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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing
Loved it Anika and om bond is great
Please with more on them and also include Rudy
Continue soon



Actually, they make a great team, but Shivaay happens to be like sword hanging on their heads on all the time, which always speeds down their open interaction.

Originally posted by: ISensedYou

Such a beautiful conversation... they both are so open with each other and are so comfortable in sharing their inner thoughts with each other Basically because they don't judge each other randomly

They would make such good friends...
I hope shivaay heard this😉 and would try to do some amends to what he has done or should have done
Looking forward to more...



Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome conversation..



Thanks

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow simply wow

i mean om and anika scene was just superb
please do continue
bye sumi



Thanks

Originally posted by: -Areeba-

Ayeen! Kab tak? Jab tak sath rahenge was so beautiful - cherry on the top.

I just loved the conversation between Om and Annika, it was amazing, enjoyed reading it. 😳 now writers need to work on Anikara bonding too, it would be nice to watch.



The writers have sketched the characters with great care, but care the least when they sit to color them 👎🏼


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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Super adorable coversarion



thanks

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

How eloquently you have brought forth the heart and truth of these 2 characters...it's truly beautiful. Annika and Om are so so true to who they are...their conversations simplifies even the most complicated situations...such as the quotient between Shivika. Looking forward to reading more...thanks for a great read!



Often an open, honest conversation leaves us with knowledge of unseen. Thanks for liking

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

What a heartfelt conversation...much needed...



Initial idea came from the Obro moments we got in the early 100 episodes. Now, hardly we get any. Agree that Annika will never interfere in any Obro moment, but she can have her moment with Obro, right?

Originally posted by: sweetnoori

what a lovely heart felt conversation ❤️

deevar bhabhi...
nice update good job👏
update soon



Thank you.



Thanks 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Conversation between Anika and omkara was nice...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Thank u Sakkiyah and MissSparkling 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
OS: Teasing and Blushing continues

"Sab log aapka wait kar rahe hai, breakfast ke liye" Annika announced as she entered the room.

"Mmm... aa raha hoon..." Shivaay's replied absent-mindedly, his full attention on the data in the file.

"Jaldi kijiye na.. " Annika grew impatient. "Aap bhi na, itna slow kaam karte hai, upar se zyada der bhi kaam karte hai." Annika complained and shook her head in disbelief.

The words caught Shivaay's attention. "Main slow kaam karta hoon?" he said.

"Phir nahin toh kya? Aapka kaam kabhi khatam hone ka naam hi nahin leta." Annika did her characteristic movement of her head to prove her point.

Shivaay narrowed his eyes unbelievably at her logic. He grazed across the contents of the file. "Ek second." he said indicating with his hand while noting the point where his attention was at last in his file, closed the file and turned to her. "Mera kaam khatam nahin hota?"

Annika rolled her eyes. "Maine yehi bola."

"Haan mera kaam khatam nahin hota. Toh?" Shivaay crossed his arms.

"Toh?"

"Toh?"

"Toh kya? Aapka kaam hai, aap din bhar karo, ya raat bhar, mujhe kya?" Annika shrugged her arms.

"Haan, tumhein kya?" Shivaay shook his head and kept his hand inside his trouser pocket.

"Mujhe kuch nahin. Aapke bhai aapka wait kar rahe hai, dining table pe..." Annika reminded him.

Shivaay shook his head at her Annika-giri'. Kuch nahin ho sakta' he muttered under his breath.

Annika threw a corner glance at him and went in search of something in the room.

Not wanting her to have the final word of their whatsoever conversation, he asked, "Tumhein khud aane ki kya zaroorat? Servant ko bhi toh bhej sakti thi?"

Annika looked at him doubtfully. "Kyun? Takleef toh mujhe huyi na? Aapko kyun takleef ho rahi hai?"

Shivaay grew impatient. "Tum kisi sawaal ka seedha jawaab nahi de sakti kya?"

"Aap karte kyun hai itne sawaal?" Annika looked at him. "Aur sawaal bhi aise karte hai jaise yeh adaalat hai, aap vakeel hai, aur main mujrim!"

"Tumse baat karna hi bekaar hai!" Shivaay sighed and started to leave the room.

Annika started to continue with her search.

"Kya doond rahi ho?" Shivaay's unexpected voice startled her. She froze immediately.

"Kya hua?" He asked little concerned.

"Aa... aap toh bahaar gaye the na... phir achanak se wapas aa gaye...!" She spoke with uneven breath.

Shivaay frowned, then added teasingly in a serious tone. "Toh tum chahti ho ki khud aane se pehle, do naukaron ko bhejoon?" He raised his eyebrow.

Annika was taken aback. "Huh?!"

"Waise, kya doond rahi ho?" Shivaay asked again.

"Huh?"

Shivaay looked at her questioningly.

"Woh..." Annika stammered. She swallowed as she said, "Ap...apna phone..."

Shivaay nodded his head. He took out his phone and dialed. Annika watched his actions. She heard her phone ringing... somewhere... She frowned and looked here and there to locate the object. Shivaay tried to figure out the direction from where the ring was coming. Finally, he gave an unbelievable' expression. "Unreal, man!" He looked at her. Annika moved her head up as if asking what?'

"Bathroom mein hai." He said plainly, but not hiding his amusement.

"Bathroom mein?" Annika said. As realization dawned, "Arey haan, nahane se pehle Saahil se baat kar rahi thi toh wahin pe bhool gayi. Main bhi na..." she mumbled more to herself than to him.

"Bathroom mein phone leke kaun jaata hai?!" he was clearly amused.

"Maine abhi abhi bataya ki main Saahil se baat kar rahi thi, aur wahin bhool gayi." Annika repeated.

"Phir bhi, bathroom mein?"

Annika felt offended, "Toh? Koi gunah nahin hai."

"Haan, tum keh rahi ho..." Shivaay gave an boring expression.

"Waise bhi aapka bathroom bada hai, ki phone pe paani nahin padega. Isliye kharaab nahin hoga." She explained him.

"Mera?" Shivaay asked. "Yeh toh tumhara bathroom hai na?" He raised his eyebrow again.

"Huh?"

"Tumhara ghar, tumhara bedroom, tumhara bed, tumhara pati aur.. Tumhara bathroom..."

Annika felt embarrassed. He rolled his tongue inside in his mouth stifling his grin. Annika threw a look at him with her corner of her eyes. His stifling the grin reddened her face. She swallowed and started to look here and there on the floor.

Shivaay walked close to her. He raised his right hand and touched her left cheek. Annika took a sharp intake of breath as her eyes grew wide at his sudden touch.

"Phir se blush kar rahi ho..." he added cheekily with a fully satisfied smile.

Annika looked into his eyes. As their eyes met, his smile grew wider and her face reddened more with a smile...
Edited by abhilashasharma - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
(sigh)...☺️......superb, continue soon
Edited by annniiii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
waah blushing sessions continue
hehe
bathroom main phone hehe even i take it there
loved it
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Superb
Today's episode regarding blush was just cute

Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Heartfelt conversation: I always see these two as having a deep connection and you highlighted just that. Loved the update
Edited by Allyson - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
I am loving the whole blush situation. Its been so cute to see it on screen and i love peoples rendition of it, yours especially.

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