His Birthday, Her Wish!- A Janmashtami OS - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: LakshMila

❤️
Unnh?Is this you?😆
I always fall for the way you describe him😆
Each line consisted of a melody of love.
The affection and joy of a Bhakt shining high!
I absolutely enjoyed the flute and convo part,Beautiful it was!
❤️
Nice gift Bhabs!

You never know 😉
Thank you laadli 🤗
Was it a gift? ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: SenRazia

Somehow I feel that when I read your work, I get lost in Govinds world..

Pure Bliss!
He is the answer to every question in the world, you know :)

It was beautiful!!
Loved it!!
Sru *hugs *

He definitely is ❤️
Anuu *hugs back*
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Aah! This was such bliss! Can't tell you how much I loved the piece!

Thank you Pro. You would feel it 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Awww!

Amazing Priye!

Her gift were the answers! Loved it!
What a beautiful Janmashtami gift😳

Thank you Mahi 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Loved the innovative thought of the interaction between the melody of Flute and the maiden's lips , romantic expressions with a philosophical tinge , you almost made the reader to run along with the eternal romantic pair to witness this dreamy conversation . Well written one .😊

I was hoping for that. Thank you Madhuri 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Absolutely beautiful!!!

And very romantic 😳

Thank you Shriii 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Arijit007

jai ho baanke bihari ki, this is purly divine, may shri krishna give you his divine darshan. 😭 😊

Thank you so much Arijit Bhaiya 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: babita..

Divine, purely a masterpiece Shrutha 👏👏

Loved the essence of the story coming straight from her heart and she feeling him inside her, around him and every where.
Lovely feeling of an unsaid love to Divine ! Beautifully expressed her dream giving her the extreme pleasure while filling her wish !
Awesome OS, Stupendous work on the characters and their feelings, loved it !
Thanks for this gift dearest, U are just awesome ⭐️⭐️
Loves ❤️

Thank you Babita ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: ramya06

Lost! Give me some time to retort to this one because reading it i suddenly got transported to some other world!
Unres
Srutha! 🤗 As i said this was divine and enchanting! I was transported to some other world! I mean wow! How much more beautiful can this get? 😳 Who is that girl in the os, you? 😛 How beautifully you describe her seeing him everywhere, wherever she turns she finds the lord. And the flute does all the talking eh? 😆 His questions, her answers everything is perfection!! ❤️ This one is surely a masterpiece!!

The girl can be any KrishnaPriyaa 😳
Thank you Rammy 🤗

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