DevAkshi FS: Eternal Sunshine Of Spotless Mind- Part 3&4 on Pg 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey friends😳
How are you all?? I'm here with the prologue of my new story..plzz read it and let me know ur opinion in the form of likes and comments..



ETERNAL SUNSHINE OF SPOTLESS MIND


Two persons came from the opposite corridor of JLS Cancer hospital bumbed to each other.The man bent down by saying sorry to collect the things which fell from his hand without giving his face's glance to that lady. But that voice was enough for her to recognise the person. When the man stood to say sorry to the lady,time became still for them..There stood Dev and Sona after long 4 years by facing each other unable to utter a single word where Dev's face showed happiness after seeing her. But he couldn't understood what is reflecting on her face..How can he expect that she will be happy after seeing him even after what happened four years back.
'It's okay' by saying that Sona moved to her cabin with a heavy heart. Sona didn't wanted to see his face,but why he is here??here she is hardly trying to forget him and move on,then his presence will do anygood for her?..No,She is not going to allow him to break her heart anymore..He is her past and she is not going to let him ruin her future.. ,
Dev stood the corridor feeling dejected..She have all the right to behave like that after what he done to her..A tear drop fell from his face by thinking about his lost love..


How was that...😳
Dev and Sona separated 4 years back...What will be the reason??..Any guess ;)..How they met and separated??What Dev is doing in Cancer hospital??..Will they unite??..Yeah..Sona is oncologist in this story..Should I continue??..plzz let me know in the form of like and comment..

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U can see the post from my pm id on third post of this thread..

Thankyou
With lots of love
---binuuu---
PART 1 ON PAGE 7
PART 2 ON PAGE 14
PART 3 ON PAGE 19
PART 4 ON PAGE 19
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is my pm id...
prologue updated :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi nice start. Pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sounds very interesting😊
Please cont soon😳
Posted: 8 years ago
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Intrestingg..di..waiting for the story to Progress..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sounds interesting
do continue
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sounds interesting
I dnt want dev and sona to through any pain...hope its not dev suffering
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good Start.
Dev is a healthy guy, so please don't make him a Cancer Sufferer. He is a GEM & a wonderful character. I admire Dev very much. How about writing just the way he is... as a Romantic?It will be nice. 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start...😊
Seems interesting
Do cont soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: swalia

Hi nice start. Pls continue soon




hii...
thankuu swalia...
my xams r gng on..will try to post soonn...

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