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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

Its so nice to read something by you, after so long. Especially something that is evocative of hope towards the end. I loved how the story played on the senses, I could smell the scents, hear the sounds and see the people almost as if I were on the same grounds as the two. Made me nostalgic, and sort of dredged up memories of school days and left me with something bittersweet. It was magical! :D

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

Rae, that was beautiful. Something old, something new ... something blue is how you've left me feeling. A feeling of melancholia at the love and regret simmering in him. A decade of it. But the "it's been too long" leaves me with a fledgeling hope of maybe, just maybe ...

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

this was beautiful. a meeting of once upon a time lovers after 8 years.was it only arnav who's heart had been broken? khushi must have been equally hurt. it were circumstances which didn't lead them to be together. now it's all going to change for the better. though it was as perfect as a one shot can be, can we please get a 2nd and last part to it?

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

I hope it has happy ending

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Can we pls hv another part... With a happy ending..

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

"One sight of her and his abyss found light."

Such a gorgeous line, Rae.

I haven't read any of your work since December. And I had forgotten how in all your work there is this thread of sweet pain. Ouch. I could feel the turmoil within her as he approaches her---she is trying so hard to appear unaffected and gathered---while her heart must have been aching.

Also like the way you switched point of view. Nicely done.

Will look forward to seeing where this goes.

And thank you for the PM.

---maya

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful story dear...thanks for the PM

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

This shot reminds me of those high school romances which doesbt end successfully .People move on yet a sweet pain remain in you of that lost love .
You should write another part so we can know where it ends.I will prefer happy ending .

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TheGirlofRavens

@TheGirlofRavens

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

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Beautifully written.

Those magical memories vivid even after a decade of dust, drifting to them like a familiar melody as they stood in their each others arms remembering. The melancholy and the unforgettable feelings casting a charm of its own.

This one shot was amazing, evoking sadness word by word until we are all left aching for those lovers.

Something old, something new and now we are left with something to hope.