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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

marking to read soon ...

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philantus01

@philantus01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Story was beautifully written👏...u penned down geet's emotion very well...👏

While i was reading it i felt geet should divorve rather dan hurting herself n maan in d process...

Evn sometimes kids get affected due to their parents strained relationship...

Geet said it right if it was once she would have forgiven him buyt it was mre dan once n he evn had d nerve to have sex wid his wife at d same tym...

I would have loved a mre practical ending by geet givin divorce to maan for his infedility...but nevamind she tot of her kids...

I always loved ua writing wher u always depicted their emotions so dat v could connect wid d characters

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Amazing story dear. The way u have made the character of Geet is simply amazing. A confident woman who is hurt. And no lady will accept her husband's affair jus with an apology. She needs assurance and trust that it will not be repeated. And going behind her back Maan surely did a crime and its not a mistake. Loved it totally dear. This is how people tend to handle such things in life. Not just accepting a single apology. A mature and sensible story.