Story... the end - Page 5

Zajd.. well done,committed writer. Enjoyed your creativity, the sequencing of events. Zajd you certainly had a clear beginning, engaging middle,that built up the momentum and then of course the much anticipated finale, family united and blessed and Viplav cured after treatment. The story had a clear tone of positivity, the man was motivated to fight off his illness , because the love of Vidha and Dhani backed him up . Thank you for sharing your imagination zajd.. the effort you put in .. carry on writing follow your inspiration. regards hammie.

Hi Zajie

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Zajd.. well done,committed writer. Enjoyed your creativity, the sequencing of events. Zajd you certainly had a clear beginning, engaging middle,that built up the momentum and then of course the much anticipated finale, family united and blessed and Viplav cured after treatment. The story had a clear tone of positivity, the man was motivated to fight off his illness , because the love of Vidha and Dhani backed him up . Thank you for sharing your imagination zajd.. the effort you put in .. carry on writing follow your inspiration. regards hammie.

changing avatars ... nice. thank you for the comment and thanks for the analysis. I really tried to have everything we need. beginning middle and end. I'm glad if you like the story. I used a little dialogue, because it would last. I just like the essence of play. and every one of us think it can tell which ideas have been spoken without them I write. Your opinion means a lot to me and I hope that you enjoyed while you read. love Sara

Originally posted by: Magnolia2

Hi Zajie

I appreciate the dedication with which you completed this touching story and throughout balancing the graver side of life with optimism...After all the trials that Viplav encountered he ultimately got back his beautiful family and his health restored...What's more he's on the verge of being blessed with another child! What a joyous ending to a intense story about the test of true love! It was inspirational dear...All's well that ends well...

Unleash your imagination and keep giving us more!

thank you very much for your honest opinion. I shortened the story because there are a lot of dialogue and I could not write. like I just pointed conversation so everyone can imagine the conversation. I hope you enjoyed. Thank you again for reading and commenting. love Sara

Zaj Dear,

Originally posted by: Mishfan

Zaj Dear,

Wow...you finished your story...well done for your efforts & imagination, dear.

Thankful Viplav is cured from his illness & a double happy ending for him

getting back with Dhani & a second baby...to celebrate their union once again

Happy for you that you were able to finish what you started & with a positive ending.

Thank you!!!

Thank you, my dear. I hope you enjoyed this story. would not it be great that this was recorded and the series. Thank you read my story. Viplav and Danh together forever. Viplav and Danhi hamesha satre.

What a wonderful end, Zaj! Viplav's healed back to health with his darling daughter's help, ViDha unite, and are about to become parents for the second time. I can see Viplav Baba stuck to his promise of a football team. 😆 I admire your dedication to your story, Zaj! You're already done! 🤗 It was a wonderful read with unexpected twists. Little Vidhu was adorable in your story. 😃 I hope you let your imagination free so that you can come up with more stories for us in the future. 😉

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

What a wonderful end, Zaj! Viplav's healed back to health with his darling daughter's help, ViDha unite, and are about to become parents for the second time. I can see Viplav Baba stuck to his promise of a football team. 😆 I admire your dedication to your story, Zaj! You're already done! 🤗 It was a wonderful read with unexpected twists. Little Vidhu was adorable in your story. 😃 I hope you let your imagination free so that you can come up with more stories for us in the future. 😉

hahahaha, football team. I forgot it. This is one scene when he showed what a house he wanted to build for them. and how happy they were that night. Thank you for the compliments. I always imagined this ending series. I think that's taken like this was the most watched series of all time, and to make long was no. 1 in India and in the world.

one story finished, I hope that Mishal be happy in his life and that he will not have problems as Viplav.