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hi thanks 4 the beautiful emotional OS! awesome banner! superbly written! Maan chated on Geet! she was shattered and angry! she didn't understand y! Karan helped her! he finally reveals hw it happened! Maan possessive n she taunts him! Geet needed time n took that time! All ends well!

Amazing n very emotional!
i would never forgive people like Maan though but when kids come into picture their future is more important!

Bestest story... you have portrayed geets inner feeling well..

amazing os. so emotional yet beautifully written. loved the cute moments between maan and geet with kids respectively. maan did wrong by cheating geet but its good geet took time and tried reviving the relatonship. great to have a happy ending.

first of all welcome back to gf dear ...missed ur writings alott .
one week before I was craving to read this story again and searched a lot for the link ..but could not find it ..and after one week when I came to online I got to see this story...its a pleasant surprise for me 😃
now coming to the story
I loved this work of urs ...beautifully written
fabulous story ...
I feel so sad for geet ..maan did wrong with her .
I can actually feel the pain of her ...u beautifully shown her pain , her inner turmoil ..
she loves maan but can't able to forgv him for his cheating...its not. easy for her to do that also ...
but she did for their children , and to save their marriage . she is a very strong character .
and about maan ...
he did wrong very wrong ...and the worst thing is that he don't even know why he did it ? he does not have any answer for it .
he can't even bear geet being frdly with other men but he is expecting her to forgv him and give one more chance to him ...
if I was at geet's place maybe I could not have forgive him ...but geet did coz she loves this man crazily .
I liked the end ...I m happy for geet ..she desrv to be happy .
p.s. if possible thn plz repost "o sahiba" also

Amazing story

i readed this before too

enjoyed reading his story again ...

I could understand Geet's turmoil. Hate Maan for what he did, and his lame reason "I don't know, it just happened". I like the way you described Geet's emotions. She loves him dearly, yet can't get over what he had done. Liked her assertiveness when she asked they could only get even if she spends 3 weeks with another man. I thought that was needed to so Maan could understand her perspective. Well written as always!

its so difficult to forgive when your partner in question just strays and that too without a valid reason...
i understand geet poor lady.. well finally maan realized i hope their lives are happy enough.