Yuvreen SS : Jab We Met Last part updated @pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Enjoyed reading the update ,very nice.
Sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: yuvreenani

Aye haye tolu k mummy papa bade cute hai :p . Waiting for next part. Thank you for posting more parts for me and sahas 😆 Yuvreen pagal deewane hai sachme 😃


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You guyz motivate me to write more n more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Aaiiiyyy

Tolu ke mummy pappa are so cute ji.
Koi parents itne bhi cuTe hosakte hain!!
Loved evry scene...every damn scene
And Mumbai mujhe bhi jaana hai...yuvreen ko milna hai
Dono bade draamebaaz hain. Indias best draamebaaz ka award milni chahiye.
Thank you kdi!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzle22


Really nice..both are a bit crazy..
Was laughing at Tolu's parents..😆

Continue soon Kdi..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujairohit

Enjoyed reading the update ,very nice.

Sorry for late reply.


Thank you thank you thank you so much for always being der and taking out time from your busy schedule.
You guyz motivate me to write more n more
Happy and glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part Four

Yuvreen had already started their plan and now where waiting for rathi to come. Yuvi has changed his attire and was back to his jeans t shirt n jacket where as suvreen was still in same attire ghagra choli with her long gungat and a baby bump.
Rathi reached n spotted yuvi with a girl he was bit confused and yuvi hugged him
Y: sab theek
R: haa bhai sab theek... Chale
Yuvi nodded n gestured suvi to come along
R: bhai yeh kaun hai aur ise tu humare sath chalne kyun keh raha hai
S: gani khama devar saaa me amma tolu ki mai
R: yeh kaunsi language bol rahi hai muje kuch samaj nahi aaraha yuvi
Yuvraj wanted to laugh looking at rathi's expression but he controlled and with serious tone," rathi chal tuje ghar pahuchke sab batata hu"
Yuvreen along with rathi reached annie's house. Annie is naro's cousin n boyz trio's childhood friend and the reason behind manaro love story.
As they entered manu naro and annie hugged yuvi and asked if he was ok and he just nodded.
M: bhai yeh ladki kaun hai
S: gani khama devar saaa me amma tolu ki mai
R: manu tuje samja yeh kya boli
M: nahi
They turned towards girl and even they nodded in NO
A: yuvi tu hi bata yeh kaun hai
Y: yeh wo.. Wo yeh
R: yeh wo wo yeh kab se yehi kar raha hai... Ab bol bhi kaun hai yeh
Y: tolu ki mom
A: ohhh tolu ki mom aur yeh tolu kaun hai
He pointed at suvi' s baby bump
M: to is tolu ke papa kaha hai
And suvi pointed at yuvi controlling her laugh inside her gungat
And others, kyaaa
They all were shocked confused speechless and none of one knew how to react.
A: yuvi yeh joke hai na
He nodded in a no with puppy face amd annie covered her mouth with her hand.
M: lekin yeh sab hua kaise...
Rathi hits manu," abey thodi der me teri shadi hai aur tu puch raha hai yeh sab hota kaise hai"
Naro blushed and yuvreen giggled
M: mera matlab tum dono kab kaise... Tu isse kab aur kaise mial aur tune hume bataya kyun nahi.
Y: kya batata aur kis muh se batata ki me... Ki me
R: ki tu iske saath muh kala karke aaya
Yuvi bends his head down n
S: nahiii yeh sunne se pehle me mar kyun nahi gai... Muje to laga tolu k bapu mujse payaaar karte hai par yeh to...
She started crying loydly n suddenly " aaahhhaaa"
A and N: ise labor pain shuru ho gaya hume doc ko bulana padega
Boyz panicked n yuvi was shocked as it was nt in plan.
Y: doc ki jarurat nahi me dekhta hu
A: tu pagal ho gaya hai she is in pain tu kya dekhega...
Yuvi ignored her and went towards suvreen covering her with his back and gang was standing confused
He picked suvi's gungat and she winked
Y: bahut ho gai acting ab sab ko sach bata dete hai.
Suvi took out soft toy frm her belly and both turned around
Y: badhaai ho tum log chacha ban gaye (showing toy) tolu k chacha
Yuvreen bursted out laughing and gang again no reaction.
After laughing out and having fun yuvi introduced suvi to everyone and told them about their journey.
***
Yuvreen freshend up and came back and on other side even the lawyer came and manaro got married in front of their friends.
Everyone congratulated the couple and yuvi saw suvi wiping off her tear and going towards a corner. Yuvi too followed her
Y: kya hua... Apne parents ki yaad aarahi hai
S: wo theek to honge na... Me unhe kabhi hurt nahi karna chathi thi isiliye me shaadi k liye bhi maan gai thi aur ab dekho mene hi unhe sabse jyada hurt kiya.
Yuvi asked her to call her parents and apologized.
She called them n explained them everything how by mistaken identity she got kidnaped and how by her own wish she came to mumbai and she never wanted to marry that guy.
Her father first got very angry but then he understood and asked suvi to come back and promises he will let her live her dreams.
Yuvi was standing beside suvi all the while to support her and as she disconnected the call she hugged him tightly thanking him for everything he did.
****
It was evening and annie had kept a party for manaro. Annie and naro spoke to suvi's father n convinced him to let suvi stay for a day.
Party was going on in full swing guyz were enjoying their drinks and couples were dancing. The only person who was left alone was yuvraj singh. He was waiting for suvreen to come and she was taking ages.
A girl came near yuvi and asked him for a dance and.," thank you bt i dnt want to dance"
G: why... Let me guess your girl friend will get jealous... Right
Y: no girl friend i am single...
The girl was about to say something when suvi arrived dressed in a peach color short dress with polka dots. " gorgeous..."the only word that came out of yuvi looking at her.
The girl again caught his attention
G: no girl friend right...
Y: not yet... But very soon (he winked at went towards suvi)
Y: koi itna time lagata hai aane ko... Party manaro k liye hai tere liye nahi
S: jab kisi ladki se party me milte hai to use compliment dete hai lecture nahi... U still need to learn many things yuvraj singh
Y: if you are a teacher i am ready to learn anything and everything (smirks)
S: now thats impressive mr singh
Y: thank you miss guggal
Both giggled and shared an eye lock
Music changed and yuvi forwardes his hand. Suvi happily took it and they went on dance floor.
Both were lost into each other leaving the world behind.
****
Next Day Morning everyone was fast asleep and taking the chance suvi sneaked out from annie's house.
After an hour yuvi woke up and found a letter beside him he opens n read
"Thank you mr kidnapper for every thing agar kismat me likha hoga to hum fir milenge kahi na kahi kisi na kisi mod par tab tak ke liye sayonara"
Here suvreen was waiting on station for her train to arrive which was delayed by an hour.
S: gannuji ab yeh train kyun late hai ek to aise hi mera jaana bahut mushkil ho raha hai upar se yeh... Agar aap mere sath koi game khel rahe ho to plz mat khelo yeh bahut ganda game hai... Puri ki puri situation filmy bana di aapne lekin filmo me to happy ending hoti hai aur yaha...
On other side yuvi wakes up rathi n annie and asked them about suvreen and both denied, they have no idea when she left.
Suvi train arrived and she boards the train amd occupies her seat. Train's whistle blew and it was about to start in few minutes. She closes her eyes and remembers all the moments she spent with him. Tears started flowing down her eyes and at the same time,
" Main to kisiki ho ke yeh bhi na jaani
Ruth hai yeh do pal ki ya rahegi sada
Kise hai pata kise hai pata"
She opens her eyes and saw a small girl singing and collecting money.
She started smiling like crazy and giving a peck on her cheek started running
The train started moving and suvi jumped from the train and she was about to fall on platform but two strong hands caught her and their eyes met and moment freezed.
"Jo barsein sapne boond boond
Nainon ko moond moond
Kaise main chaloon Dekh na sakoon
Anjaane raaste
Goonja sa hai koi ektara iktara "
S: yuvraj tum... Tum yaha kaise
Y: train se jump kyun ki agar lag jaati to
S: nahi lagti train slow thi
Y: fir bhi... Kuch bhi ho sakta tha kya jarurat thi stunt karne ki
S: kyun aise stunts karne ka haq sirf kya cheeteh ko hai cheethi ko nahi
Y: cheethi ????
S: haaa cheeteh ki cheethi
He wraps his hands towards her waist more tightly and pulls her towards him
Y: congratualtions ms suvreen guggal you are once again kidnaped and is baar humesha humesha k liye (winks)
S: to aakhir cheetah uski cheethi k pakad me aa hi gaya (winks)
He lifts her up and started twirling and both shouts together
"I LOVE YOU"
*****
Inki to ho gai happy ending ab muje bhi kar do happy shappy with likes n comments 😆

Ps: Happy New Year Everyone



Edited by krupaa - 8 years ago
yuvreenani thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww. Really enjoyed your OS. Please do write more kdi. 😆
..chotu.. thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
This has to be the sweetest part! Loved it kdi!
I ciuld imagine all the scenea specially party wala...pecah coloured dress and polka dots! ❤️
Awesome ending. Humari tolu ki mom dad ki kahaani khatm hogayi 😭
I hope aur bhi chinky pinky ka story bhi aapse mile!
Thank you for the awesome Ss
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waahh...nice ending..😃 but I wanted it to last more..it got over too soon write more stories soon..😊
Loved how they played along with tolus mummy and puppa story..😆 can imagine the looks on their faces..ha ha..

I bet Suvreen's parents were happy that she found someone at least..😆 and she wont run away from her next wedding..😛

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