towards a place of his choice. She carefully tiptoed onto the stoney path, dodging the big chunks of stones that she could, while hopping from one the big rock to the other.

One of her hand securely held in his, while the other one latched onto his fingers that were wrapped around her arm. She was cautious but he was more.

"Manik," she huffed in annoyance. Being unaware was one such thing that didn't go well with her. His eyes turned to mesh with hers, attentively.

"Where are we going?" Her head dropped as she blew out a rough tiresome breath.

"Somewhere," she was answered with the same response for the umpteenth time as he chose to strictly keep it to himself.

He found her rolling her eyes at him to which he reminded, pointedly, "You've promised to do as I say." In the past couple of days, he had used her words ample of times and to his favour. Sometimes casually, sometimes firmly and at times in fluke. It just seemed an easy way out for him, when she seemed annoyed or stubborn.

His tone faltered to a casual one as he added, "So follow the lead; and stop questioning, for once."

She sighed in defeat. There was no point in arguing with him. She simply followed the lead.

His steps came to a halt as his eyes came across the sight of endless ocean splashing waves onto the rocks nearby. The scenery unfolded with sun was submerging into the waters of the ocean and the darkness in the sky overtaking.

He could sense her eyes questioningly boring at him which he chose to neglect for the time being. Making her sit at the rock, he slid himself besides her.

Strokes of calm breeze smoothed across their skin and they both stood there breathing the freshness, listening to the rythym of splashing waves and enveloping silence.

"This is my hideout," his words trailed in a hush while his eyes stared at the setting sun with a smile gazing his lips. The place held a power to sooth his aching pain; to provide comfort and peace; and to straighten out his thoughts.

Her eyes turned wide as she looked at him. He held nothing but a gentle smile indicating the effect of the place on him.

For some, it might not be a big deal but for him it was. This was the place where he would be, when he didn't want anyone around. The fact that very few people knew about it made it more of secluded place and perfect for him.

Though, giving out this piece of information, bringing her his hideout was an intimate thing for him.

"I just wanted you to know," he turned to meet her eyes and took her hand in his as he saw her eyes filled with surprise. Smilimg genuinely at her, he tried to convey assurance - of something.

She bobbed her head and leaned onto his shoulder as her eyes trailed along the path of the ocean that stood calm at the surface but held havoc underneath. Embracing the feel, they both sat their in silence with the top of their heads linked.



She might not be aware but he had already given a piece of his heart to her.






I will try updating the next soon.

Thoughts please!
Edited by -shenz- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
^By the way, I haven't sent PMs and neither am I planning to.

Just let me know if you all are fine with it or would prefer to be notified.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

^By the way, I haven't sent PMs and neither am I planning to.


Just let me know if you all are fine with it or would prefer to be notified.


Dear I am reading your story for first time
I read all the parts together and dear it's simply amazing
I would like to get pms dear if you don't mind
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah


Dear I am reading your story for first time
I read all the parts together and dear it's simply amazing
I would like to get pms dear if you don't mind
Pls update soon


Hey, firstly thanks for giving this piece of randomness a try.

Glad that you found the story good.

I think if that's what everyone wants then I will send out the PMs. But then the same rules would be applicable as earlier. Hope that's fine :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
So so so beautiful. I loved it through and through. This is so peaceful. Giving a piece of his heart to the girl he has started developing feelings for.LOVELY.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg this way so beautiful!!
The peace it gives will reading is the thing which always has me intact with this.
Surely he has given a piece of his heart to her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
To be honest this is one of my fav ff, I'm reading currently.. U are an amazing writer. Ur way of writing is very smooth yet strong, loveddd all the chapters. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Plzzz update soon :-)

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