ViTharv OS- Happy Birthday Atharv

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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!😳

This scene plays out after Atharv's many failed attempts to show Vividha her father's true face. Both were hurting and both of their POV was correct according to them. But the love they shared, the bond they shared and the respect they had for each other always bought back together.

Please don't come with bricks and bats for this very short OS. 😆I know this OS is very lame, so please bear with me and be kind in your replies! Hope ViTharv's love shines through this incoherent OS.😳

This OS is specially dedicated to one of my best critics, one of my best friends, one who encourages me to pen thoughts more, and whose birthday we celebrated yesterday! Thankyou all for joining in Soumya's birthday celebrations and hoping we made it special for her!

Soumya🤗

This OS is your birthday gift from me!❤️

Hope you will like the short OS that I penned!😳

This OS is a celebration of ViTharv's love!

ViTharv OS- Happy Birthday Atharv

"I am disgusted at the fact that I ever loved you." These words, these heart breaking words kept echoing in his ears as he tossed and turned in bed looking at the dark ceiling. He climbed down from his bunk bed in the shed and kept staring at the black night outside. The night was pitch dark, with only the moon keeping it company. There were no stars and no hopes. And all he ever wanted was Vividha back. Their fights were not so huge, but here her father was involved and it had escalated so badly. It had been almost a month. He had tried to apologise only to be met with more resistance from her side. And today he wanted her back, so he could celebrate his birthday with her. That's all he wished for. He sent out a small prayer to the moon, and there she was standing in front of him.



A cake, with candles adoring it, she walked in from the main door and stood in front of him. She handed him the knife, gestured him to cut the cake. Before that, she made him blow the candles and also sang for him. He cut the cake and she fed him the cake. His eyes lit up the moment she fed him, after days had she been so close to him. They stayed there, in complete silence; she rested her head against his chest, listening to their hearts beat in rhythm with each other. He could clearly hear her heart racing, her beats getting faster, all he did was crush her against his chest, tighten his grip around her waist, and stood still until, her heart was back to normal. She slowly raised her head from his chest while they stood there, their eyes speaking. Speaking a thousand unsaid words, a thousand unsaid feelings and countless days of feeling of betrayal, he spoke first.



Atharv: "Vividha, you here?"



Vividha: "How could I not come knowing it's your birthday? As much as I hate you for trying to defame my father, one thing is clear I love you. Nothing can come between us; I will never allow anything to come between us. I am possessive about our relation and I have no qualms about it. "



He smiled seeing this side of her. She never ceased to amaze him. Every second, every moment she amazed him.



Atharv: "Vividha, I love you too! I was scared that you will never come back to me after what I did. But I just wanted to see you the real face of your father. I want to apologise to you for the way I lashed at you."



Vividha: "Its okay Atharv. You don't need to apologise. I just want you to know that sometimes we have to think emotionally rather than mentally. Sometimes you got to think from your heart Atharv."



Atharv: "I am ready to give me hand in yours and follow my heart. Vividha as long as we both shall live, promise me, you will always hold my hand and lead me out of the darkness and be my light!"



Vividha: "I promise!"



Finally Atharv and Vividha were back together! They both had finally found peace and selfless love both had been struggling to find!



The End!

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳

Positive criticism is always welcome!


Love,

Mayu

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Pagalpinky thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short and sweet
More more stories
Through anything they stand by each other, lovely
Thanks tons
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Posted: 9 years ago
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mayu another beautiful OS
morning ek dum mast banaya tumne

soumyas birthday thread was damn good, u r excellent and thks for thinking of opening this thread for her

u r such an amazing girl mayu with such a pure heart👏👏

your OS all ot them reminds be my M&B books

u describe them so romantically, i always look forward to your posts

iam born romantic girl and like everything romantic around me

atharv hugging vivi, throwing hand around her, holding her tightly

ahhh it will be a treat to watch

miss those jndsd days

u have penned it so beautifully

Atharv's longing for vividha is nicely written

mein atharv ki vividhaji ko bahut miss kar rahi hoon, i miss that vividhaji so much who never could take her hands off from atharv

i want more of vitharv hugs and kisses

miss them

thks for keeping our imagination alive through your post

love u mayu
Edited by prabharajani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu...What should I say about your OS. I am a fan of your writing, the charms you projects through it.

You reminded me of the old golden days of JNDSD and all those old moments of ViTharv. Like Soumya said, its sums up ViTharv relationship, I agree with her completely. The love, the bonding, the connection ViTharv shares no one can break that.

I loved their conversation. The whole birthday scene, their hug, they are just incomplete without each other.

The romantic moments of them brilliantly penned down by you. Loved the OS Mayu. Keep writing dearie!!! You are brilliant!!!!! 🤗

Edited by Nira_Mukherjee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu my sweetheart🤗
Firstly, the fact that you wrote this OS as a gift to me makes me the happiest person alive! And you can always count on me to leave long comments, I do that everytime..and this is toh fir bhi my Mayu's OS!🤗

The best part about this OS is how it just sums up Vitharv's relationship in a few words. They love each other and nothing can ever in the way of it. Period.

I loved how every relation has it's own importance and a separate place in Vividha's life. She would never compromise or lose one at the cost of another. She might have had a fight over her father with Atharv, might be angry with him because that's how much her father matters to her..but that can't stop her from loving her guy and making his special day even more special.

I'm a sucker for emotional and heartwrenching romantic moments. The pain Atharv felt recalling Vividha's harsh words just did something to my heart. He was so incomplete without her..her anger, the distance everything was killing him..and worst of all not having her beside him on his special day.

I had the biggest smile on my face when she came, made him cut the cake and fed him his piece. It was like the colour in his life was back! That hug from him said it all..it just warmed my heart.

Thankyou for this OS dearie..it was the first thing I saw this morning and made my morning so beautiful❤️🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Perfect Mayu 👍🏼 Vitharv and their Hugs Oh I miss them so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Mayu

Whenever you write an OS, I end up missing my old JNDSD and their moments.The first line itself was very painful.It reminded me of all those times Atharv tried to show Vividha her father's true face.Even when Kailash gave consent to their marriage,Atharv was sceptical about it.He always felt something is amiss.I would not blame Vividha because I could not even place myself in her situation to think what I would have done.

Love the communication between Atharv and Vividha.Atharv always encouraged her to speak her thoughts and she did.That's the reason I am happy that the reason for their separation was Kailash's villainy and not some misunderstanding.ViTharv are the only couple I have seen who speak their hearts out.

Like Soms said,this os sums up Vitharv's relationship.Atharv was missing Vividha and She comes and makes it special.They could never stay apart from each other and that's what we are seeing in the show these days.Nobody,not Uma's lies,Not Sujatha's justified anger,not the shackles of the forced marriage.

Loved the os,Mayu dearest and do excuse my botched up attempt of making it longer.I wish Soms gives me tutorial how to write comments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful mayu . I love how "even if we are fighting its your birthday" .
Some advice . You live out words in your sentences and mayu , - show don't tell -
More showing please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu, though I enjoyed ViTharv's convo, this OS is a bit too short and The End came too quickly .😆
Looking forward to your next one.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Short and sweet
More more stories
Through anything they stand by each other, lovely
Thanks tons


Thankyou so much Pinky😳

Yes, that is what ViTharv are all about right?

Togetherness!❤️

Love,
Mayu

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