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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is a story that I would have liked to have seen.
After a long five years Viplav comes in the place where he once was with Danh. accidentally learned something about the death of his father. He came to the examination of a witness. The witness is a friend of Tripurarij. He wanted to take revenge to Trip because of everything that happened to him. So he called Viplav to him tell him the truth.
As he went through the streets known images of the past are coming back through his memory. So conceived not even notice a little girl that he went to meet and play with my doll. accidentally struck because he was conceived. When he looked down he saw two huge black eyes that are watching accusing. he bent down to it could look in the eyes and she told him. Why do not you watch where you're going? At this Viplav to her, why are you so angry.? A girl said to him, Mom will not let me talk to strangers. Viplav be softened and said her mother has a right to tell me to me what your name is. And that I am Vidha. Viplav as if someone had slapped. In the second, his picture appears his Danh their dream to have a daughter called Vidha. And then come back to reality because he knew that it was impossible for his Danhi was burned at the Ashram. he got up slowly and went on all broken because again had the feeling that the past catches. Meanwhile Vidha came to the house where he lived with his mother and grandmother and aunt. Her grandfather had gone to town to buy something for her birthday but she did not want anything but a bracelet that her dad gave her mom. Her mom promised to to her fifth birthday to her that bracelet. From the house came out a young lady who said behind your back Vidha let's go buy a cake for your birthday because you fellows is imminent. slowly raised her head, and it is none other than Danhi.
tell me how you liked the beginning and if you agree to continue writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Letters continue.
Danh that is out of fear for her child ran away and escaped certain death, hid with the woman where once already hiding with Viplav. Later it turned out that it was her grandmother and has a father. Her mother was very hurt by her mother in law and she did the same thing and Danh now. she ran away from all and hid in another place and then at the Ashram. Now the situation is beautiful. Everybody loves to Vidhu and watch as the apple of his eye. Vidha growing in the knowledge that her father far away in America and that will come one day, but now can not because there's a lot of work.
Viplav so walked the streets and through the head of his passing images of him and Danh how to stroll the same streets. how much he misses those days. Slowly he approached the house where he himself hid with Danhi and at the moment he thought he was again seen that little girl, curiously looked around but could not decide to enter the house. and so it went further to go. When he arrived at the address that he gave witness observed and the police here. quickly approached and asked a police officer what happened. The officer said that the murder that the witness killed. Viplav realized that someone killed him not to tell the truth. Now he knew he was in the right place and is now definitely decided to stay a few more days to perhaps something learned.
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Sara...I admire u a lot😃...I will b back soon with my comments...bit occupied DEAR😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It sounds like a nice story, please carry on dear.write more.
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At that moment Viplav the phone rang when he contacted a little his voice changed because it was his best friend Raja. Raja. the man who was with him in his worst days, and since then it never lets himself go it alone. Viplav told him what happened with the witness and began to return to the hotel where he and Raja took the room. At this point in the house where she was Danhi celebrated Vidha birthday. Danh has kept its promise and donated bracelet Vidha or she has done that has to be careful and to be kept because it is the memory of his father. We were happy Vidha promised to keep the bracelet. Viplav arrived in the room and get some rest when he later sucked into the hall of waiting by Raja to go to dinner. Then they decided to take a walk through the town. And so they walked and Viplav he described Raji as the first time was in the city with Danhi and what was going on with them. and then confessed that he no longer lives because it makes no sense anymore. In each person sees Danhi and see how much he loves her and now that she is gone. No girl can not replace his Danhi. Raja knew all this but him was sorry to see his friend in such a state. At one point he thought he saw Danhi with a little girl but then he realized that he had begun to hallucinate when so many Viplav obsessed Danhi.
Danhi and Vidha they walked around town while waiting Vidha his grandfather to come to bring her gifts. At that point approached one man who took Vidha in his arms and began to be running in circles. Vidha laughed and happily asked for more. Her laughter was drawn and look Viplav and again he saw that same little girl who met that day. He pointed to Raji andtold haw to accidentally stumbled upon it. He looked with regret the girl in the arms of the man to whom he was referring to her father. smiled sadly and moved on. And in that moment, Danhi moved to the side and Viplav is too late to see her.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: simple2joy

It sounds like a nice story, please carry on dear.write more.

really is a beautiful story.😉
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Originally posted by: pearl82

Sara...I admire u a lot😃...I will b back soon with my comments...bit occupied DEAR😃

waiting for your comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Danh is the moment when Viplav refuge views felt severe chest pain and seemed to sense Viplav, shook his head because it was impossible for her. Starts Dating Raja and Piya.Raja the accident while waiting Viplav met a beautiful girl that he liked immediately. He did not want now to talk not Viplav because he did not know how he would react because Piya person who does not tolerate exposure. This is all understood from a brief meeting with her.
In the morning when he woke up started is running. did not pass a single day that he ran the 10 km. it helped him to remain sane. Onward a little out of town encountered is that Vidhu bent down under a car trying to reach something. He shouted at her Vidha, watch .. He took her in his arms and hid it away, because at that time ran from the opposite direction the car, and that he had not encountered who knows what would happen.
He asked Vidhu are working there and she said that she had dropped a bracelet which she received as a gift from his mother, and that is very important because it is a gift from her dad. Viplav said he will seek together. When ducked to take the bracelet he heard him only known voice calling Vidha .. slowly corrected and in his hand he held the very same bracelet that he gave Danh the day she learned to write. slowly raised his head and saw a surreal scene. Danh's standing in front of him in my arms holding a little girl who is called mother.
Danh turned to thank and remained open mouth and a little was missing her Vidha drop out of hand. Her confusion was further increased nervousness when she realized that Viplav hold that bracelet in hand. They both looked as if no one else exists in the world.
No one did not know what to say. At that moment she came up to the same man for whom Viplav thought he was the father of Vidhi. He took Vidhu the arms of Danh and asked eating well. Since they all saw the store in which they entered to buy something. He thanked Viplav hundred saved Vidhu and they went into the car leaving Viplav standing on that same place. Danh's just quickly turned to see that it really Viplav or dreamed. that it was Viplav. They sat in the car and Pershaya asked what happened why was so worried. Parshaya the man who helped her all these years and who was always there for her and for her Vidha
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Res😉
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