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@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Its emotional... It's beautiful.. It have everything ... Everything...maan did a mistake... A mistake which cant be rectify. ... 😭 u really made me cry ... Cant express what I felt ... Hats of to your skills...

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saro

@saro

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Emotional story... Geet s great ... Maan ...lame excuse for his sin...men r men... Soul touching story... Weld one...

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Superb OS.

Very very sentimental & realistic

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mani24

@mani24

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Asalamalaikum taslima, felt sooo gud reading this beautiful piece again 😊

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SGuru

@CuteTommy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

wow..that was an amazing story...

filled with emotions n the turmoil Geet had gone through... not only Geet but Maan too...

at the last everything ended well/..

Geet was strong enough to let go off Maan,s sin n able to accept him back all because of love...

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kyara123

@kyara123

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Awesome story...loved the writing.
But Geet should not have forgiven Maan...not even for her kids...sure Maan was great as a father but as a husband he sucks. He had sex thrice with another lady and then he went back to home & had sex with his wife...Disgusting. Geet can never trust him again...the insecurity will always be there. Loving someone doesn't mean to forgive all their sins. After all this Maan really didn't deserve to have a happy normal life with Geet again...well it's just my perspective!

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Naimisa

@Naimisa

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

I don't know how to put my thoughts to words but i would like to try..

The story was beautifully written specially the emotions that Geet went through...The fight with your own emotions and hoping against hopes for what you know is not true.It is so beautifully potrayed..i could feel what Geet was going through...Its true many Geets around the world finally end up in the same situation where they can't leave because of children or the loved ones...the only difference is real life Maans do not regret at all instead they make the Geet's feel guilty...The real life Geet's are made finally responsible for infidelity saying your nagging and arguing were reason for the extreme step and yes you are not allowed to do same...

The question asked by Geet if she did the same...its so difficult to ask ... specially when u know the answer...the answer of maan...

.honestly till the end I wished maan had some reasonable reason and somewhere like geet even I wanted to know why...what went wrong...

I hoped it was misunderstanding and maan proves innocence...I hoped a happy ending but this is what happens in reality...

If I go on it wont end...

I would love to read more from you...

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