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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome,beutiful and heart touching story.. Maan na jo vi kia galat kia geet ka saath kyun ki geet ka saath rehta hua wo kisi aur ka saath ho kar geet ko cheat kia uska pyar ko and trust vi thoda aur geet in sab situation ko handel karna ko time leti hai soach na ko yanha baat sirf uski nahi uski bacho ki vi hai aur wo maan sa bahut pyar karti hai uska bina nahi reh sakti aur isiliya apne pyar,rishtey and bacho ka liya maan ko one chance dia hai aur usa mehsoos hai ki maan change hua hai aur apne relation ma truly one chance chahta hai lekin wo pyar aur trust kab wapas ayaga relation ma wo pata nahi aur uska liya kitna time lagega...

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Maan did big mistake cant blame her if she never forgive him but she trying she loves him a lot and also for their children she is ready to give him a chance great story

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

she forgive him!

how did she do that!
one strong women she is...

maybe her family n kids gave her so much of courage

if forgiving was the only option i was given i would have happily killed my self! 🤣

well written ... every emotion at its place...

and yes before i forget WELCOME BACK🤗

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lovepoo

@lovepoo

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wow what an os
I had cried so much
Loved ut

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

awesome os
glad that both r together in d end...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wonderful os. Well written. You are too good in emotions and expressions.

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I have read it again...

I don't know anyone can forgive here Maan, cheating is big thing..

Geet's dilemma well portrayed

A wife can take anything but not share her husband n his cheating..

I still wonder how could ppl cheat their life partner ...

yes Maan is best father but as a husband , may be its heat of the moment but cheating is SIN...

Geet tried her best...Love for him make her forgive him but the trust...

but when trust broken like this there will be crack always ...

not sure it can be heal completely ever , may be time , love...

Edited by Krishna_Sourav - 9 years ago

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Natalya Bedi

@Natalya_bedi

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

I just hate these kind of men...
He just saw geet with other man and he was boiling ...just think what she must have gone through ...shameless maan
A woman should never forgive these kind of men...
But alas we are talking about Maanet...so they need to be together...
Between nice work!!!!!

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muskaan...

@muskaan...

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Nice SS ...I read again, actually thats called power of WOMEN,

Men cant even see their wife or girlfriend to anyone even their friend,but women can forgive their grave mistake for the sake of family, for their love..

I can say it is really difficult for Geet to forget maan as mistake can be done once but more than once same act is not mistake its sin..