The Silkworm - IshRa Two-Shot - Part 2 - Page 8 - Page 6

Really enjoyed reading chapters 1-2! What a logical & beatiful revaluation of Shagun's truth to Pihu (something the show would never have 😆)

Oh God..this is just too good. Hope we get something atleast remotely similar to this on the show.

Wow...brilliantly written

Awesome update... its amezing... plz plz update sooonnn plz plz

Very well written

Omg! It was such an excellent update.I can pin point which scenes I liked the most." this isn't joke.I m exhausted n u trying to be lucky"," you just accused adi of being a criminal bailed nidhi who kidnapped n abused your daughter... ",no its not crime to bail anyone Mrs raghav,but I assure you... " are few of them.

Plz plz plz plz plz update ...waiting...

Originally posted by: -Anku-

I am sorry I've taken this long to read this one 😳 I have a million excuses...I had been ill, and busy and so on. But I should have read it because it would give me such a pleasant breather ☺️ But then again I am glad I've read it now.. at leisure...when I could absorb it slowly and enjoy the everlasting affect of the kind of stories and moment you write for IshRa.

I think we've spoken and discussed this many times now and we've concluded that with Pihu since her only real parent has been Raman... if and when he's cornered or in trouble Pihu will melt, realize and mold and going by what's happened on the show she will in fact trust Ishita the person she least knows the most when it comes to him. AND I LOVE how you incorporated that here.

The set up of Raman being in trouble, of all the women in his life rushing to save him and Adi, not thinking once of the danger that could harm them was enthralling. They ALL as a unit, as a family have gone through so much that when you read of a moment like this you only anticipate the best to come out of the worst. I've loved how perfectly you've described the happenings. Pihu running to her father, him saving and getting injured. And alas IshRa almost scraping death without being sad or fearful because they were together at least. So much happened at once, but it you've threaded the events so effortlessly together. You could view the family, at the fire site ready to give up on life for each other and feel the love IshRa have bought their kids up with and how well it's turned out in spite of all the shortcomings that came along.

And then the perfect moment, when Pihu finally accepts Ishita as Ishima... something that wonderfully pleasing to read after today's episode 😭 It was realistic that there wasn't an immediate reunion...an immediate jump from being strangers to being mother and daughter. It was a huge revelation for Pihu and as a child would take her sometime to come in terms with what happened that day, to adjust to the realization that the woman she took as her mother was actually nothing but evil.

And then of course... No part or story ends best without it concluding with IshRa. Their moments together in the tub, when they wash each other...the grime, pain and exhaustion from the day. Shower their love on each other, share their feelings and unburden themselves is just a way to say how they're two perfectly imperfect, pieces of puzzle that complete each other ...without this statement sounding cliche because it is a FACT ..which the ending of this part glorifies in the best way possible...

Originally posted by: -Anku-

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