Yuvreen SS : Jab We Met Last part updated @pg 4

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Delhi:
"yaar agar bhai ko pata chal gaya na to bhai to meri jaan le lenge" said manu with sweat on his forhead and fear in his voice.
"yaar manu dar to muje bhi bahut lag raha hai par bhai ko batana to padega aaur aaj hi batana padega warna..." replied rathi ensuring manu everything will be fine and their bhai will understand. Both were moving to n fro in fear unaware of the fact that he knows everything.
Kathgodam:
"ab me kya karu... Gannuji plz meri help karna" a girl said and jumped down from her window and ran away.
Few hours later:
Oye jaspreet manpreet balbeer sab aajao oye baarat aagai hai.
Everyone welcomed the baraat and panditji started the rituals. " ab kanya ko bulaaye" ordered panditji and few ladies came to the room only to find the dulhan missing from there.
Ladies informed the gents of family and they started searching for the bride here and there.
Delhi:
Manu: tum... Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho
"yeh sab batane ka time nahi tum chalo mere sath" a girl dressed in burkha replied
Manu: par kaha
Girl: mumbai
Kathgodam:
" ummm chodo muje... Tum jaante nahi me kaun hu... Agar mere gharwalo ko pata chal gaya na ki tumne muje kidnap kiya hai to..." a girl dressed in wedding red lehenga blindfolded and her hands tied shouted from the back seat.
"to... To kya tere ghar wale muje jaan se maar denge yahi na... Janta hu... Janta hu ki tu aasam k don ki beti hai..." replied the kidnapper driving the car.
The girl was hell confused before she could speak further he said, "par agar tera baap don hai to yuvi bhi cheetah hai apne dosto ke liye jaan de bhi sakta hai aur le bhi"
" kya tum meri jaan longe" she asked nervously
Y: teri jaan kaise le sakta hu tu to mere dost ki jaan hai...
"tumhara dost kaun dost kaisa dost me to tumhe jaanti tak nahi hu" she replied
Y: tu muje nahi jaanti par apne pyaar ko to janti hai tuje usi tak pahuchane aaya hu.
"pyaar kaunsa pyaar kaisa pyaar... Tum pagal ho kya bole jaa rahe ho" she asked angrily
He was about to reply when his phone rang
Y: le aagaya tere chave ka phone
Yuvi picked the phone and put it on speaker
Y: manu ek goodnews hai mene teri naro jee ko kidnap kar liya hai aur use seedha tere paas le aaraha hu.. Tuje kya laga tha mere bhai agar tuje muje nahi batayega to muje pata nahi chalega... Aise kaise me tere pyaar ko kisi aur ka ho jaane deta... Isi liye utha le aaya use shaadi ke mandap se.
He said proudly
M: kise utha le aaye
Y: teri naro jee ko aur kise
M: par bhai naro jee to yahi hai mere paas
Y: kyaaa
He was shocked and look behind and saw the girl smirking
Y: agar naro tere sath waha delhi me hai to yeh ladki kaun hai
"suvreen guggal"she replied proudly.
Y: sorry wo muje laga tum i mean aap maro nahi mannu nahi naro... Mera matlab...
S: sorry sorry baad me karna you idiot pehle mera hath aur aankhe kholo.
He untied her hand n open the blindfold.
She opened her hair which was tied in a tight bun and removed all her heavy jwelleries.
S: ufff ab acha lag raha hai... Kitni garmi ho rahi thi in sab me by god...
She saw the bottle of water in front, took it and started gulping down and he was just mesmerized looking at her beautiful face and innocent smile.
From other side on phone.
M:hellooo yuvi... Bhai tu hai waha
He came out from his thought and
Y: ab bol kise utha laya...
S: muje...
She snatched the phone from his hand
S: hie me suvreen... Suvreen guggal tumhara bhai muje utha laya meri shaadi ke mandap se.
M: sorry wo actually confusion ho gaya tha meri gf naro bhi kathgodam se hai aur uski shadi bhi aaj hi thi kisi aur ke sath par wo waha se bhaag nikli aur yeh aapko galti se naro samaj kar utha laya.
S: its ok chill... I guess yeh confusion isi wajah se hua kyun ki naro ki shadi aur meri shadi ek hi banquet hall me thi on different floors.
Waise kya coincidence hai na... Dono hi shadi se dulhan gayab bechare dulhe
She started laughing out loud and both guyz joined her.
M: yuvi ab tu ise wapas chod aa aur fir seedha mumbai aaja me aur naro kal mumbai court me shaadi kar rahe hai.
He nooded and disconnected the call.
He turned back and saw the seat empty. He came out of he car to search for suvreen but she was nowhere to be found.
" kya ajeeb ladki hai bina bye bole hi chali gai" he said to himself and came back towards his car. As he sat in the car he saw his car keys missing.
" ab yeh chaabi kaha chali gai... Yeh ho kya raha hai"
He came out again to search for keys and suddenly his car started moving he ran behind his car and it stopped after a while.
He went near the car and saw suvi at drivers seat.
Y: tum...
S: ha meee... Chalo andar betho
He went and sat on passengers seat
Y: badi ajeeb ladki ho tum...
S: pata hai.. Wasie tumne apna naam nahi bataya
Y: yuvi
S: yuvi bhai ya yuvi the cheetah bas yahi naam hai pura naam nahi.
Y: yuvraj singh
S: congratulations mr yuvraj singh
Y: for what
S: kyun tum officially kidnap ho chuke ho
He was hell confused and she started the car in full speed.
Y: tu pagal ho gai hai kya kaha jaa rahi hai u- turn le teri shaadi me tuje wapas pahuchana hai
S: haaa pagal to me ho gai hu... Jaha se bhaagne ka koi mauka hi nahi dikh raha tha tum muje waha se bhagakar le aaye.
Y: kyaaa... Tuje wo shaadi nahi karni
S: nahiii
Y: par kyunnn
S: kyunki ladka nri hai london vondon me rehta hai
Y: yeh to achi baat hai na ki ladka nri hai har ladki videsh jana chahti hai
S: par me nahi jana chahti me to yahi india me rehna chahti hu mera bharat mahan...
Y: to tu shaadi sirf isiliye nahi karna chathi kyunki ladka nri hai
S: nahi aur bhi wajah hai
Y: kyaaa
S: ladka na muje pasand nahi
Y: to shaadi ke liye haa kyun ki
S: mene kaha ki wo to mere ghar walo ne kar di
Y: bina teri marzi ke
S: nahi... Meri marzi thi na usme shamil
Y: lekin abhi to tune kaha ki tuje ladka pasand nahi to fir...
S: ruko me samjati hu... Hua yun ki ladke ke dadaji aur mere dadaji bachpan ke dost hai ladke ke papa aur ladki ke papa yani ke mere papa bachpan ke dost hai aur aur to aur ladka aur ladki yani ke me aur wo... Hum bhi bachpan ke dost hai sirf dost yaar par yeh ghar wale samajte he nahi kehte hai zamana chahe kuch kuch hota hai ka ho ya jane tu ya jaane na ka ek ladka aur ek ladki kabhi dost nahi ho sakte... Ab yeh kya baat hui...
Y: badi filmy family hai yaar teri...
S: aur yeh situation bhi
Y: acha ek baat bata agar yeh confusion na hota aur me tuje kidnap na karta...
She looked at him with a smirk
Y: sorry tu muje kidnap na karti to teri shadi to ho jaati
S: nahi hoti
Y: kaise
S: mene hotel ke manager ko pehle hi 10,000 rupey de rakhe the ki shaadi ke waqt light off kar dena.
Y: taaki tu mauka dekhke bhaag sake
S: nahi
Y: (confusingly) to...
S: taaki shadi ka muhrat nikal jaaye
Y: me kuch samja nahi
S: tum na bade buddhu ho bye god
He made a cute puppy face
S: waise bade cute bhi ho
Y: aage ki story batayegi
S:hmmm.. Light off ho jaati and time waste hota rehta tab tak jab tak shadi ka muhrat na nikal jaaye. Aaj ka muhrat nikal jaata to agle 6 months tak no muhrat and meri family in sab me bahut manti hai so...
He started clapping and laughing out loud
S: tum has kyun rahe ho...
Y: muje laga tha tu thodi pagal hai par tu to puri ki puri pagal nikli. Tuje laga light off hone se shaadi cancel ho jaayegi aur tu bach jaayegi wo manger tuje ullu bana raha tha. Us banquet hall me aaj do shaadiya thi aise kaise wo light off karta aur to aur har banquet hall me generator ya inventor ka option hota hai...
S: hahaha badi hasi aarahi hai na tumhe thodi der ruk jaao bachu saari hasi nikal jaayegi
Y: me kuch samja nahi
S: us manager ne mera kaam na karke bhi mera kaam kar diya
Y: matlab
S: usne na tumhe dulhan ko kidnap karte dekh liya tha ab dulhan me thi ya naro yeh to use bhi nahi pata. Ab naro ke papa don hai aur mere
Y: aur tere
S: aur mere papa commissioner and both have their own ways to find out. Ab dulhan ka chehra to kisi ne nahi dekha par kidnapper ka to...
She smirked and he started sweating
Y: par tune hi to kaha mene tuje nahi tune muje kidnap kiya hai.
S: haaa par yeh baat tum prove kaise karoge
Y: yeh cheating hai
S: ha ha everything is fair in love and war
They started fighting and within a while there was a pin drop silence and only noise coming was police siron.


If u wanna read part two thoko likes and comments 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Asye haaye ...ekdum mind fresh hogaya...
Inne dino baad yuvreen par lika woh bhi inna achha ...
Mast concept hai...ekdum adventure romcom walla...bollywood masala mein...

Mast hai kdi...dil khush kardia aapne. Jaldi sebpart 2 update karo na please.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Asye haaye ...ekdum mind fresh hogaya...

Inne dino baad yuvreen par lika woh bhi inna achha ...
Mast concept hai...ekdum adventure romcom walla...bollywood masala mein...

Mast hai kdi...dil khush kardia aapne. Jaldi sebpart 2 update karo na please.


Hehehehhe thank u thank u thank u muje bhi yeh likhne me bahut maza aaraha hai 😃 Karti hu karti hu sec part bahut jald karti hu par uske pehle sabko yeh to padne do 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally you are back :) Muje pata tha you will write for yuvreen again. The story is amazing. Suvi's character reminds me of Geet from JWM. Waiting for next part. Please do write more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: yuvreenani

Finally you are back :) Muje pata tha you will write for yuvreen again. The story is amazing. Suvi's character reminds me of Geet from JWM. Waiting for next part. Please do write more.


Thank you thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a cute begining of this new story.loved reading it .Do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome work Kdi..😃
Missed ur stories..
M a little late lol😆
Do continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujairohit

Such a cute begining of this new story.loved reading it .Do continue.


Thanks a lot jiji 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzle22

Awesome work Kdi..😃

Missed ur stories..
M a little late lol😆
Do continue soon..


Thanks a lot mizzie 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part Two:
Suvi stopped the car nearby and asked yuvi to come out.
S: dekho is jungle ke raaste se tum bhaag jao jungle ke us taraf ek pahadi aayegi n uske peeche railway station to jaao.
Y: aur tu...
S: meri tension mat lo me thodi der in police walo ko apne peeche gumaungi aur fir wapas chali jaungi tab tak muhrat bhi nikal chuka hoga.
Y: are you sure agar tere gharwalo ka irada badal gaya aur bina muhrat dekhe teri shaadi kara di to
S: tum muje dara kyun rahe ho
Y: me to bas puch raha hu... Agar aisa hua to
S: to... To ab me kya karu
Y: chal mere sath
S: kaha
Y: mumbai... Manu aur naro ki shadi me
S: aur mere gharwale
Y: do din me wapas aajana fir bol dena kidnapper se bhaag kar aagai aur fir kuch dino tak depression me chali jana aise me tere ghar wale teri shadi nahi karwayenge
S: kya baat hai jitna budhu mene tumhe samja utne budhu ho nahi tum
Y: jaanta hu kyunki yuvi cheetah hai
S: yeh tumhari fav oneliner hai
Before he could repl they heard the police siren again so holding hands they started running inside the jungle.
After running for a while they decided to have some rest. They found a small hut and went inside.
S: yeh jagah safe hai yaha hume koi nahi pakad paayega
Y: nahi yeh jagah sabse jyada unsafe hai dekh nahi rahi yaha rasoi ka sab saaman hai matlab pakka yaha koi rehta hoga so humare pakde jana ka full chance hai. Chal kahi aur chalte hai
S: haaa kahi aur... tum pagal ho yeh jungle hai koi tourist place nahi jo yeh nahi to aage jaake tumhe dusra hotel mil jaayega
Y: tu apne dulhe k sath sath apna dimaag bhi wahi chodkar aai hai kya...bol raha hu yeh jagah safe nahi
S: ha ha very funny na to me apna dimaag chodkar aai hu na hi apna dulha muje tumne kidnap kiya tha
Y: exactly mene kidnap kiya tha to i am the kidnapper isliye ab meri sun...
He held her hand and drag her outside the hut she left his hand with a jerk and bites him
Y: ouuuccchhh
S: kya laga tha tumhe yun jabardasti mera hath pakdoge to me bachau bachau chillaungi pahadi kudi hu apni raksha khud kar sakti hu.
He saw some people coming towards them before they could see them he pulled suvi near him and carried her on his shoulder and started running.
She started hitting him on his back
Y: abey jaasi ki raani tuje bacha hi raha hu ab ek aur baar maara na to un bhooke shero ke aage chod dunga
She became quite and after coming lil far away they spotted a cave and decided to stay there.
S: hum is cave me rukenge
Y: nahi tere liye five star hotel me booking karwaai hai bas car aati hi hogi tuje lene tab tak yaha vishraam kar lijiye
S: ha ha yeh joke tha
Y: ha tha to
S: i dont like joke
Y: and i dont like you
S: same to you
Both went in different direction and sat opposite to each other.
Two hours passed by suvi was playing with her chuda and dupatta while yuvi was sleeping peacefully. She looked outside and it was getting dark. She woke up yuvi
S: yuvraj utho hume nikalna chaiye
He woked up and looked out
Y: nahi raat ho chuki hai aise me jungle me bahar jana is risky aur is waqt station pe bheed kam hogi to pakde jaane ka full risk hai
S: i know par tumhe kal mumbai pahuchna hai manu ki shaadi hai so risk to hume uthana hoga na
Y: nahi.. Yeh bahut bada risk hai tu plz wapas chali jaa bol dena bhaag aai
S: aur mere wapas chale jaane se wo log tumhe dhundna band kar denge
Y: par atelast tu to safe ho jaayegi
S: aur tumhara kya
Y: mera kya... Meri tension mat le me manage kar lunga aur waise bhi yuvi cheetah hai itni asaani se kisi ki pakad me nahi aayega
S: acha to aaj tumhari cheetahpanti dekh hi lete hai...
Y: matlab me kuch samja nahi
She stood up and started walking, he took his jacket and followed her
Y: kaha jaa rahi hai
S: station
Y: kyaaa... Par kyunnn abhi to tuje samjaya wapas jaaa
S: nahi ... Aur tumhi ne to kaha cheetah kisi ki pakad me nahi aata to dont worry tum nahi pakde jaaoge aur meri tension mat lo muje pata hai tum apne dosto ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho to tum muje bhi pakde nahi jaane doge
Still walking
Y: par tu meri dost kaha hai...
S: to ban jaati hu
Y: me strangers se dosti nahi karta
S: ha tum sirf strangers ko kidnap karte ho
She smirked
Y: par yaha to tune muje kidnap kiya hai na
He smirked
S: very smart ab to me tumhe definitely akela nahi chod sakti
She held his hand and both started walking further.
After an hour they reached station and their doubt was right there were many police force searching for them
S: ab kya karenge
Y: kuch sochna padega
It was late night so very few people were present.
S: yuvraj kuch socho jaldi 10 min me mumbai ki train aayegi aur sirf 5 mins rukegi. We just have 15 mins
Y: ideaaa
S:kyaaa
Y: chori
S: tum kidnapper ke sath sath chor bhi ho... Wah yuvraj singh aur kitni baatein tumne mujse chupa rakhi hai
Y: ho gaya tera ab me jau... Tu yahi khade reh aur gungat se apna sar dhak le me abhi aata hu
Suvi did as he said and he went and found some family sleeping on station.
He carefully went and slept beside them n observed the police man.
Taking a chance he opened a bag and took some clothes and hiding it in his jacket came back to where suvreen was.
He took her towards waiting room and both changed.
He dressed up in dhoti kurta and turban and she in gahgra choli with a gungat. To be more carefull she hid their clothes near her stomach in such a way ki it made suvi look like heavily pregnant.
Y: perfect (he winked)
S: nahi kuch missing hai
Y: kya
S: ek min
Saying this she went near a lady sleeping n slowly took her purse n yuvi was looking confused. She came back and gave him a kajal pencil
Y: kajal.. Tuje ab make up karna hai
S: haaa
Y: tum ladkiya bhi na
She took the pencil and started making his moustache
S: ab perfect hai ab hume koi nahi pehchanega... Waise kya keh rahe the tum...hum ladkiya kyaaa
Y: bahut smart hoti ho... Ab chal train aagai hai
They went and board the train.
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Abhi to bas shurwaat hai aur hungame hona baaki hai
Stay tuned to find humare yeh bunty aur bubbly aur kya kya dhamaal karte 😆



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