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A very cute story, Zaj! 🤗 All of the encounters Vidhu's had with her papa have all been a delight. 😃 Vidhu is just as adorable in your story as she was on the show. Two major revelations for Viplav and that too all at once - his relation to the little girl and that his wife had survived all those years ago. I could picture Mishal's confusion, excitement, and astonishment all at once. 😉 I liked the use of a bracelet to unite Viplav, Dhani, and Vidhu together. 😊 Please do continue soon, Zaj!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Viplav remained in the city to stand. through his head was passing just one sentence. This bracelet is very important. My dad gave my mom. The image that is seen is not able to understand. His Danh is alive. Danh has his daughter. Danh has his muse. Nothing he does not understand. He fell to the floor and remained so until he appeared one man to help him to his feet. Slowly returning to the hotel with a bracelet that is very gripping. Raja when he saw immediately it was clear that something bad happened. Viplav slowly sat down on the bed and just uttered Danh. He fell unconscious and Raja barely managed to return. His tablet is immediately taken and barely persuaded him to drink because of his condition was fatal to annoy. Raja immediately called the doctor who treated the Viplav and told him that he Viplav fainted. He immediately sent a doctor and an ambulance from Mumbai to come by Viplav because it could happen to his condition worsens. Raja informed and Dadi that Viplav in hospital and if it can go. He could not understand what happened and why Viplav constantly calling Danh. Raja recalled how Viplav after death Danh slowly started to get seek and that often has a fever. Then they were done all possible analysis and then found to Viplav suffering from leukemia and he needed a bone-marrow transplant. All that is Viplav know whether the blood tests but nobody answered .. While it housed again in the hospital they wanted him to take the bracelet out of his hand and he was even more squeezed. He did not allow anyone to take it and just said anything Danh, Vidha. Dadi is scared because her Viplav her grandson is very ill and she was powerless to help him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats zajd.. for staring ..the Story.. its a great read ,mate.. do continue will be reading as you update.The latest part ,seems a bit of a shocker..waiting to read where the bone marrow transplant is likely to come from?..whose blood group is going to match?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

A very cute story, Zaj! 🤗 All of the encounters Vidhu's had with her papa have all been a delight. 😃 Vidhu is just as adorable in your story as she was on the show. Two major revelations for Viplav and that too all at once - his relation to the little girl and that his wife had survived all those years ago. I could picture Mishal's confusion, excitement, and astonishment all at once. 😉 I liked the use of a bracelet to unite Viplav, Dhani, and Vidhu together. 😊 Please do continue soon, Zaj!

A Turkish series is similar to this my story. although I took only the form and the rest is my story. not a copy but now letters as they liked to see this series. While I see letters and Viplav and Danh in this my story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hamlet53


congrats zajd.. for staring ..the Story.. its a great read ,mate.. do continue will be reading as you update.The latest part ,seems a bit of a shocker..waiting to read where the bone marrow transplant is likely to come from?..whose blood group is going to match?
regards hammie

my dear, thank you very much for your support. I love to write and I enjoy it. you'll see what is still waiting Viplav. I hope you'll tell me honestly whether you like how I imagined the end of the series.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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as he fought for his life Viplav only had one thought whose Vidha. something he did not understand. why Danh hid there and have that happen. He prayed God to give him strength and that now that he found what he thought was lost, it can continue to live. but as things stand now has only a little time. Slowly he came to himself, and when he opened his eyes he saw Dadi and Raju to him pitying look. The pain that he saw in the eyes of their Dadi was enough to gather all his strength and smiled.
Slowly stood up because he still felt that every bone pain and it is still as in a semi-unconscious. and then it was that he saw the bracelet. Has asked prefer to give him the bracelet and looked at Dadi. Dadi was at that moment speechless and just managed to utter Danh. Raja, who was standing next to Dadi strongly grabbed her as the wife started to fall. Nothing he did not understand and when asked Viplav what happens Viplav then all told. He could not hide the joy and sorrow and anger and disappointment all gathered in his tormented soul. Because Danh and sick because of the sorrow he had forgotten to think and to him and his health. Dadi's first was happy to hear that Danhi was alive, and then she got mad and he was anxious to meet her and she says everything. Viplav then said he did not want anything to do because it first needs to know the truth. and for Danhi and Vidhu ... why she has made a name they wanted to give to his daughter. only problem was he did not know where he lives. decided that now that he found Danhi, remain in this place until we know the truth. Dadi and Raja have gone to a hotel and Viplav is thinking about Danhi about a man who was with her. Returning the movie in head and slowly realized that this man can only be her husband. because he knew how Danh it is not anyone who does not like it, did not give her approached. means that the man it means a lot. Again he heard the pain in his chest but now that he would not surrender.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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after a few days Viplav again found himself on the streets of the city where he met Danhi. He walked the city, hoping to meet her but found nothing. he asked, and passers-by. no one knew that he says anything. Raja was also asked on all sides. After three days of Raja accidentally met again Piyu and then moved into a caf and slowly got to know. Piya was a beautiful girl and she lived with her parents and grandmother and sister, who has a daughter. In his enthusiasm he happened to mention Vidha. It was enough to Raji to suspect that Piya has something to do with Danh. He would not tell her but decided that all tell the Viplav. parted from Piye and he went back to the hotel because he knew that Viplav rest of infusion which must receive. Happily recounted Viplav who remained in wonder. Danh sister of Piye. nothing was clear. Now he knew where to go but he had to wait for tomorrow to be able to go there. Raja said that he would go with him and Viplav by joking that he came across a person who did not believe in marriage. They could not wait to get up and move to seek Danh. When they came home Viplav the seen Dulari and a man to be saved and carry bags. Raja said that he would ask what was going on. Viplav stopped him and said that if he had to do it. slowly approached Dulari and greeted with folded hands. Namaste khaki. How are you? Dulari gripped the heart and could not answer. The man who was standing next to her asked her what it was and who this young man who is so well-behaved. Dulari said it was ... and was unable to pronounce his name because he said I was his name. Viplav Tripathy. Danhin husband. The man is just bluntly. do you think ex-husband. Viplav remained at a loss, as a former ... mean that it is true what is suspected.

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