DevAkshi FS: Eternal Sunshine Of Spotless Mind- Part 3&4 on Pg 17 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice prologue
Continue soon plz
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thankuu asif bhai...
will update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Congrats for your new story

Prologue sounds so intriguing
eagerly waiting for first part




thankuuu so muchhh..
will update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART-1


Dev got a big surprise by seeing Sonakshi on the hospital corridor after four long years. He never thought God will bless him with this moment ever.Last four years were like a hell for him, he searched almost everywhere for her but she didn't left any clue about her while disappearing from Delhi.Now both Dev and Sonakshi standing miles distant form Delhi Where he didn't saw any emotion on Sona's face.. The sparks of her eyes while seeing him were not there,the smile on her lips while seeing him was not there,the glow of her face while seeing him was not there,indifference was the only thing left on her face. That thoughts made flow tears from his eyes. Unable to hold himself he sat on the bench on the hospital corridor where his thoughts travelled to his beautiful past.

Sonakshi Bose and Nikki Dixit were best of friends.Both of them met each other during their MBBS studies, Nikki and Sona were inseparable, everyone adored their friendship.. The only person who hated Sona was Nikki's brother Dev Dixit. He never met Sona ,but hearing her name was like killing him. The actual reason why he hate Sona was Jealous Dixit.Yes, Dev loved his baby sister very much and she loved him too. Bhai was Nikki's favourite person until she started her college studies. Nikki met Sona in her first year and there started the journey of their beautiful friendship. Nikki shared everything with Dev,she never forget to share the happenings of her life to him. Being Sona is her best friend Sona was always in her stories.. Initially Dev didn't had any problem,but her continuous talk about Sona made an insecurity within him,he felt like his baby sister is giving more importance to Sona than him. He thought his Nikki will not give much importance to him anymore and she will enjoy Sona's friendship than their bond. But Nikki was not aware about this and she will try to fill him about her day's happenings where Dev will try to escape from Sona's talk. He never knew that he can hate someone whom he never met or talked before. Nikki tried many times to show Sona's photo to Dev , those times somehow he excused from there. He didn't wanted to see the person whom his sister love more.

Where on the other hand Sona adored Nikki-Dev bond. Sona had good knowledge about all Dixit members like Nikki knew about all Bose members. When Sona saw Dev's photo first,she literally fell for that handsome man and she got to know every minute details about Dev from Nikki .
It was a fine morning,Dev was going for a meeting ,suddenly his eyes caught a beautiful sight.A beautiful girl clad in blue anarkali was laughing uncontrollably with her friends not caring about the outside world. He parked his car on road side and continued to watch that girl where he was not aware about what was he doing or he is becoming late for meeting. He continued his stalking until she left from there with her friends.Never a girl attracted him like this ,it was a new feeling for him. When he reached home he discusses about this with Nikki where she teased him for this. He started to see that smiling face almost everywhere and he was new with these feelings.
Next day morning Dev started to leave early from home with a hope to see that girl again. Nikki was helping Ishwari in the kitchen where Dev was starting to leave.

'Areh Nikki what are doing in kitchen..Don't you have college today'

'Bhai,I told you naa...Our college is conducting camp for final year students.It is nearer to our place.So me and Sona going from here'..

'Yeah...I completely forget about it..'..



'Ahem...ahem...What happened to you Bhai.. You started to forgetting things...What's happening'..Nikki continued her teasing..

'Nikki, I need to go..bye'. Dev tried to escape from Nikki's wrath..

'Areh Dev beta..Where are you going.. You know naa Nikki's friend Sona is coming here first time.. Leave after having dinner with all of us'.

'No mom.. I have an important meeting..I need to go..By the way Sona will come whole two weeks naa...I will meet her some other time'.By saying this he took ashirwad from his mom and started to leave.

Within these years Dev realised how silly was he to hate Sona and he have no probem with Sona now.He don't like or hate her anymore.

Nikki accompanied Dev till door...'Bhai,are you sure about you are going for meeting???...Or are you going to meet someone special'.By saying this Nikki ran from there before getting a smack on her head from Dev.Where Dev proceeded to his car with a smile.

Sona reached around 9'O clock and had breakfast with Dixit family.After one hour Nikki and Sona left to the camp.Within that one hour Sona created a special place in Ishwari's heart. This routine continued till one week, Dev leaving to office early and Sona spending time with Nikki's family. Within these seven days Sona made a good bond with Neha,Riya and Ishwari,everyone enjoyed her company.The person whom she was eager to meet didn't appeared infront of her in those seven days. On the other hand Dev continued his routine with a hope that he will meet that girl again ,who is not giving any peace by invading his mind.What Dev didn't know is that the girl in his dreams is in his home only.


Hai friends😳
sorry for this late update,I was busy with my college and exams..
how was the first chapter?? ignore my mistakes and let me know your opinion..
thankyou
lots of love
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Edited by binuuu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
BUDDY THIS ID FOR PMS


Edited by binuuu_pmid - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
It was amazing!!
I laughed at Dev's reason to hate Sona😆
Maza aa gaya!!
Waiting for his reaction after seeing her in her own house!!
Please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Wow!

Really intriguing chapter!

Update soon! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Very nice... Liking this unreasonable hatred for Sona.. update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
It was superb
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Wow sounds interesting waiting to know how they meet.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Interesting and well written...👏⭐️

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