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Richelle

@Richelle

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Incredibly magnificent!! So much of time lost but the passion for each other is still intense. Loved it😃

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salikaa_chitts

@salikaa_chitts

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wow. It is so beautifully sad. It's really painful for both A & K. The dance made them find a tiny lil bit of solace and yet the pain deepened and they swayed to the sound of music, reminiscing the memories and each other .
It is written so perfectly. The emotions were spot on!
I wish they never have to face so much heartbreak...
I loved the song selection <3
Thanks for the PM :)
- Salikaa :D

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Nivedita137

@Nivedita137

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Something old, something new and something so poignantly written Rae.

They were wrapped in an atmosphere of the familiar, of hurt and memories, of love and lost. of what was and what is. The years never daunting for his yearning to see her, and not an illusion. Her sense of his presence just as sharp as it was. Like a million years would never be enough to wash away what lives a little in them and in the other.

Beautiful Rae, absolutely beautiful. The choice of songs too.

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

nahiii! the story that started 10 years ago and fell offf track at some stage cannot end without a happy ending, even if it means another 10 years of sadness and pain and another OS to bring it to the ending that any story of Arnav and Khushi must always have.

Beautifully wirtten OS but sorry AT dil maange only a happy ending.

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Please please please write more! :(

As usual, beautifully written! :D

Please write more!

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Magnolia007

@Magnolia007

Beginner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Always a pleasure to savor your exquisite pen, Rae. ❤️The poignancy depicted here was like a living force - dark, deep and beautiful. I felt it in my heart and almost under my fingertips too~ it was that tangible :)
Absolutely brilliant. Loved the songs too.

Now waiting for IU :P

Edited by Magnolia007 - 8 years ago

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

It's been too long. Missed you honey

Thank you

Smitha

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

This was so beautiful on how a couple once a pon a time meet after 8 years purely amazing
Also so going to see you writeing again

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Oh Rae..theirs was an incomplete love story and your open ending allows your readers to so many interpretations but I only want yours.. Please a sequel..

The choice of songs evoke so many emotions... It reminds me of their anthem.." Kyon dard hai itna tera pyaar mein "

I was missing your work and you always return with something that only can be penned by you.. Loved it..