'Blind Love'- MaNan FF (Epilogue on page 10) - Page 3

Both the parts were amazing,y written..

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Both the parts were amazing,y written..

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Part A

now it was obvious for MaNan that they liked each other. but they didn't share their feelings. they didn't confess to each other. they were just happy to be aware of the fact that the other one had the same feeling.

in SPACE they were doing good. and getting ready for their carriers. whereas in their homes - some parents were trying for their marriages, some were worried for their future carriers.

nandu's parents knew she wanted to join their company. to handle their business. they wanted too. but they needed someone trustworthy for nandu. as in this place she wasn't capable of observing everything properly without eyesight. so she also needed someone to guide her. but as she was still studying, so the person was yet to be found.
here navya's family wanted her to get married soon. as their family had a weird tradition for girls to be wed off before 25. they were busy finding a suitable guy for her.

mukti's family didn't really care about her much. they thought they had done everything required for her because she had a luxurious life. and they were totally wrong.

forgot to say, cabir is not a gay. so his family didn't abandon him. his parents took divorce. and he lived with his mother. she was waiting to see him successful in life.

dhruv's family let him decide everything what he wants to do or not. and they were okay with what he chose.

aliya is an orphan. she has no brother. she is the only child of a billionaire couple who left their huge wealth for her taking the most precious thing. the love of parents.

but she was loved by others. her friends. and specially dhruv, with whom she was in a relationship for last 1 n a half year. {yes. they are together. and others also know about this. even after seeing them confessing, MaNan didn't confess. may be they thought to handle one at a time. or maybe they didn't need confess. can't say}

dhruv's family still didn't have an idea about this. coz dhruv thought he would tell them after they get settled in their respective carriers.

last of all comes manik's family. his parents were happy that he wanted to be a doctor. they always supported him. they knew about MaNan friendship for all these years. but never thought about anything more than that.

they always saw them with their friends only. they unnoticed the part when their friends would go home and they would still be together with the excuse that their houses were only 10 feet away, where they could return any time.

so this goes about parents thinking. they were not all same nor their kids. they almost all decided their child's future. but everything doesn't always go the way we think it to be.

Part B

MaNan woke up first in the morning. after waking up nandini freshened herself and went to meet manik. when nandu entered his room he was coming out from the washroom. she found him there hearing his yawn.

he was still yawning coz last night he had to sleep late than usual. manik had less sleep at night and was still sleepy. but nandini was an early riser always. whenever she sleeps, she gets up in time.

nandini went up to him.
nandini: apki nind nahi khuli abhi tak?

manik: itni der se soya tha main kal raat. nind puri nahi hui. isi..li..yeee
(he said yawning. )

nandini: ok manik. you wait here.i will bring coffee for you.

manik: no. you don't bother. i will make myself.

nandini: it's ok manik. i will not make the coffee. i will ask someone to make it for you. { actually nandini can make coffee from coffee maker. but her coffee doesn't taste good and manik knew it. so he was just trying to avoid her. }

manik: mera woh matlab nahi tha. i meant tum abhi uthi ho to...

nandini: i know i don't make good coffee. so no need to tell. (faking anger)

manik: sorry. nandu. but your coffee isn't that bad either. really.

nandini: thik hai. then drink the coffee i make for you.

manik: okay. i will. ( a bit tensed n scared about what would happen after that)

nandini: (laughing) i was kidding manik. you don't have to do it. (cupping his face in her hands) I won't do anything you don't like.

nandini asked for 2 coffee in her room. MaNan settled themselves in the swing that was in her balcony. it had place for one to sit properly. but they two always shared it.

nandini sat there keeping her head on his chest. { don't get shocked. they have become like this, they even don't know from when. }

after sitting there for sometime their coffee arrived . they had it and then went down to wake up others. when they reached at the hall, all were still sleeping. manik asked lemon water for all of them. and also went to bring medicines.

mukti was sleeping on the couch. navya n cabir at floor keeping their heads in the opposite sofas. dhruv and aliya were sleeping together hand in hand. aliya's head was on dhruv's lap.

MaNan: chalo utho. it's morning.

nandini: kab tak sote rahoge. mere parents ko pata chal gaya na toh kya sochenge? {her parents already knew why they were here, it was just to wake them up}

manik: guys hum kabki uth gaye. coffee bhi peeli. breakfast bhi karne wale hai. (said the last line near cabir's ear)

listening about food cabir woke up. then mukti who was on the couch beside him. one by one all woke up. they drank the lime water. then took their medicines.

cabir:what yaar. itni subha subha jaga di. tum dono to pehle uth hi jaoge na. you guys weren't drank. tumhe kya pata how we all are feeling.

nandini: toh drink kiya hi kiyu?

mukti: kabhi karke toh dekho yaar. kya maza aata hain.

manik: dikhraha hain kitnaaa maza aaraha hain tum logo ko.

nandini: now get up guys. bohut bhuk lagi hai. khana nahi hai kya tum logo ko?

dhruv: ya. let's eat. chalo aliya. ( he tagged her with him)

all had breakfast. then they chit chatted for some time and all left for their homes. manik too. nandini went to her parents room.

manan came downstairs and entered nandu's room.

manik: nandu this tune mujhse nahi ho raha yaar. kya karu? kabse try kar raha hu.

nandu: all are trying manik. and we all decided that we will continue from tomorrow. so aaj hi karneki jarurat nahi hai.

manik: but mujhe hai. I need to atleast put this tune on guitar. do something nandu. I know only you can help me in this.

nandu: so do the thing I tell you to do every time.

manik: to close my eyes and..

nandu: close your eyes and just listen to the tune again. and this time try to absorb the tune.

manik: woh kaise karte hai?

nandu: kaise matlab kya? try to feel it. just like that.

manik: okay. as you say..

manik was on the bean bag and nandu was sitting on the bed in front of him. manik closed his eyes. and nandu started humming the tune for him.

as nandini said him to feel the tune he tried to do so. he tried to go with the flow of the tune. and started imagining scenarios. he saw nandini singing a song looking at him as if she could see. but she actually couldn't.

manik tried to forget the scene and concentrate on the tune. as he had to do the tune. suddenly nandini stopped.

nandu: now try this manik
(she gave him his guitar) with your eyes closed. (patted him on his hand)

manik started playing the guitar. at first it wasn't matching with the tune. but soon he synchronized them.

this time they started a song. a few lines they tried to contribute.

{guys imagine them singing song "Bolna" from movie "kapoor n sons" }

during the song nandu went towards manik and wrapped her one arm around his neck back hugging him.

manik opened his eyes to see nandini who was now resting her head on his shoulder. manik continued with singing and after sometime felt her dozing off.

knowing that she was sleepy manik stopped singing and strumming his guitar. till then nandini was asleep totally.

manik slowly untangled her hand from him and picked her up in his arms. manik made her lie on her bed. put the duvet on her. then settled the AC temperature and left from there.

not before placing a good night kiss on her forehead.

they all practiced very hard for the concert. as it was for charity and they love to go ahead when it comes for something like this.

the concert day was near. they sang their new song in front of their teachers and principal as per the rule. they all liked their song as always. other students didn't get to hear it before. because they also had to contribute. if they would hear it before they might not come to the concert to hear the same song again.

the concert decorations were done by the experts. they did it so well that it was just mind blowing.

the 7 wonders went to aliya's house before the concert day. they were confident that they were gonna rock. but there was some problem. every time they performed, they performed for themselves. they were ready to take charge of what they did or showed. if they would do bad, it was their responsibility. but this time they were performing for others. so if they did something wrong, they would be responsible but the kids would suffer for their mistakes.

so this time they had to be extra careful. all gave each other tight hugs. maybe tried to say everything would go smoothly. they were all inseparable. they knew each other so well. they would be with each other in every good and bad time.

bidding all byes they left for their own houses. manik wanted to go with nandini to continue their "lesson". but his planning went in vain when nandini wished him good night outside his house and left for her own.

at the concert day all performed very well. after the performance the 7 wonders stand on the stage hand in hand and bowed their heads. they all had a group hug.

the event went very well as the purpose served best. they could gather enough money for the kids.

for this success they wanted to celebrate. and here comes another "Celebration".

so how to celebrate? they thought for a night drive in Mumbai city. all gathered in their special car. they started to roam around and sometimes they would stop to eat. like when they would notice pao bhaji or vada pao, they couldn't stop themselves pouncing on it.

they stopped the car at the sea beach at midnight. all were driving the car turn by turn except nandini and dhruv. dhruv knew how to drive a bike but not a car. and he didn't want to learn also because he never wished to have a car of his own. he was more than happy with his bike. which was selected by aliya.

after reaching the beach all started to walk on the shore. they found shells there which they collected as a hobby. all were bare footed. walking there by the water. every wave was landing on their feet and wetting them.

dhruliya were walking hand in hand. where MaNan decided to sit there for sometime. manik kept his one arm over nandini's shoulder side hugging her. she kept her head on his heart. hearing the heartbeats which seem to be always in a rytheme.

it was a calm and serene weather. nandini was also enjoying. but the problem is, how could they be so quiet??

it was against their nature. they had to do some masti-fun while together. navya was walking past cabir and suddenly pushed him in water. cabir took his time to register the situation and then without delay picked her up and threw her in the water mercilessly.

mukti started laughing watching the scene and got in notice of cabir. he ran towards her and she ran faster hiding herself somewhere.

cabir was looking for her everywhere and all of a sudden mukti came from behind and kicked his back. cabir lose control and fell on the sand. eating some sand he got up to see his friends running behind one another with sand or water. he also joined them and started their not so quiet fight.

getting tired they all left from there. they started their car ride again. this time for their homes. it was dawn that time. the sun just began rising at the east. and our 7 wonders were so tired to drive.

they were again driving turn by turn. first navya, then manik and then cabir. while driving on the highway cabir's sudden scream alerted them all. cabir discovered that the break wasn't working for some unknown reason.

aliya said him to try to stop the car at something that could take its pressure and they could be safe. though all knew this simple science but was panicking inside thinking of the consequences. nandini held manik's hand tightly after hearing this.
manik in return pressed her hand more tightly in reassurance.

they were finding something suitable when they noticed some big vehicle was coming from the opposite in high speed. they didn't know what to do. it was actually a truck. there was not much light and the truck's head light directly hit cabir's eyes.

due to this he got imbalanced and moved the car right ways in a hurry. unfortunately there was a tree at the roadside where they ended up hitting their car.


#love MaNan

it was not an ordinary accident. it was a major accident they got themselves into. all were badly wounded.

the truck stopped on its tracks. two men got down from it. they noticed them unconscious.

cabir's head was on the steering wheel. navya's head was hanging out of the broken window. manik tried shielding nandini. they were lying on the floor almost. mukti and aliya was on their seats but injured. dhruv was lying out of the car. blood oozing from his body.

fume was coming out from the car's bonnet. the truck drivers were afraid that it could take fire anytime. so they quickly started to bring everyone out of the car. among all nandini was half conscious. she somehow asked them for help. she couldn't see who they were. but was grateful to them for becoming their saviours. they took them all to the near by hospital.

they admitted the 7 wonders there. the hospital authorities called there parents. as they got their phones from them.

till the time their parents reached hospital, nandini.manik n aliya had gained consciousness. manik had his hand plastered. nandini got a few bruises. aliya was having pain in her legs.

manik hugged nandu and aliya. after aliya went to meet dhruv's parents, manik and nandini sat there on the bench. manik kissed her forehead and made it touched by his. nandini also planted a soft kiss on his forhead.

then they went to meet their parents. MaNan hugged them. their parents went to talk to the doctors. asking about the others.

after sometime navya and mukti woke up. they meet their other friends. cabir and dhruv was in operation theatre. first cabir was shifted from the O.T. he was still unconscious. his friends watched him having a bandage at his head. he had got stitches there.

aliya asked the doctor about dhruv. rest were also eager to know about his progress. they were happy that rest of them were out of danger. but was worried for dhruv. because doctors took so much time in his operation and were still there.

the doctors were not saying anything. so they got more scared. they were pleading with their eyes to say something. dhruv's mom dad were so terrified watching the doctor's frightened face.

the doctor lowered his eyes and at last spoke, "we are very sorry, we tried our best. "

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting..

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