The Silkworm - IshRa Two-Shot - Part 2 - Page 8

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: DikshaN
a nicely written update
awesome work
u portray emotions so well do continue soon

thanks Diksha😊

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: lourel24
Outstanding

thanks Lourel 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: vicky1978
superb

thanks Vicky 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Author's note -

I hadn't realized until I posted this that it had been so long since I wrote a TS.

Going over the link in my index it struck me it's been exactly a year since my last one.

My friends who listen to me rave and rant and everything in between know I questioned my sanity when I wrote this as much as I did it later on informing them that what finished at page number 22 is now 5 page longer.

At 27 pages, this is one of my lengthiest pieces and one that came because of some pent up frustration perhaps building within me.

Hope you people enjoy reading this, as much as I did writing it.

Would love to hear a take from you,

Until later,

Au revoir

Love and god bless,

Aani

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

I AM SUPER SORRY I am editing this so late, I was busy and still am. But I had read this a few days back and read it again now...

What a wonderful conclusion to Shagun here, what a wonderful way of bringing out the truth in front of Pihu. It has been hard for her, but a little pain now saves her from being used, manipulated and hurt in the long run. I love how Raman comes down and takes things in his hand, proving Shagun has the culprit, proving her incapable of handling the child and even loving or caring for her the way she should. And Mihir's entry, him berating Shagun, his disappointment and Shagun's arrest was bang on 👏

Love how IshRa shared silent looks and understanding, egging her to confess herself. Pihu's innocence won over, when she chose her dad, the rest of her family she has grown up with on realizing that the woman she loved and considered as a mother was trying to harm them and that too fatally.

Of course can never forget the beautiful romantic and passionate moments you wrote for IshRa, that practically made me blush and wish we could them for real 😆

You write wonderfully, I am floored 😳

Edited by -Anku- - 9 years ago

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zohakhan7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

This is so beautiful

Loved it

Finally Pihu knows about Shagun's true nature

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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Bhuvana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Aani, this is wonderful. I have no words. You will be continuing the story. Right?

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

a beautifully wonderful update pihu learnt about shagun and knows ishu is her mother hope Raman explains the reason of ishu's absence to pihu properly do continue soon

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gargpoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Awsm update..
Finally shagun' s true color is out in front of all n she got arrested.
Loved how pihu gave it back to shagun..
Hope ishra will tell her whole truth
Update soon