The Silkworm - IshRa Two-Shot - Part 2 - Page 8 - Page 8

Originally posted by: kenika

Awesome update... its amezing... plz plz update sooonnn plz plz

Originally posted by: timetraveller70

awesome up date

Originally posted by: Rivka

Very well written

Read two shots in a go.

I would really like if you continue .

Love the two parts . I wish someday pihu

Spill all what Shagun said so

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Res

Originally posted by: lourel24

Omg! It was such an excellent update.I can pin point which scenes I liked the most." this isn't joke.I m exhausted n u trying to be lucky"," you just accused adi of being a criminal bailed nidhi who kidnapped n abused your daughter... ",no its not crime to bail anyone Mrs raghav,but I assure you... " are few of them.

Originally posted by: Juggaadd

Hey! How are you? It has been a long time.

I am rarely logging onto IF these days and YHM is not a show that I follow now. I did not like what they did to Shagun. Just to make people side with Ishita, the writers showed Shagun plotting nasty things. Otherwise Ishita had no claim on Pihu. Shagun was Pihu's "Ishima". I have found no reason to side with Raman and Ishita. They are different from the IshRa I loved though they still have that chemistry. Somehow,I think, the plot contributed to their chemistry which is missing and I am unable to enjoy their stories. I liked your stories. I recently read your old ones with pre leap IshRa and I am relieving those amazing moments again. So, a request. If you can write about the old IshRa, I would love to read.

Originally posted by: -Anku-

I AM SUPER SORRY I am editing this so late, I was busy and still am. But I had read this a few days back and read it again now...

What a wonderful conclusion to Shagun here, what a wonderful way of bringing out the truth in front of Pihu. It has been hard for her, but a little pain now saves her from being used, manipulated and hurt in the long run. I love how Raman comes down and takes things in his hand, proving Shagun has the culprit, proving her incapable of handling the child and even loving or caring for her the way she should. And Mihir's entry, him berating Shagun, his disappointment and Shagun's arrest was bang on 👏

Love how IshRa shared silent looks and understanding, egging her to confess herself. Pihu's innocence won over, when she chose her dad, the rest of her family she has grown up with on realizing that the woman she loved and considered as a mother was trying to harm them and that too fatally.

Of course can never forget the beautiful romantic and passionate moments you wrote for IshRa, that practically made me blush and wish we could them for real 😆

You write wonderfully, I am floored 😳