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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: mishrialways

neeru honestly i am confused

i realise that nisha had a disturbing chidhood then a women took her in care and then she with her help recovered from the trauma
during college she help in love with kabir and got married
an at present her dadi is dead and she blames herself for it and kabir and nisha are too separated and she is now working in a ngo
baki cheexe jaldi se batao ki hua kiya and maine jitna samjha woh thik h na😆


Thanks Ritika😳
Gist ekdum correct nikala hai tumne 😉
You summarised the story until now😆
And yeah updating soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: teju19

a very captivating story!
and for now is full of suspense too..
what happened in past that has led to this painfull present?
update soon...


Thanks so much for appreciating it 🤗😳
Updating soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Niha0606

yeh kya yaar rula diya😭

but loved it


Thanks so much Niha🤗
And plz don't cry...shayad thoda zyada hi serious kardi mene story😭
Updating soon dear❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: janvi1018

Simply beautiful..
Awesome story...
very interesting and emotional story
Waiting for the next update


Thankyou so much for your appreciation 😳😳
Will be updating soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

I am not understanding what's happening!

Though i am loving the way the story is proceeding but i couldn't yet understand why Nibir had to go through a breakage of relation n divorce...what crime has Nisha committed? How could Kabir move ahead so easily in his life, if he loved Nisha so much? Why Nisha blames herself for mrs.Briganza's death? so much of confusion! i hope I get my confusions cleared soon, or my head will burst out!🤣🤣
do update soon! and are we going to get a happy story ahead?☢️
please, update it ASAP!


First of all thanks so much Annie😳
I sincerely understand that you have so many questions😆😆
Major questions will be answered in the next update😉
And there will be happy moments too in the entire story😊, I can't say in which chapter as I haven't typed down😆, but there will be😃
And please hold your head safely till then🤣🤣(just kidding)
Updating very soon😃
Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I wasn't well so couldn't update just then🤔...feeling somewhat better now 😊so posting the next 2 chapters. Thank you so much everyone for your likes and appreciation🤗❤️

Note: The two chapters have different povs. You will understand when you read it but I am mentioning beforehand😊

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NiBir Story :Bloodbath

Chapter2


"Didi, didi what's your name?"

"Nisha"

"What's your name?"

"Arjun and my sister's name is Aruna"

Arjun spoke smiling.

"Thank you" Aruna said gripping my hand.

I bent at her level and stroked her hair.

"Nisha, the couple has arrived" Shobhit told me standing at the entrance of the room.

I nodded "Shobhit you be here with them"

"Yeah"

Shobhit ran towards the children and started introducing himself energetically. I rushed towards the reception.

Shobhit, who has recently completed his 21 years of life, joined the NGO a year back. He was thrown out of his house for indulging with drugs. One of Divya's relative had led him here for rehabilitation.

He is a tough guy with an innocent heart. Yet his common sense many times bids him bye. He had once put a toddler's life into risk on his foolish accounts though he is very guilty for it. He proudly says that he never repeats his mistakes and keeps his words. His addiction had to run away from his life within six months because of his strong willpower.

Similar is my case. I too own a strong willpower. Just that his will blossomed life within him and mine...death.

"Late again today" I frowned.

"Come on Nisha, you know there's so much work nowadays" he spoke removing off his shoes.

"Nowadays Kabir? I never saw you reach home before 11 from a month!"

"You are talking as if you don't know what job means...You also work and you know that there are deadlines" he explicated.

"I very well know that Kabir but Mr. Sharma, our neighbour, also work with you...I never saw him come home this late" I complained.

"So what do you want to say?" he raised a brow.

"I want to say that why don't you switch your job? Stop working as a choreographer...just join as clerk or something like that" I explained politely.

"What! Are you mad? Dancing is my passion Nisha. I had told you before marriage itself that I can leave anything but not dancing"

And he was true. He did not leave dancing...but left me. I was pulled out of my thoughts when my little toe hit a table on my way to reception. I rubbed it hastily ducking myself to soothe my shooting pain. It did alleviate my physical hurt however, brought fresh ache that enveloped my heart. I remained frozen looking at Kabir and Priyali's boisterous laughter.

"This child's nose looks like yours," Kabir smiled eyeing a baby in the cradle.

"And his smile is same as yours" Priyali beamed.

Kabir chuckled and went near the baby and playfully clapped in front of him. The baby responded merrily.

"Aww...how cute is my child" Kabir adored.

"Aww...how cute is my child"

"Kabir, stop it now"

"Listen, you can't keep me away from my child" Kabir said authoritatively cuddling my tummy.

He added, "Papa loves you so much"

"So much that he hardly talks with you" I jeered.

"Nisha what are you saying?" he inquired slightly angry.

"I'm saying no wrong Kabir... you hardly talk with me or your child"

"You very well know Nisha that now I'm only the source of earning. You had left the job two weeks ago when you had got to know about your pregnancy" he spoke sternly.

"So you want me to continue my job?" I snapped.

He clicked his tongue in irritation.

"No Nisha, I didn't mean that. I just want to say that we are going to welcome another member in our lives. Naturally, more money will be needed and so I have to work overtime. Why are you complaining about it? It's for our baby" he reasoned.

I smirked, "You overtime for our baby?"

"What do you mean?"

"What did you think Mr. Kabir Rathore? That I'm a fool who doesn't know where her husband goes late night" I gritted my teeth in anger.

"Have you lost it Nisha?" he clenched his jaws.

"I never imagined Kabir that you and Priyali would do this to me" I grabbed his collar.

He jerked my hold over his collar and took a short breath, "Look Nisha, it's already struck 1 AM. You are three weeks pregnant and I don't want my child to suffer in any way. Go to sleep"

He left the bed where we sat against each other and advanced towards the exit of the room.

"And you're going to sleep with her?" I sneered.

He gently revolved with tightened jaws, "Shut up Nisha!"

I should have then but I didn't...leading my life in a total shutdown.

The baby's wails pulled a chain to my train of thoughts.

"Arey he started crying" Priyali frowned.

"No cries...no cries...look" Kabir clicked his fingers to the baby.

Kabir loved children and that's why he regularly used to visit Mr. Sharma's house before our marriage. Mr. Sharma was father to a little girl, Meera. She was just a year old when we got married. He used to give me examples of her and wished that our child would just be like the angel, Meera. He had already decided the name for our child. Shvaas, meaning breath, if a baby boy and Hridayaa, meaning heart, if a baby girl... Unfortunately, our child never got breaths or heart.

My eyes started to well up and color drained out of my face.

Kabir spoke to Priyali, "I think we should call someone"

Priyali nodded and they swiveled.

A moment... and everything remain suspended. Again...we three stood against each other in the deafening silence.

I blinked rapidly to engulf the water that was welled up in my eyes. Priyali looked at me blankly and I avoided her gaze. I felt a tug at my heart when Kabir's eyes collided with mine straight after three long years.

"Take her...I don't want to see her ever" Kabir spoke sternly.

"No Kabir! You can't do this to me! Kabir!" I shouted as two women surrounded me.

"Thank you officer" he said to a policeman as he shook hands with him.

"I'll not let anybody separate us! I swear I'll not let such a person live! You get that!" I yelled as I was dragged back bound by the women.

He sighed and revolved.

Getting no response, I yelped again, "Kabir!"

He stood there with stooped head back facing me.

"You're only mine! Only mine!" I shrieked at top of my voice as tears escaped my eyes.

I got a push from kids running gaily behind me landing me just a few inches away from Kabir.

Paas aaye...
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui

We looked at each other in absolute silence...silence that was speaking volumes.

Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi

I took a long breath and stepped back twice.

Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile... jaa mile...

Gathering whatever rumbles of whiteness left within me, I faltered, "You... Pri... Priyali... Co... Congratulations"

And I spun instantly forcing my heavy legs to walk...walk away from him.

Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein... manzilein...

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Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NiBir Story :Bloodbath

Chapter3

Rang thhe, noor tha

I could see her flashing a big smile while she matched her steps with mine. That was a dare given to us by my friends to dance with our waists tied with a cloth.

Jab kareeb tu tha

Elated was she when I bent on my knees offering her proposal of our marriage. She raised me by my shoulders and drove herself in my embrace.

Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan

Dressed in a white gown, she approached me happily holding a bouquet of flowers.

"I do" I smiled looking at her.

Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

My world fell away, drained of all color as I saw her retreating. My breath stuttered as I tried to take deep breaths. I couldn't stop her.

Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)

I clicked my fingers in front of her when she was lost in novel reading.

"Plsch...wait Kabir" she urged fingering her earrings without shifting her gaze.

I chuckled and held the earring.

"What happened Kabir?" she asked annoyed.

I sighed and removed her earring off.

"Kab..Kabir" she stammered as I closed her book with my eyes darting at her.

"You know Nisha, you look pretty" I caressed her cheeks and she looked away blushing.

"Pretty stupid" I chortled while she shot her eyes glaring at me.

Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye

I could sense her emotions when she looked at me after so many years. It was very hard for her... just like with me. My legs started crawling towards the little figure afar. My feet ceased as she disappeared.

Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin

Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan

Pushing out all the strength, I ran to her but it went in vain. She was nowhere... My eyes glistened and I felt my lower lip quivering.

Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan

I have yearned to see her close, meet her, embrace her...In these three years, there passed no second when my heart didn't confront me of its love...my love.

Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani.. (x2)

"Kabir, I feel complete with you" She smiled sleeping beside me.

"You complete me" I placed a peck at her cheeks.

Pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega

I've always been hopeful and optimistic about our future but the strings of illusion seem to break away then and there.

Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan

I suspired as I saw her grinning wide distantly. My heart, a wrinkled rose bud set off to bloom. She laughed as my lips curved up.

Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..

I rushed to her and she laughed carefree. I couldn't believe my eyes. Nisha, my love, remained there smiling at me extending her palm.

Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)

I softly placed my palm on hers... that dropped down with a jolt as she vanished in thin air. Once a tear broke free, rest followed an unbroken stream. I collapsed on the floor, dejected, overwhelmed with emotions and realizations of my fate.

Hollow, pained, I've always tried to keep my head high but every time it felt like dying inside. Today too, I wished that I could push my emotions down so deep that I could forget them, but I couldn't. I tried to swallow my tears and not show my weakness, but my will was too weak.

Priyali gripped my shoulder bending beside me.

"I can't..." I sobbed.

"She will be fine" she tightened her grip consoling me.

I wiped my face and asserted, "I don't know anything now...I'm going to her...I...I can't see her like this anymore"

"No Kabir, we will have to wait" Priyali spoke concerned.

"Priyali is right" I heard Divya approaching us.

Priyali stood up and I looked away.

"Look Kabir, you have waited for three long years, I'm just asking you to wait sometime more...till the evening" Divya spoke sympathetically.

"Just till the evening?" I asked with a ray of hope.

"Yeah" Divya smiled.

Priyali's face lit up, "Means Nisha...Nisha is totally fine now?"

Divya sighed, "I can't say that but whatever I heard right now confirms it well"

Nisha was unaware of Divya also being a psychiatrist. This fact was hidden from her deliberately. Divya and I met the day I was crying lonely sitting beside the grave of Mrs. Briganza. She had come with a bouquet of flowers and laid them upon grave.

"Mrs. Briganza would always stay in our hearts" she sighed.

I gulped my tears and asked, "How do you know her?"

"She was like my mother... I feel guilty not to be able to be here when..." she trailed off fighting a sob.

"She hasn't died of heart attack...she was murdered" I expressed my disgust.

"What?" She questioned shocked.

"Yeah...my wife killed her" I clenched my jaws and my fingers curled in a fist.

"Nisha...your wife?" she enquired.

I nodded with anger visible in my eyes.

"How could she? I refuse to believe it" she averred.

"She did it!" I shouted as water again escaped my eyes.

Divya sighed, "Can you please tell me what had happened exactly?"

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Precap: The beginning of dark past

Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
hushhh...i am relieved!
Kabir still loves her, but what is it with Nisha?😕
the precap is giving me chills!


do update soon yaar! i am really loving this!
Edited by ..MysticAura.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Awesome updates...
Thank God kabir still love her I am very very happy now..
Waiting for past to reveal..
Continue soon waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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