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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Zaj, what a beautiful attempt at portraying Viplav's myriad of emotions. 👏 He's battling for his life, but he's so consumed in love that he's still in search of answers. He doesn't understand why Dhani hid Vidha from him. He's being led on to believe that Dhani's moved on with another man. The tone you've set for his devastation and jealousy is strongly apperceived. Emotional pain is often more obtrusive than physical pain. My heart goes out to this poor fella for all of his suffering. 😭 I'm so happy you included in Raja in your story. I'm happy to see Viplav with a support system other than his doting grandmother. 😊 Your story is getting more and more interesting, Zaj. Please do continue soon! Very intrigued to see how Viplav and Dhani unite in the upcoming parts. Wasn't expecting Viplav to be sick with leukemia, but perhaps this is your way of confirming Vidhu's paternity through a bone marrow transplant. 😉

Thank you my dear for your support and kind words. When I start to write just to relax and imagine what he would like to see. There's a lot to write. I think I'll continue tomorrow and maybe to finish writing tomorrow. I'll see what I'll do.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Viplav is slowly moved on. He wanted to find Vidhu and to return the bracelet. He found Vidhu how to play in front yard. When she saw him she said only Rakshas. Do not expect him to be Viplav genuine smile that nickname. I thought it would get angry and he just stood there and laughed. When he came to himself he said that this is the most beautiful nickname is heard and that he really liked how she said. He took her face in his hand and looked into her dark eyes. somehow he was glad and pleased that this keeps at his side. He thought he had stumbled upon a most beautiful child in his life. she was beautiful. She was wearing a red dress with a bow. and her hair was restless because it was curly. no matter how she tried to calm curls had failed. hands has been wonderful, although they were dirty from the mud because she made a cake for her doll.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Vidha watched in Viplav and told him. Now we are best friends. You came back to me a bracelet, I told you it is very important to my mom. Viplav said. that is very important but your dad is there with you but can again buy that same bracelet. Vidha got confused and said. Where's my dad ... What do you mean, my dad is here? Whom do you think. Now it was the turn of Viplav to confuse ... Well ... at this man who was wearing when I found the bracelet. A Vidha if this ... You mean Dad Parshaya, he's my best dad. and he kept me there when the other ..he and his wife Sarah are the best. My dad is away at some place and I still have not met since a lot of work ... Once my dad is able to come he will come and take me with him. Yes it will and my mother go with us. Viplav who stood and listened to what she was talking about Vidha no longer able to speak. Just tears coming down her face. Now he realized that Vidha not know who her father is. Incidentally gripped very hands Vidhi and on this occasion percent had a small shovel with which he bathed the ground. a little hurt and started the blood to flow. Viplav was quickly wiped the blood with his sleeve and quickly led to the fountain where she washed his hands. He was up on her and moved her to a hotel.
When he arrived at the hotel waiting for him Raja who immediately noticed the blood on the shirt and asked what it was. Viplav has told all what happened and went to the bathroom to take a shower. Raja was looking shirt, and then he was struck with an idea he had to do it yourself. Dadi called and said they came up with, but he had to take a little Viplav hair. waiting to Viplav out of the bathroom and quickly entered the bathroom and took a pair of comb hair. He hid the shirt and hair and went to find the Piyom. Piyi anything yet did not want to talk because he wanted first to see how things unfold. He smiled when he realized that he slowly began to fall in Piyu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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while Raja was the Piya, which still did not know that Raja best friend Viplav ... Viplav is thought to be to call Danhi and to seek again to be found. He called Danhi and when she answered he did not know what to say. Danhi felt that it Viplav and just quietly say Viplav ... Viplav requested plans to meet in order to once again discuss. Danhi wanted first to refuse but she changed her mind and said she can or can not be long because it has a lot of work. What Viplav not know. and that is that Danhi has a large retail chain with flowers, and it has become a very successful young woman. One of the most wanted and here in Mumbai for decoration. Her father, otherwise known oncologist and the best doctor for oncology Danhi helped to his feet. She should not have to return the money but it is done and now is with Parshayi very busy with the decoration.
Viplav is up in the morning with a strong headache and went to find the Danh. He came out of the hotel and just fainted. Destiny is something that will now be the main word in life Viplav. Just then passed Danhin father and saw the Viplav how fainted. Quickly came up and introduced him to the hotel. With the help of the hotel staff took her to the room. When he entered the room all he understood. Viplav is sick and very sick. The bed stood a rack with a drip on the nightstand stood tablets. read the tablets and realized that Viplav has leukemia. waiting for her to come Viplav themselves to be able to talk to him. While he waited he crossed the room and saw that Viplav has pictures Danhi him. It was terribly shaken and then he realized that this guy goes and what is going on. not knowing that the daughter. but he had to shut up because the most important is the safety of small Vidhi.

Edited by zajedno - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Danhi came to the place where agreed with Viplav and waited for him to appear. when he did not appear for more than an hour, she got mad and told herself that she would never allow herself to a fool and to agree to get together again. He never thought that maybe something happened. Meanwhile, Raja took a hair sample and Vidhina blood test to see who is the father of Vidhi. They said they would, because they know Dadi to do as fast as they can and to await the results may already tomorrow. Raja was happy and wanted to say Viplav but has refrained from doing so, because he did not want to give false hope Viplav, especially because it is in such a state. The hotel Viplav is slowly coming himself and what he saw was not pleased him. Danhin father was sitting next to him and watched him closely. Viplav knew that now everything is over and now it will be difficult to persuade the thief of Danh that nothing says Danhi. Danhi father was closely watched and then he began to ask questions about leukemia. He found out that Viplav on the waiting list for a bone marrow transplant. and that the prognosis remained a little more time if they do not find a donor. The doctor thought how much this guy is a great man and now that it is better to know he was sorry that he's lying for Vidhu. But then he started working paternal instinct and had to shut up. He said Viplav that will keep the secret as long as I do not decide to speak.
He made a deal with Viplav to come to him to the hospital to do some more analysis. Viplav agreed and then was worried because he had forgotten to be found with Danhi. The doctor said not to worry that he would say something or knowing Danhi probably is now angry, then he laughed and said my daughter is just silly. He went and left Viplav that little consider. Viplav took the phone and called Danhi. phone is ringing all the way and it was obvious that she does not intend to answer the phone. Viplav laughed and just said, always the same, nothing has changed. He wrote a message in which she explains that he could not come because he met her father. At that moment Danhi talking with his father and he confirmed that he met Viplav and he talked a little with him. he said that he did not apologized for Vidhu as she would like. He just asked me to once again consider everything as it is now seen that Viplav great guy. When he ended the conversation with Danhi sought Dulari and his mother and said he needed to talk to the two of them, got out of the house on the pretext that isu little to walk through, hundreds of Danh was usually because he used to see every day of their grandmother and parents to go for a walk. When they moved away from the house doctor said it first finds a quiet place where you will explain to them all. Dulari a little scared, not knowing what was going on. The doctor then told everything he knew about Viplav he himself could not hold back the tears in his eyes as not Dulari. They cried like a baby because they did not know what to do. But since now they have to preserve this secret and they had to see how to protect and Danh pain and Vidhu. But they will want to help. They agreed that they do blood tests to see if maybe one of them responds. Dulari said she would look with Parshaya and it will ask you nothing says Danhi
Edited by zajedno - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Viplav resolved to buy a house or rent an apartment somewhere because it is necessary for him to stay here and find out what happened. After two days arrived Raja in his hotel and said he had to talk to them. urgently. Viplav worried because the voice I'd rather understand that it's really something very important. He came down the hall and looked Raji, paradise was sitting in a cafe in front of him and he kept on his desk an envelope. When he sat Raju told him what he did or did not know the result of the DNA. It is still left to Viplav. Viplav was left alone because the Raja went. He turned the envelope in his hands and did not know what it works. yet be decided on the best step. He called Danhi and said he must immediately meet. Danhi would not even hear or when she felt a determination in his voice, she agreed to see. When he arrived he saw Viplav an envelope in his hands. You know what this is. This is a truth that will change everything. I tell you what happened and it is not keen on Raja, because he did something that he did not even think about it.

You'll open the envelope and tell me the truth. Danhi took the envelope and said. You want the truth then listen. One day alone received that same envelope where it was written that we have a child. You are me away from myself and I called again wrote a letter and told to wait for a child and you're at Kamine said that does not want to know for me and for the bas***d that I wear. My misfortune was that I believe that you love me. And when you came to set you a question that matched what you and sent a message over the Kamine. whose Vidha.? And she is your or you do not have any right to it. so please leave me and my child alone. Viplav all lost, he said. I have a child. I'm a father. How could you do that. why you wings Vidhu me. How could you leave me. How do we handle this. Do you believe that I could tell you. I, who was only you. Do you think I could have something to think about. You bas***d, I'm surprised that you could even think something like that from me. I'm a terrible shot and now I tell you. I'm staying here until we straighten this injustice. As for Kamine she was killed in fighting with my mother and grandfather. I learned that I have an uncle and probably know when it comes. now looking for someone to blame for murdered my father. that's why I came here. Fate brought me here and now that I know the truth will not go away. I father. Vidha my daughter. she is a beautiful girl is my daughter. Dear God ... I have no words. Danhi ... you're a dumbass. He turned and slowly walked toward the hotel asking God just to give him the strength to get to bed. I'm a father. I have a daughter. Pounding in his ears. Raja saw it and quickly approached him because he presumed that it is very difficult.

Edited by zajedno - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Viplav kept its promise. bought the house she moved with her Dadi. Raja has been there more for him than he went to Banaras. Of course, amid all between him and Puye and finally gathered the courage to ask Piyu. The wedding is scheduled for next month. Viplav enjoyed with his daughter and of course with \ Danhi. Not allowed to say no Danhi n and Vidhi what about njim.Dadi was delighted and urged all Viplav that says Danhi and to try to see if the Vidha this person who can help him. Everyone knew what it was and even Parshaya who is very fond of Viplav tried to calm him and DanhiGo several times and in Mumbai in control and the father of Danhi was the one who helped him the most. arrived and Holi. celebrate all together and Viplav took the opportunity to dance with Danhi to his favorite song. Teri meri prem kahani. In one moment is just a great big hug Danhi and only said he would like to order this song lasts forever ...
After a few days of peace to go to Mombaj to try chemotherapy. Danhi was angry because she thought again running away from their lives. He came that day. Said goodbye to everybody and Danhi is barely holding back my tears / Viplav said he keeps Vidhu and will look to return in a few months and then you will see what will happen next. Vidha was angry and very annoyed and so it is called Rakshas. she could not say goodbye to him. she went into the house and brought a bracelet and told him ..
This bracelet I give you that you can come back to me when you get back. He went all broken and with the hope that they will return one day. It is sad to watch Danhi that he is all the time remained faithful and who again showed how great is her love. and now he again hurt her. He went to Mumbai in the hospital and went to therapy. one day so it was bad that the father of Dunham decided to tell the truth Danhi. I said that \ Viplav in the hospital and that he was dying and that he tried again to protect them from pain. Danhi has not waited for a moment the village is on a plane and went to the hospital with Vidhi. First they took the blood and so they went to see Viplav. He was unable to come himself with joy and pain and another thing happened. Danh's the way she Vidhi that Vipllav her dad and that is needed now to help her dad ozdravio.ona agreed on everything. Because the Vidha knew loves Viplav and that always wants to have him as her dad. Viplav was very proud and happy and Danhi said that he was now a fool. wanted him to wake up from sleep and say that he should have already been to say what it is. She was jealous of his comings and several times she saw a girl coming out of his house, but it was a nurse. the next day he took Danhi results and showed Viplav. he refused to be a donor Vidha and no one could convince her otherwise. Sam Vidha told him Rakshas you're my dad and I gave you a bracelet. So now I'm waiting for me back when you get out of the hospital. It was enough to Viplav decision to agree to the operation. The operation was successful and Viplav is excellent oporavljavao. Danh's all the time along with Vidhi stayed in Mumbai. Before he left the hospital Danhi one day came alone and asked myself what I was waiting for that he asks Viplav that you want to marry me when you get out of the hospital. Everyone was surprised with her courage and answer all know. Meanwhile, Raja has revealed the truth about the murder of the father of Viplav and arrested Tripurarija and then reveal all / when Viplav left the hospital he could not breathe from the attention he has had all provided and how much they all cared for him. but it was just enough to make it past their beloved pupil and to enjoy with my daughter. The wedding was a double. Danhi and Viplav ... but on the other hand Raya and Piya. After 6 months has confirmed that Viplav completely healed and that day is and Danhi has announced another good news that Viplav become a dad for the second time.
my dear friends, this is a story that I like and I wish something like this happened. This is written just for you because you have given me support and that that sometimes not even been aware of. The end.

I hope you that you like

Edited by zajedno - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of ALL congratulations DEAR Sara..👏👏👏 I appreciate your efforts ...the story was good...I like happy endings...I am not tragedy lover...I loved your story...your optimism...once again I am happy to mention that I admire u a lot...there R many reasons for it...so happy to read THAT VIP was blessed with. Second baby too😳...the deep love in VIP for dhani was beautifully brought out😃...keep writing many stories DEAR...Thanks for your efforts to keep the forum alive😊
Edited by pearl82 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl82

First of ALL congratulations DEAR Sara..👏👏👏 I appreciate your efforts ...the story was good...I like happy endings...I am not tragedy lover...I loved your story...your optimism...once again I am happy to mention that I admire u a lot...there R many reasons for it...so happy to read THAT VIP was blessed with. Second baby too😳...the deep love in VIP for dhani was beautifully brought out😃...keep writing many stories DEAR...Thanks for your efforts to keep the forum alive😊

Thank you my dear, the sincere congratulations. I hope sincerely that you enjoyed. I did the best I could. I just wanted to apologize if there are grammatical mistake because as you all know I'm not the best in the English language. please tell me whether I might have to do something different. thank you again for being patient and you've waited for the end of the series. I might write something else unrelated to this series.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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waiting to Danhi with children occurs. I'm happy.

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